Mystery Old House (STAGED REVISION PROCESS)

THE LIGHT!

Heard the sound of someone crying, like it was the voice of father and mother.Am I still alive?or I'm hallucinating again right now.

I kept trying to open my eyes, and see who was crying? but all my views felt very blurred.

how long have I been lying?so they can't make me see very clearly, they all look like shadows.

"Don't you wake up?." asked father and mother in a very anxious voice, seeing me open my eyes.

I wanted to answer my father and mother's questions, but my throat hurt so much to make a sound.I tried to keep my voice up.

"I-iya ma'am" I replied with a forced voice.

It turned out that the giggle was real, my neck felt so painful that I could not even make the slightest sound.

"Paa, how about we take the daughter to the hospital.mama feel that her voice is very different!" my mother said in a panic.

"Ayoo" said the father hurriedly helping me to get out of bed.

But from the opposite direction I saw grandma and sister coming to the father with, very hasty gesa.like his grandmother wanted to talk to the father.

"Let mother bring her!" exclaimed grandma, with a scary face like I don't want to be under the hospital.

"But ma'am, look at the princess' neck so blue that her voice starts to feel different!!" obviously mom pointed at me.

"True ma'am." replied the father again, who helped the mother speak.

Actually I don't want to be downstairs, because I'm afraid to hear the strange sound again there.it will only make me uncomfortable later.

"What if you take him to the hospital, and the doctor says he doesn't have any pain? what are you gonna do?" ask grandma again

"I.it can't be mom" said mom and dad simultaneously.

"Do you know the cause of your child like this?if you want her to recover, then let mom bring her for treatment!!" granny again

Like his face mother and father began to sour, because of hearing the words of the grandmother earlier.now they can only obey the words of the grandmother only.

"Alright mom!" tell father by passing the request of grandmother.

"Ukhukk..ukhukk.grandmother I want a drink!" exclaim me with a forced voice, to speak.

"It's a drink.drink it slowly!" review grandma by giving me a bottle of water.

I didn't say a word anymore, my view was only focused on the path we were going on right now.actually I also didn't know where grandma was going to take me.

^^^^^

Finally we stopped at a hut house near the riverbank, when we came there was an old grandfather who came to greet us.

"Come in!!" said the old man

We went in and sat in his house, just as his grandfather had known that we were coming, so he had prepared a drink in front of us.

And the grandmother started talking to the grandfather, but using the language of Java.

"Eyang, our iki sing daughter rembugan wingi what sing dideleng saka mbah want?" said grandma

"Ora slick!!" reply to the grandfather by looking at me!just scare me.

"What is sing ora becik eyang?" ask grandma again, but brother's hand from the side is holding my shoulder.

"I will make nerangake yen dheweke ora aha ing kene." replied the grandfather, with a gaze that continued towards me.

"Abik banjur mbah!" granny again.

"Pasrahake marang putu sampeyan so that bruises mentioned the cross" said the grandfather again, while giving a bag of objects.

"Satur nuwum mbah!" said grandma.

that's what I heard, and then Grandma took me home.

But!!!