I Want to Be Loved
An Advice
EXT. PARKING, HOSPITAL - NIGHT
INSERT: Nanda's car goes into the hospital parking lot.
Nanda car parking. Rafi came down with an umbrella. Walk towards Nanda's car door. Open door. Nanda down.
Rafi and Nanda walk under one umbrella into the hospital.
CUT TO
INT. INDRI HOUSE - NIGHT
Opening scene: Door open.. Indri entered with a blank look, and his body shivered. Her hair and clothes were wet.
(note : continuity home photo album maih messy yes.)
INDRI
(sound) Ilham..
Suddenly the sound of his house bell.
Indri. Indri then opened the door.
CU. Indri shocked
POV Indri : Which comes Inspiration.
Indri soared happily and immediately held the cheek of Ilham.
INDRI
(happy) Where did you come from!?
Inspiration is just smiling..
Indri stared at full of affection.
BRAINSTORM
Don't you ever stay in Mama again..
Promise to Ham..
Ilham nodded.
INDRI
Now you rest..
Mama will cook your favorite food..
Indri back of the body walking into the kitchen..
INDRI BACK SHOT.
INDRI
Aaahh Mama very much you have come home Ham..
POV Audience: Indri alone..
YONG!!
(Note: This scene is actually a hallucination. But make real yes and Ilham's face should not be made pale as a ghost).
CUT TO
INT/EXT. ICU ROOM - NIGHT
Nanda and Rafi are in the ICU.
(wearing visitor's clothes, so that they are sterile)
Sound of a heart detector.. TIT TUT'S. TIT TUT'S..
Nanda walked in front of Rafi..
Then Nanda opened the curtain.. AREEET!!!!
(note: made dramatic yes)
SLOWMO
POVS. RAFI: The face of Inspiration is still closed Nanda, then slowly Nanda shifted, the face of Inspiration was seen..
THE JREENG!!
(note : Continuity: The state of inspiration is still in a coma, oxygen hose and heart detection device, infusion is still attached.)
CU. The illam who lies in a coma
CU. Rafi's shocked face.
(a great surprise because the face of Inspiration is exactly the same as his)
POV RAFI: The Face of Inspiration
CUT TO CUT Rafi and Ilham's Face.
Rafi flabbergasted, look at Ilham's face.
NANDA
Rafi, this is my future husband..
Brainstorm..
Rafi looked at Nanda for a moment, then watched Ilham return carefully.
RAFFE
His face looks just like mine..
Nanda breathed..
NANDA
That's why I hope so much for your help..
Rafi looked back at Nanda cluelessly. Rafi watched Ilham closely. Groped his finger, as if sensing some strange inner contact. But he still could not believe what was in front of him.
NANDA
I beg you to pretend to be Inspiration, so that his mother Ilham does not grieve because her son is lying in a coma..
Rafi stared at Nanda.
RAFFE
(confused) Wait, a minute..
You mean, his mother doesn't know that his son is in a coma?
Nanda nodded. His face was very sad..
RAFFE
Why did Miss Nanda keep all of this a secret!??
Everywhere, a mother has the right to know
son's condition!
Nanda shook his head and explained softly.
NANDA
If you know, then,
His mother must have hit Fi!
Nanda touched Ilham's hand.
NANDA
Aunty Indri loves Ilham..
He could have destroyed Fi!
I can't afford to squirm it!
CU. Nanda's eyes are glazed..
Rafi was still looking at Ilham.
At that time Rafi and Nanda saw the tears of Ilham dripping.
CU. The tears of Ilham dripped
Nanda took a tissue and wiped away the tears of Ilham.
Rafi did not have the heart to see it.
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EXT. FRONT ICU - NIGHT
Rafi and Nanda left the room.
At the same time the doctor came and was surprised to see Rafi's face.
PHYSICIANS
(shocked) Mr Ilham?
Nanda quickly shook her head..
NANDA
Not Doctor, this is Mr. Rafi..
The twin of my future husband..
CU. Rafi was shocked and wanted to protest.
Nanda cuts off Rafi's words.
NANDA
How is the Inspiration now, Doctor?
Is there progress?
The doctor sighed, his face looked concerned.
PHYSICIANS
Mr. Ilham's condition is increasingly concerning.
He could still survive this long, though,
because it is still supported by medical equipment. The possibility that Mr. Ilham could be conscious and healed is very, very small..
YUMMY..! Nanda's shocked.
So did Rafi..
