Mystery Old House (STAGED REVISION PROCESS)

LITTLE BOY GHOSTS

Where did the little boy go?did he run away for fear of seeing Grandma?

"Tad.tadi there is a daughter Nek who beragis under the tree beside our house, so out of pity I tried to persuade her to come to the house to dry her body.Tap.but" I did not continue my words

"Other times if you want to help someone, surely he was human or not?" said grandma

"mu mean Grandma?" I said with wonder

"Just ask yourself, what did your Grandma mean" she replied

(i just fell silent, looking at the wrinkled face of my grandmother because I was elderly)

"What did Grandma mean?why didn't grandma explain what she meant?" I murmured in my heart

"Do you know what time it is?" ask Grandma again

"It's 03:42 Grandma" I answered lightly

"If according to the parents first if it rains at this hour, the delicate creatures will find shelter.such as fear of being exposed to rain stubs" explained the grandmother

"Haah? jad..so according to the grandmother, who did the princess help earlier?" I said to the grandmother who finished speaking

"Who do you think?" return grandma

A body that was ice-cold when I touched, and did not answer at all all my questions, empty eyes like a dazed person.What is the GHOST OF A CHILD?

Suddenly my grandmother said, "Other times if you want to help someone, make sure he really needs help or not.It's a good thing you don't bring him to the house" said the grandmother

"But Nek, the little brother also needs help.Princess pity see he was sitting carried by his own tree in the rain.with clothes soaked." Connect me again with flat eyes and not looking at Grandma

"Yes, but you are wrong to help people" said the grandmother

"Yesa is the princess change first" I said the word with heart, so that grandmother did not take offense to my words earlier.

"Yes already" replied the last granny

In my heart I seemed sad to see the little boy, all of whom I could not do for him.

It seems that the little boy was indeed a Ghost, his innocent face that always made me remember him.It was what disturbed my mind from earlier.

"Tokk..." Nenel knocked on my bedroom door

(Grandma came into my room)

"You need a break" Grandma said softly

I smiled as if to thank Grandma...

"The rain has started to rain again, sleep for a moment...Grandma's gonna wake you up at dinner" Grandma said

"Good grandma" I answered briefly, and Grandma came out of my room

Because my grandmother had come out of my room, I fell asleep in the room.Then I heard the heavy sound of rain...

(Sleeping for more than 2 hours)

I woke up from my sleep, because I heard the voice of my father and brother who had just returned home.They went home in the heavy rain simultaneously.

"Uhh, it's 8 o'clock...You guys home yet?" I said something stale to my father and brother

"Yes" replied the father with the ox

The brother did not answer just silently, like a mute man.

"Putt, tonight brother sleeps in your room ya." whispered brother to my ear

"But if you get caught, I'm sure you'll be upset" I replied

"Calm down, you won't know if you don't talk" he said

"Yes already..emang why the hell brother?" ask me

"Silver is afraid to sleep alone" replied the sister whispering

"Why is it?" ask me lag

" Already, later on big brother explained." replied the brother with a serious speech, such as being in trouble

What's wrong with brother?...