Mystery Old House (STAGED REVISION PROCESS)

Mystery Old House (STAGED REVISION PROCESS)
It's locked!



It turned out to be the sound of a kuntilanak ghost's leg, without wasting time I pulled my hand tania to run fast and entered into a room to hide for a while.


In this stuffy room the ghostly voice began to sound giggling, when hearing it made all my hair goosebumps I just wanted to scream but felt like something was stuck in my throat.


"God!what creature was that? why does it look so scary? we need to get out now!" sighed tania who wanted to open the door, but was blocked by my hand.


"Don't he still be outside to wait for us if you come out, will surely die blindly looking at his face.Are you not afraid to look him in the eye?" shrivel me by still blocking the hand tania to open the door.


"Huhoo! so what do we do now?" tania asked with a loud cry.


"Shuttt! you don't cry, he's outside waiting for us." I'm clear by covering his mouth with my hands.


In between the crying tania, the ghost laughed again with a big make the whole room that was silent became echoed because of that voice.


"We need to get out!" firmly tania who pushed me to fall, and he came out of the room.I can not hold his leg again he has run fast.


"Tania!" I shouted, trying to call him, to stop and return to the room with me. Because I could not stay silent to see things like this, I also chased after him.


But because he ran so hard, I don't know which room he's hiding in. This is what makes me so upset about him.


"Hihihihihi." The ghostly voice came close, and it felt like being behind me made my hair stand up again.


"Ohhhhh!!" I cried out in terror, and ran swiftly down the long steps of the house.


What I'm doing right now is hiding out in what room, and I think it's almost night time, because the whole room is getting dark.


Now I'm in the upper room, but I can't see what's interesting to investigate about this old house because it's starting to look dark.


"Ah, I'm starting to feel hungry now" I said in a small voice, then let out a long sigh by sitting under the floor.


(sleeping for a moment.).


I woke up to the sound of a very strong door kick outside, like someone was coming.But who is it?


"It's 08:00 pm now, so hungry..how about the state of tania now?" I said with a small helpless voice.


I opened the door slowly and out of the room, I tried to dare to face what was in front of me right now, without feeling any fear.


I don't think about any creature I'm going to meet in this house, just so I can get out there so I'm not afraid to meet any creature.


"Tania! tania! come out, where are you?" I shouted, trying to make a big noise, so that he could hear me wherever I was.


"My daughter is here, help me.His door is locked from the outside!" sahut tania from inside the locked room.


"Well wait for me, I'll find something that can open this door.you wait for me." I said from outside the door.


"Okay, don't be long, I'm waiting for you." he's on the inside.


**BERSAMBUNG😊**sorry yes if the author is still often typo or there is a flow that is not connected, because the author is still learning.do not forget also vote, like, and comment if you think there is still less okay.😆