Mystery Old House (STAGED REVISION PROCESS)

GRANDMOTHER GRANDCHILD!

"Tania! wait for me, come back.tania" kept shouting but tania didn't hear, she just ran herself out of the fence.

I was disappointed that our friendship ended like this, I thought he would always be next to me like it or be sad.

He left me alone here, just because of the fear of the other creatures that kept us trapped for so long inside.

"Hey, why are you crying?" there was a tania voice from behind me, which made me immediately look back to see it.

"Tania! didn't you leave me?why are you here again?" I asked in astonishment looking at her face.

"Look you yeah, I wasn't down how to run up the fence" he explained

"I saw you myself, left me here and went out of the fence regardless of me.until I didn't think.!" obviously again.

"What are you talking about? let's run!" she pulled my hand hard.

"My legs can't move, like someone's holding their legs back from leaving." I kept trying to move them, but I still couldn't.

"How come? if we continue like this, we may not be able to go home again next." he said by pacing back and forth, like looking for something he could not find.

"You know where it came from?" I looked very worried, hearing his words.

"I don't know how long we've been in this house, and when we get out the sky is still dark as night.I feel like something's weird." said tania whose eyes were on the iron fence.

"Lantas, how should we? I can't walk right now."

"Look at my daughter I'm thinking of a way to get you out of this house." exclaimed tania.

Hearing his words my heart immediately calmed down, feeling that he was more selfish than me.

"Daughter look, there's someone who's coming." cried tania glad to see there's someone coming, with a fire lamp in his hand.

"Emh.like a grandmother, if I look more carefully." exclaimed tania.

"Grandmother, come here with a flashing light? that's what you see?"

"Yes, his face was not clearly visible because it was covered in a lice cloth" when he had said it like that, my legs began to move back.

"Tania, my legs can be moved! let's get out now!" my sigh pulled her hand and ran towards the gate.

"Wait!" hold him who stopped my path.

"What else is it?" i firmly.

"Grandma, what's right here? did Grandma enter the house wrong? then let's go out the same." invite the tania who all pulled the grandmother's hand as well.

"Tania, what are you doing anyway?you don't know the grandmother, and her hands are cold like ice" I explained, who hit her hand while holding her hand.

"Heheheh, are you afraid? I just want to play lo." exclaimed the granny who laughed at her sharp-fanged teeth.

"played? what does grandma mean?" our jolts were both cool with the grandmother's intentions and words.

"Wait ya." said the grandmother, when the gate that was open a little began to close until the meeting.

"The princess' gate is closed!" said Tania who pointed towards the gate.

"Huh yeah?" surprised me.

"You're here, or if you're not a granddaughter.!!!!!"