Mystery Old House (STAGED REVISION PROCESS)
THE DARK HALLWAY!
At exactly 05:00 in the morning I was standing in front of a tree yesterday when I wanted to help a child, dumbfounded and confused by all this.
"Aren't I in the dark?why are you standing right in front of this tree!"I screamed while looking around me
Burrowing in my ears, said the strange creature that threatened me and until I could no longer think that I was standing in front of this big tree.
"That's an old grandmother's house, I can finally go home" I exclaimed with a joyful voice from happiness, when I turned back to look at the hut reot house.
I was running so fast, because the excitement of being able to go home after so many obstacles made me feel so tired to face it again.
"Dad!" my greeting as I entered the house that was about to collapse, my voice sounded so echoed as I said it, like the house was empty there was no one.
"Dad! grandma! where're y'all?" I looked up at the barren situation, all I saw at that time was a lampshade that lit up so brightly in a room so seedy.
Without a second thought I went in and took the syringe,and keep trying to find Dad, but I feel that this house is a bit longer when I go inside it to see more.
When I was on the threshold of the kitchen door, it all started to feel very dark, quiet, and began to smell a pungent smell of incense.
"Why is this road so long?" I muttered in a quiet voice, but remained alert with my surroundings.I only hope to be early in the morning, so as to find father and leave this place.
"Heu-euh." cried someone behind the dim light from the lampshade I brought, in Sundanese amikal.
I was astonished to hear the sound of someone behind the dim light, while he approached me the smell of incense was as stinging as all around me.
"Who's there?" attack me with a loud voice.
"Not to be afraid!" he answered by appearing before me, the red clothes he was wearing and his hair that decomposed long to the floor.it made my heart beat fast.
"Who's sister?" ask me again in a stammering voice, afraid to see it.
She fell silent and smiled bitterly at me, beginning to feel that there was something suspicious about her bitter smile like wanting to do something.
"If you want to go home, then walk straight to the hallway" he said, trying to convince myself to obey his words.
"Ah, would I really be able to go home if I walked straight down that long aisle?" I said with a little bit of clarity.
The brother did not reply, he instead continued to walk away leaving me with his hair dragged on the floor.Is it true that if I walk straight into this long hallway will be able to return home?
"Yahihui...!" the laughter of someone behind me makes my hair stand up.
"Oahhhh! anyone help me!" I shouted with a run of fear, it almost made the oil that was covered with my lights spilled.
I always ran, and a long hallway was so dark.
"Where am I really?"
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