Mystery Old House (STAGED REVISION PROCESS)

Grandma Siti//

"Ah, sorry grandma. My friend is like this, said the doctor Amper his brain was gone. Understand if she yells like this." I joke, but Tania doesn't like it.

"I'm sorry, Grandma, because my screams have disturbed my grandmother as a road user. Once I apologize, Grandma." sidelines Tania, lowered her head in front of the grandmother.

"Grandma's not angry, just they don't like to hear the noise on this street so grandma just remembers you." said grandma who we don't know her name.

"They?who are they, grandma?" ask us both at the same time

"Those you can't see, but you can feel their existence." Grandma replied to us.

"Put, let us go home. Nih grandma increasingly digress his talk, cave so afraid to know. Let's go home." whispered Tania

"Yes, you're right. Let's go home" I said

"If that's how we say yes first, then again we apologize for that." said me and Tania passed away, but the grandmother called us back.

"Hey son, wait..."

We turned around to see the grandmother.

"What's the matter, Grandma?" asked the two of us in unison, Tania occasionally swallowed her saliva out of fear.

"Why are there so many black clouds around you?are you having trouble with them?" the grandmother exclaimed, pointing at me.

"Black cloud?the problem with them?what did grandma say?I have absolutely no problem with anyone grandma." I said

"You lie, they keep following you don't you feel it?you must have made trouble with them, otherwise how could a wisp of black clouds keep following you." said the grandmother again.

"Daughter, this grandma knows your problem don't let her be an indigo child. What if we ask her for help, so she can help you" Tania whispered

"Yes you're right, then I'll tell him the truth."

"You want to get out, are you sure?deep down in your heart you say that you yourself want to play more with them, how could you possibly want to get out of this matter."

"Gosh, even this grandma can figure out what my mind is. He's really indigo, like Roy Kiyosi."

"Grandmother can not stand for long, what if we find a seat to be able to tell a story longer. Do you agree?" sergeant the Grandma.

"Of course it can be granny, let's sit in the barn over there." Tania asked

"Tania, why did you answer that?I haven't agreed to it." My inner self

I also had to follow them from behind, actually Grandma was very mysterious had not introduced herself to talk pretentiously with the two of us. Is he a child kidnapper?no it's impossible, because his age is so old how could he have the manpower to kidnap us. Once we got to the stall, we sat down for a while and ordered some tea and bread for the match.

"Mom, order sweet tea 3 yah, same bread 5" I said, while waiting for our order came the grandmother began to say something.

"Include the name of Siti's grandmother, sorry if you have spoken a lot while not yet acquainted" said Nek Siti

"Oh, no problem, Grandma. Introduce my name Princess, and this is my friend Tania. Salken.." I cried.

"Grandmothers have long had this ability, can see what you can't see, sometimes grandmothers also often help them to get out of problems that blend with the mystical. Once grandma saw you turn around, grandma had a bad feeling that happened to you.seems like she wants your life" said Nek Siti.

"Well because grandma already knows, then please help me but....after I finish everything, is it possible?" I was embarrassed when I said it.

"Of course grandma can help you, but unfortunately your intention to escape from this problem is very small, even your intention to know it is much greater. Hedeh, don't you know the consequences of playing with something like this?it's not your life you want, it's your whole family. He wants that, because he feels disturbed by your existence." said Nek Siti.

"Who is she, Grandma?why does he feel disturbed by my existence?" much

"He, is the guardian of the Mystery Old House that you are investigating right now" replied Nek Siti.