I Am No King's

270.5 - GA, Promo, and Tips on Writing the last par sentence(?)

Hi Haiii…..

For GA, there is no standing first. It's only been a week. Haha. Author only reminds pPeriode Give away third is June 21 to July 19 (4 weeks). 1 user with the most accumulated votes in that time span will get the physical book "I am No King" volume 1 and volume 2 for free! No need to pay the price either. Ongkir will be borne by the author.

And, just like before, there is 1 other condition. Give away will be given to users who vote more than 2000 points in a span of 4 weeks. So, if by chance Number 1 does not reach 2000 points, too bad, Give Away will be canceled. Wkwkwkwkwk

Then, the author again emphasized the procedure if you want a promo in I am No King. Please read. And, if there is still a promo in the comment field, get ready to comment “F**K OFF!”. wkwkwkwkwkwkwk

　

And, finally, following on from last week, tips and tricks make sentences neat and efficient. Directly, here are tips and tricks that the author can provide.

1. Minimize word usage “ini”\, “itu”\, “-nya”

The use of some of these words can be said tricky. Wh why? Because in dialogue or in one's mind, the use of these three words is arguably normal, natural. However, beyond that, as in the narrative of the story, these three words are arguably misplaced.

And, just like last week's alternative, if you can find alternative words “ini”, “itu”, and “-nya”. Instead of using “ini”, “itu”, and “-nya”, just mention it directly. Suppose

　

　

The sword was capable of cutting through mountains easily

The Sword Executor was able to cut through mountains easily

Executors were able to cut through mountains easily

　

　

The first example is often used. Actually the use of “itu” is not wrong, but unfortunately in this context is rather inappropriate. Word “ini”, “itu”, or his “” can be used on the second sentence, but not on the first sentence. If the word “ini”, “itu”, or “-nya” appears in the first sentence in the paragraph, what objects are described? You should remember the words “ini”, “itu”, or “-nya” are pronouns. Use it after it appears.

In the first sentence of the paragraph, the second example is more suitable. However, if the story has been explained that “Executor” is a sword, you can eliminate the word sword. However, like last week, use the three words interchangeably. Suppose the first sentence uses “Executor”, the second sentence “Itu”, the third sentence “Executor” again.

Or better yet, there are other names. Suppose first sentence “Executor”, second sentence “itu”, third sentence “Sword Punishment”. Create sentence structure and dynamic selection. As explained from the beginning, repetition can make readers bored.

And, remember, minimize the difference in meaning by eliminating. If the mindset is “minimize”, you will be more careful with the placement. So, this can minimize misplaced.

　

　

Compact, efficient, and short are generally better. However, there are times when length, looping, and making the reader hold his breath can be used. However, remember, do not be too long, maximum 20 words.

The short sentence length setting technique is the technique of arranging the pace in writing and story. You could say this is advanced after neat sentence writing. If writing a sentence can be neat, this is the next level.

Suppose you wrote a fight scene. It would be better if you avoid short sentences with many dots. In fact, if you can, put two sentences together either with a comma or a conjuncture.

Wh why? In a fight, you want the reader to hold their breath. When holding your breath, the reader will unconsciously read faster. The effect of holding your breath and reading quickly also affects the increase in heart rate. Some of these things make the reader as if more “ engaged” in the fight.

However, this only applies if the fight is relatively balanced and the “ really-” fighter fights. If one of the figures could already read all the movements of the opponent, he would be relatively relaxed, right? Not holding my breath, not holding my breath. If you write from a calm character when fighting, normal or even short sentences will be better.

However, do not be long or short continuously. If the length continues, the reader will be out of breath after that the heart rate even drops dramatically. If this is the case, the reader becomes more “capek” to read more. The same thing happens if the short continues. Because the reader is told to stop, continue to stop, become irritated yourself, right? Both of these things lead to the same thing, the reader skip. And, remember, most skips will lead to a bored impression.

So, start thinking about when to put long and short sentences.

　

　

Then, for the next one, I don't know. It feels, to write neatly, the suggestions of the last few weeks are enough. For the arrangement of paragraphs, plots, and so on can be said the style of each author. So, the author can not give much input. And the author is forgetful too. So, maybe there's still something to say but forgetfulness.

If you have questions about writing, just comment. Will author a short reply, then make the full discussion and details in the next chapter.

Yes, someone asked about the author's work. Well, the author can be said to be a writer as well as an assistant editor. Why assistant editor? Think of it in the office of the author of the higher editor position. And to occupy the position, must wait for an empty position. And, since the current editor has not retired or resigned, my position is still in the assistant editor. wkwkwkwkwk

"Then mending directly promote using the real name thor, more convincing."

Someone said it like that. Unfortunately, the author disagrees. Why do authors not use real names but instead pen names? Because the author must separate work with hobby writing. I mean, in "I am No King" alone there has been a lot of violence, justification for murder, child abuse, child murder, elderly murder, sexual violence, even sexual violence in minors.

If you use your real name, the office where the author works will also be affected. They will be considered to employ psychopaths or immoral people. And if this spreads, even if the author resigns, the image of psychopaths and immoral people will still stick. The author can't get the job done. So, no thanks. The author will not use his or her real name. Who knows the author's real name is only the author's workplace and several co-authors in one circle.

And, remember.

“Write, Edit, Publish”