
EXT. RAVINE LIPS - NOON
Nanda who saw all that from the top of the ravine was in shock.
POVS. NANDA: Rafi looks very sick
Nanda panicked..
NANDA
(hysterical screaming)
YOOONGGG!!! YONG!!!!
Nanda swept his gaze around the hill. Empty, deserted no one. Nanda was panicking.
Nanda again gawked down, about to see Rafi's condition.
CU. Her feet are on the tip of her lips..
THE SSREEETT!! A little bit of ground and rock cracked, small rocks collapsed falling
CU. A little dirt and rock crumbled dusty
TENSE UP! SREET!!
Nanda was startled and reflexively stepped back.
The panicked Nanda didn't know what to do..
NANDA
(anxious/panic)
Oh my God, what should I do..
I can't possibly stay here alone..
Under the scorching sun, Nanda seemed to be sitting in despair.
There is a faint sound of the car and the disco song koplo/ dangdut/region (please adjust it.) is installed with a loud and loud sound.
BACKGROUND MUSIC: JEDAK!JEDUK!THE JEDAK!JEDUK!
INSERT: Seen Pick UP car vegetable transporter passing on the other side of the road/bottom of the hill/Street..
(please adjust)
The longer the sound of music is heard more clearly.. Nanda's face looked like it was gaining hope..
Nanda immediately ran towards the pick up car. While screaming for help.
NANDA
TOLOOONG!! A TOLOONG!!!
But Nanda continued to pursue the pick up car..
INSERT: The driver and the crutches, coolly rocking the head listening to music in the car.
Nanda kept trying to catch up until his breath seemed to be burning..
CU. Nanda's hand was like pointing towards Pick's car while shouting for help with all his strength..
NANDA
(strong screaming) TOLOOONG!!! STOP IT!!!
TOLOOONG!!!!
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INT.MOBIL, HILL TRAIL - NOON
Along with that the driver looked at the side rearview mirror of the car.
BCUS. GLASS REARVIEW CAR PICK UP : Nanda sticking out/waving hand..
The driver was shocked. Turn off the song in the car.
Nanda screams for help. TCIITT!!! The driver stopped the car.
PICK UP DRIVER
(wonderful) Why girls??
(note: if possible the tone of speech of the Sundanese)
I heard Nanda's voice asking for help again..
INSERT: Seen from a distance Nanda ran as hard as he could towards the pick up.
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Nanda got to the side of the pick up driver's car door.
PICK UP DRIVER
Neng, why are you alone here?
Nanda was panicking.
NANDA
(panicked) Sir. Please I. (pointing towards Rafi falling) My friend fell into the abyss there.. Please Sir..
(worrying/panic)
I'm begging...Help her..
YONG!!!
CU. Nanda's face was parched..
CU. Nanda's eyes glazed over
CU. Kenek and the driver looked at each other.
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EXT. ANOTHER ROAD HILL/LIP RAVINE - NOON
Pick Up car has reached the lip of the nearest ravine to the location of Rafi's fall.
(move the location yes from the lip of the nearest ravine where Rafi fell before, so it is not too high and not difficult to carry up.).
The driver and Nanda got off the front.
Kenek down from the back of the pick Up.
PICK UP DRIVER
(on Nanda) From here, the distance is closer to the nolonginnya, neng!
Nanda nodded quickly.
The driver towards the back of the pick up picks up a mine rope that is quite long and thick..
CU. The driver's hand took 2 pieces of rope rolls that were quite long and strong.
The driver and the clerk immediately approached the lip of the ravine, tying the two ropes on the tree very tightly.
PICK UP DRIVER
Strong?
FIZZY
Strong! Sok or buruan down..
The driver then prepares to get off..
Kenek..
Nanda looked very worried.
NANDA
(anxious/panic) You have to hold on Rafi...
CU. Nanda's face panicked.
CU. Nanda squeezed out his finger..
(nanda Necklaces)
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EXT. BOTTOM RAVINE – NOON
The scene opened as Rafi while holding her wounded stomach groaned in pain.
RAFFE
(groaning in pain) AARRGHHH!!!
(note : Rafi is injured, but still able to get up, walk even though the pain is extraordinary.show that Rafi is tough to face anything, not easily discouraged and also stun!).
Rafi tried to get up. But it can't and is even more painful.
RAFFE
(groaning in pain) AARRRGhhh!!
Rafi tried to regulate her breathing, as it held back the pain.
(note : the pain is still made cool. no more yes.thank u ).
CU. Rafi's face looked pale, enduring the pain
THE SREEET!!
CU. The rope was thrown from the top..
CU. One rope extends almost to the bottom of the ravine.
(note : This rope will later bind Rafi)
INSERT: The driver who has been tied to the rope swiftly from the bottom of the ravine down, with a stand to one stone, to another stone that is on the wall of the ravine/cliff/hill..
INSERT: Nanda looks very anxious and panicked
The driver had reached the bottom of the ravine where Rafi fell.
The driver rushed towards Rafi who was not far away.
CHAUFFEUR
Come on, sir. (looking at Rafi) Still can walk..?
RAFFE
(moves slowly) Can..
The driver helped Rafi get up..
Rafi again groaned in pain.
RAFFE
(groaning in pain) Aaargghh!!!
CHAUFFEUR
(anxious follow) Still strong sir?
Can continue?
RAFFE
(starting ngos-ngosan-nodding)
I'm not okay.. Come..
The driver pulled Rafi towards the rope.
Rafi was still holding onto her stomach, enduring the pain..
The driver tied a stretched rope that had previously been tied to Rafi's body.
They take a swing. While riding Rafi.
CU. Rafi's one foot rested on the wall.
CU. The other leg rests on the wall of the ravine..
