Mystery Old House (STAGED REVISION PROCESS)

Birthday Party//

I went back to my room, and then I lay down on the bed, closing my eyes.

"Daughter.." Mom's voice sounded so loud as she called out to me, making me get out of bed to meet her immediately.

"Mom, what's calling me?" my question, after reaching the kitchen while curling my hair up.

"Nothing, I ain't no calling you. What do you think, yeah?" mother replied in confusion, but the most pertinent thing here is me.

"Ish Mom kept joking, just now Mom called me. That's why I went downstairs, to see Mom." I explained, pulling a chair from the side of the dining table to sit down.

"Maybe you heard wrong.Have helped Mom prepare dinner." invite Mom, while putting dishes and glasses neatly on the table.

I just wiped the fruits from the refrigerator and placed them on the fruit basket, Dad's voice sounded from the entrance accompanied by the sound of Brother's cry.

"Dad, go home."

"Sister, also home."

Mom and I greeted them together, but I glanced strangely at Big Brother's smile as if he was giving me a secret code but I couldn't understand it.

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"Hey snot boy, what are you thinking about right now?" tanya Brother took my remote, changed the TV broadcast.

"Return my remote, just interrupt. Return it, quickly return it!" I shouted repeatedly, but it was useless not given.

"Gosh, you look like a monster when you're angry. Your face turns ugly, even your body turns big like the Hulk." Said Brother

"I don't want to argue, just give me back my remote. And don't bother me after that." I said with a fake smile.

"If the Princess has already admitted her defeat, then this lowly warrior has also admitted defeat." Sok dramatic sister said it.

"Either but..."

"Son, come here for a minute." Call Dad from the kitchen, we both rushed to Dad.

Seen on the dinner table a birthday cake with candles lit "Congratulations, my daughter's birthday" Dad said as he brought the cake to me.

I don't think they can all remember my birthday when I forgot myself.

"Thank you Dad, thank you everyone." We sang a lot of songs, with warm smiles from every member of the family.

I blew out the candle, then they all cheered happily. Not to forget also Father, Mother, and Brother gave gifts to me.

"Although the gift from Big Brother is not too expensive, please appreciate well. Understand that pocket money has been used all, make the practice in the campus." said Brother while scratching his back head.

"Well, it turns out that the soldier did not forget to give the Princess this gift as well yah." I received the gift of Brother gladly.

"Of course, dong."

Dad and Mom also gave me a gift with a very large dus, making me very curious about the contents but I have decided to open it in the room later.

"I've decided I won't open the card now, I'll open it later in the room."

"Whatever, to you."

Thank you all for today, when I forgot my birthday but my family always remember it. I don't know maybe after this, I can't feel this anymore.

Late last night, I went back into the room carrying a few piles of gifts in my hand.

"Well, is my window open? If it's closed, who opened it?"