Mystery Old House (STAGED REVISION PROCESS)

WHAT HAPPENED TO TANIA?

Tania's voice when calling me sounded very raucous, where is she really?is he joking.

"Where is tania?" I kept running to and fro, looking for where that tania voice came from?but neither did the voice sound again.

"My daughter's here!" yelled again, the voice was like from inside the room, it was probably locked there.

"Where are you?" ask me again in a firm voice, but still run towards the middle room that I feel that the sound is coming from there.

As I ran and entered the room, I opened the door slowly with slow feet.

"Tania, I'm here." I cried in a whispering voice, for I was afraid that he was being held captive by a bad man.

"Tania, I'm here" I whispered, but continued to slowly step into the land.

Since tania did not answer my words at all, I ventured to go deeper in order to save her.

But what I expected was nothing like reality, in this room there was only a worn-out rocking chair other than that this room seemed empty because there was nothing but that chair.

"Why just a chair? where's tania?" I'm full of worry about myself right now.

"You're actually where you are, please don't worry me like this, please come out!I'm so worried about your current situation, please help!"I said by falling down, while crying with a sigh.

now I just want to know how things are going, whether he wants to play with me or he's in danger, really I don't know what to do now.

It was my fault from the beginning, which brought the tania inside together with me,and now that I'm in this state I can't help her at all, I hope that things don't seem like a joke she made.

"Daughter please! help me! he's choking me!" yelled tania again, but like this voice came from the bathroom.

Without thinking any longer, I immediately ran quickly to save tania.I swiftly kicked the bathroom door hard hoping to help her now.

"Uhuhuk.uhuhkk.." tania coughed loudly beside the bathtub, I who saw the situation was immediately patted his shoulder gently, so that his cough could be stopped.

"What's up, tania? why are you doing this?" ask me in an anxious tone, and hope he answers my question correctly.

"In.he wants to kill us!" tania replied with a frightened face and her very strange eyes when she saw me.

"We must go he will kill us, we must go he will kill us, we must go! tania said by closing her ears, like the fear of hearing something.

"All right let's go out of this house now." I said firmly, while helping him get up.

I don't know what's wrong with tania, who must be like a dazed person and very scared of something, she said,until he covered his ears with his hands, I wanted to ask him more what happened to him, but he was in fear like this as if he would answer later.

"What's wrong with the current state of tania?