SREET!! Rafi's leg slipped..
RAFFE
(sickly) Aaarrggghh!!!
Almost fell. The driver held him. A TAP!
Every step Rafi foot stepped up, Rafi groaned in pain, but tried to ride assisted by the driver (dramatis).
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EXT. RAVINE LIPS – NOON
The scene opens with the driver already managed to bring Rafi up.
Kenek seemed to help the driver memapah Rafi who was exhausted and weak.
Nanda looked anxiously at Rafi who looked in great pain..
NANDA
Rafi what's sick Fi??
RAFFE
(ngos-ngosan-weak) My stomach hurts Nan..
It doesn't feel good, like a prick..
THE JREENG!
Nanda was getting anxious.
Rafi pale withstood the pain.
Nanda asked the driver to drive them to the hospital.
NANDA
Sir, please take us to the hospital..
The driver looked at the pick that had vegetables..
Nanda saw that.
NANDA
Don't worry, you don't have to worry,
The loss, I'm definitely changing..
(beat)Love me your phone number, Father,
let my assistant take care of everything..
Pick Up drivers look bad..
PICK UP DRIVER
(Not good at it) Sorry Neng..
NANDA
It's nothing Sir..I understand it..
Let's go now..
The pick up driver nodded. Rafi was swept and raised to the back of the car.
Rafi was laid between the vegetables by the kneecap and the driver.
Nanda sat down next to him, staring anxiously.
The driver and the driver got into the car. Car drove..
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EXT. STREET – NOON
INSERT: The pick up car carrying Rafi drove between the deserted hills.
The driver and the driver sat in front..
INSERT: The sun shines with its light. Its blazing light blinds the eyes.
Rafi who was lying weak, closed her eyes.
Rafi looked sick and tired.
Nanda sat next to him staring anxiously..
CU. Nanda's hair was unraveling, blushing in the wind..
The car passed through the rocky road..
CU. The wheel of the pick up car hit the little rock
GUSRAK!!
Car shaken. Rafi was also shaken and her body shook. Rafi's in pain.
RAFFE
(sobbing in pain) Aaaarrgghh!!!
Nanda saw that getting anxious..
Nanda looked at Rafi as if Rafi was an Ilham figure..
(start BAPER)
INSERT BACKGROUND SOUNDTRACK/or baper song
INSERT: FACE OF INSPIRATION
INSERT Flashes: when Ilham figure with Nanda
Nanda seemed guilty..
Nanda's reflexes grabbed Rafi's hand..
CU. Nanda's hand grabbed Rafi's hand.
CU. Nanda's hand held Rafi's..
It was as if Nanda was holding the hand of Inspiration.
Nanda rubbed Rafi's face gently..
NANDA
(bluff) You have to stay afloat..
When Rafi's hand was held by Nanda, and her face was rubbed gently.
Rafi who was exhausted and half conscious, slowly opened her eyes..
Because of the glare of the sun. Rafi blinked her eyes.
CU. Rafi's eyes blinked due to the glare of the sunlight.
POVS. RAFI: A woman holds her hand. Still in the form of silhouette because against the glare of the sun..
Rafi opened her eyes again.
POV RAFI: the face of a female silhouette with her hair unraveled in the wind and then clearly visible in her eyes..
Maya's Face..
Rafi sees Nanda as Maya..
INSERT: Maya's soft glowing face smiles at Rafi..
Rafi returned a small smile, then squeezed out Maya's hand. They also hold on tight.. Rafi felt like she was holding Maya's hand, but it was Nanda's..
CU. Rafi and Nanda's hands held tight.
WIDE SHOT: Behind a pick-up car driving across a deserted green hill, and under the scorching sun.
Rafi was lying down, and Nanda was sitting beside her with her hair unraveling and blushing in the wind.
Rafi and Nanda's hands clasped tightly together.
(*note : Shot this if possible also taken using a drone yes)
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EXT. HOSPITAL (Bogor hospital) – NOON
THE BOGOR HOSPITAL
SILENT ACT :
Rafi laid on a brangkar. Nanda and nurse thrust cage. Nanda holding Rafi's hand..
SLOW MOTION: But Rafi who is not strong even fainted.
Nanda was getting more worried
NANDA
(anxious) Rafiiii...
Nanda became more anxious and more guilty..
(Continuity wardrobe stay awake huh. Thanks)
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INT. HOSPITAL (FRONT IGD) – NOON
CU. Rotating bracang wheel.
CU. Fast steps Sisters shoes
CU. Quick steps Nanda boots
Nanda was getting anxious.
NANDA
(anxious) Rafi. wake Fi. Banguun..
Nanda and sister get to the front of IGD. Nanda wants to come in igd. But the sister told Nanda to wait.
SISTER
I'm sorry, I can't go in..
Please wait here..
Nanda nodded slowly. Door opened. The nurse pushed the cage in.
Door closes..
Nanda was waiting at the door in alarm.
Nanda pacing uneasily.
NANDA
(anxious) Oh God..
I hope Rafi is okay..
(spirit) Please Save him O Allah..
I'm begging..
Nanda seemed guilty. His feelings are mixed..
INTERCUTS
HOSPITAL (IGD ROOM) - NOON
SILENT ACT :
Rafi looked as if she was lying pale. Fainting in bed.
The doctor assisted the nurse to do medical treatment to Rafi very sprightly.
The doctor examined Rafi's pupils.
The nurse checked the tension..
The doctor examined and pressed slowly on Rafi's chest, abdomen.
For a moment the doctor was silent.
The nurse looked at the doctor. The doctor seemed to give instructions.
The nurse nodded quickly hurried away from it.
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HOSPITAL (IGD ROOM) – NOON
Nanda looked very agitated waiting around the IGD door front.