Mystery Old House (STAGED REVISION PROCESS)

DON'T KILL ME!!

I coughed loudly, incessantly until my entire throat felt excruciating pain, making it difficult for me to speak.

"Uhuukk...uhukkk.." I kept coughing, I wanted to ask for a drink, but my grandmother and brother did not understand my cue.

until I finally bleed out of my mouth, like my esophagus is injured, so it can bleed.

"Miss!how does this princess bleed from her mouth!" yelled andre's brother to stop, the car he was driving.

grandma just kept staring at me, without doing anything.What's wrong with grandma?why doesn't he care about my situation?

"Sister.a. I want to drink" said in a very slow voice, which I forced to speak.

Hearing my words, I immediately took out a bottle of mineral water and opened it so I could drink it straight away.

"Drink slowly!" reply big brother, with his merciful gaze towards me.

After drinking the mineral water earlier my cough slowly began to stop.A glance I looked at the grandmother who continued to see me with, scary eyes.

"Sir, what's the matter?" I asked in a small voice while holding my grandmother's shoulder, who was seriously staring at me from earlier.

"Nothing..let's go home" exclaimed the grandmother, quickly multiplying her gaze from before me.

"Good grandma!" exclaim brother, and drive back to the car.

"Why is Grandma just staring at me from earlier?why is grandma like that?he didn't even talk much after, coming home from that place!"

All of that flashed for a moment in my mind, while feeling the pain of my throat.I grinned my forehead and asked myself.What's wrong with grandma?

"Hows it?is it okay?" asked brother, taking a glance at me from the windshield of the car.

"So good" replied me in a soft voice.

My cough has begun to break, but my voice has not yet recovered.this is due to the giggling that night, until I feel a very extraordinary pain.

if I think back to yesterday's events, they all make me feel scared, I'd go crazy thinking about this.

(at home.).

"it's better mom!" answer me, by forcing the throat so that it can make a neutral sound.

"oh, then go back to your room, and rest for a moment!" mom told me to get back to rest.

When I came home, my father did not say anything because my grandmother immediately pulled my hand to go out.I do not know what my father and grandmother would do.what grandmother would talk about something with my father?

then I washed my face, and changed my clothes with pajamas.then lay down on the bed and fell asleep...

Suddenly I felt something real in my sleep, not like a dream.

"Please don't kill me! i beg!" I screamed as I ran for a way out of this very dark place.

I kept running without knowing the direction, while shouting for help hoping that someone would help me at this moment.

"wherever you go!!! I will always follow you!!" said someone from behind me, in a heavy tone.

"Please! dad, mom, help the princess!!!" I shouted again loudly, trying for someone to hear my screams.

Suddenly, when I stopped running to find a way outside, I heard the voice of my brother calling my name.

"Princess! wake up brother, open your eyes!" his voice sounds like that...

and I gasped to wake up with a stingy breath, like running very far away.

"What's wrong with you?" ask the brother, by patting my shoulder.

"Sister, I'm scared!" I said that I immediately hugged brother andre tightly, because I felt that it was very real.

"OK.take it easy, there's a big brother here" he said as he patted my shoulder, so that he could feel calm.

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