Mystery Old House (STAGED REVISION PROCESS)

HAPPINESS

With a feeling of great sadness, my brother took me to visit the boy along with him to the hospital.During the trip brother can only hold his tears so as not to doubt.

It seems like you really feel guilty, even if he didn't hit the kid, but how else? it's brother's destiny.

I kept looking at my sister with her sad face, who continued to drive slowly, making me feel sorry for her, like never seeing her experience something like this.

"Sister, do you want to cry?" ask me, with a speech that like to mocked her, so as not to make the atmosphere of silence in the car.

"Crying! you think your brother is, little boy?just because of a problem like this" replied the sibling, but still turned his gaze away from my face.

"Ohh that's it, so why don't you dare look at me if you don't cry." I chuckled inwardly at the answer.

"It-it's because.." Brother's answer stumbled again, like being afraid that my answer was correct.

"Have the princess knows, if the brother is already big.definitely not want to cry in front of his sister.yes right?" say me again

Aishh!my last words were not even answered by my brother, he focused on driving a car.

(Until at RS.Permata Indah at 02:21 pm)

I had just set foot into the hospital yard, I had heard many strange sounds.The sound of shouts, laughter, moans and cries of someone I did not know.

All of these voices are squealing my ears, they are not stopping to make a sound.Either what makes them continue to sound!

"Sister, can we get this over with sooner?I've been uncomfortable for too long in this hospital!" I said, in a slightly high tone to big brother.

"All right!" replied big brother, nodding his head slowly.

Arriving in front of the child's room, I opened his door and told me to enter simultaneously with him.I just follow the will of my brother.

"How is it, joy's state?" ask the sister to her friend who is sitting waiting for the child to wake up.

"The doctor said it was impossible to get up because the head wound was so bad!" replied brother friend while covering his face, with his palm.like feeling guilty to himself.

I ventured to look at the boy, to see how badly the injury was on his head.

"God!isn't this the girl who took shelter in the tree yesterday!" I shouted in shock, while covering my mouth with my own hands.

"No brother.I came out for a moment, brother" I said very nervously, because my screams were what astonished them.

I came out of the room and walked around the edge of the hospital garden, thinking about it with great confusion.

"Did I see it wrong yesterday?but how could his pale face be so clearly seen by me!how could I have seen it wrong." I murmured inwardly

While thinking such a thing, I heard that strange voice again.It made me so upset, that I could not think clearly.

"Araghhhh! can you all shut up! you guys made me not think!" I shouted with a fall sitting in the middle of the park, like a man who was crazy.

Can you shut up?I just want to remember what happened yesterday, so please stop screaming and laughing.

"Princess!" my brother called out to me, with a happy face.

"What's up, brother?" ask me, but still sitting in the garden.

"Why are you sitting here?is there no other place?" reply brother, while giving both his hands to help me get up.

"Emh..Well, is there a sister looking for me?" I switched the topic of the discussion of brother, so that he did not ask too many questions.

"The boy is dead!" said brother again with great excitement, like new in spite of one problem.

"Thank God, then let's take another look, brother" I said with great pleasure as well.

"Ayoo" exclaimed brother happily....

ME!

I myself also do not know, since when I began to be able to hear the sound of strange noises and whispers, but certainly it was since I met the mysterious grandmother yesterday (Nek Siti).Which makes me experience something like this, continuously.

One more thing.I really want to go back to the old house, but the current situation is not supportive.just relax I will definitely try to re-enter the old house!...

Connect😊.Please be understood if there are words that are still typo or others, because I am only a beginner writer who wants to learn to be a reliable writer.Thank you also for those who have read...😊