Mystery Old House (STAGED REVISION PROCESS)
THE LITTLE BOY GHOSTS
Strange when I heard the voice very clearly, but when I saw there was no one in the kitchen.
"What's the put?why are you so surprised." asked mother came to me
"Ti..kok ma'am" I replied with a brick.
"Have you watched television first, let mom cook food for you." tell mom while stepping into the kitchen to cook
"Well ma'am." answered me.
Fear and horror began to haunt my mind, did I hear wrong? but it didn't sound very clear in my ears...
(Finished eating)
After I finished eating Mom went back to her room, while I sat watching television.
"It's been cold for 2 hours it's raining incessantly." I murmured inwardly
"Hiksss..hikss...hikss.." the sound of a child's crying.
"Whose neighbor's son is crying?" ask me in my heart, regardless of the crying child.
"Hikss..hikss"..hikss" the sound of her crying was all powerful, making me uncomfortable.
"Joshaha.kok as powerful as it's crying!"
I began to get upset, and opened my door to see where the crying child was...
"There was no one in front of the house, but where did the little boy sound from? it's probably the neighbor's child" I thought to myself, and went back inside the house
(back to television)
As I watched the television seriously the sound of the cry of the little boy began to be heard again.Jeez this is starting to piss me off!
I went out in my raincoat and carried an umbrella so as not to rain, and began to look for where the sound of the crying of the little boy was.
"Hikss.hikss.." The voice began to sound again, but this time it sounded very small.
I looked around our residential street to find the whereabouts of the crying little boy.
"That's it.." I found the crying little girl, she was sitting behind a tree next to my house.
Her clothes were soaked, she sat with her body curled up with legs.Pity once I approached the boy.
(I think he curled his body up to keep warm)
"Hi dik, what are you doing here?" ask me by patting his shoulder.
"Sik, what are you doing here?are you hungry?" ask me again
(the little boy did not answer)
What's wrong with this sister?I asked but he did not answer.
"Dik,ayo take shelter in the house of my brother first.the rain fell as fast as possible, I'm not afraid you'll get sick" persuaded me that he wanted to talk
(not answering at all)
I mentioned that he didn't answer my question at all, but he could cry.Isn't that so weird?
"Dik.ayo went to my sister's house first so that you could dry up, if you continue to be here you can get sick" I said by persuading her gently
Since he did not answer, I crouched down before him and saw his pale face as if he was very high.
"Dik, what's your name?" ask me gently
He didn't answer, just looked me in the eye.I feel so sorry to see this little boy.
"Come to my sister's house!" I pulled his ice-cold hand to go under the tree.
He said, but when he got to my house he refused to come in.
"Let's go in. Don't be afraid, I won't hurt you." persuade me not to fear me.
But he still did not want to enter as well, he just kept silent in front of my door.
"Pukk" Grandma patted me on the shoulder strongly, making me shocked.
"Grandmother.." I shouted in shock
"What are you doing in front of the door?wearing a raincoat and carrying an umbrella?" asked Grandma in surprise to see me
"This sister Nek.adik does not want to go in, break out of the heavy rain" I answered the grandmother while turning her back to the sister
"Sister?" grandma was astonished
"Yes" answered me again
"Let's look back!" my grandmother told me to
"It's in.." I said I stopped because I saw a little boy who was not there
"Where?" ask grandma
