Mystery Old House (STAGED REVISION PROCESS)
Eye Bathin Open//
"What kind of fantasy does Grandma look like?I'd really like to see him if he's real" I added
"Daughter, if I'm surprised this Siti's really an indigo. You must force this grandmother to show the true form of the old house's guardian now." whispered Tania subtly to my right ear.
"Alright, Tania." I replied while whispering back to his side.
The atmosphere around began to feel a little tense, but as soon as our order came a feeling of relief approached the two of us at that time.
"This is the order of the deck, enjoy it" said the shop owner's mother very gently and politely.
"Thank you, ma'am" we both continued at once.
Nek Siti immediately pulled out a cup of tea that was still hot, blew it slowly on the ground and then gritted it.
"Do you really want to see her?what if it's so ugly and creepy, do you still want to see it?" nek Siti said as if warning me.
"Yes, I still want to see him. Then let's show me now, where he is right now." I said
"Ah, don't rush. He was right next to you, and from that moment on he kept watching you so cynically. But take it easy, he can't hurt you because there's a grandmother here" said Nek Siti to make me confused with he said.
"What do you mean grandma?"
"Come here, grandma will show you something." call grandma Siti, make me get out of my seat.
Now that I was sitting next to Grandma Siti, she told me to close my eyes for a moment and put her palm over the top of my head. I don't know exactly what he wants to do to me right now, but I can hear his mouth making an indistinct comment.
"Done, open your eyes now." cried Grandma Siti pulled back her hand.
Slowly I opened my eyes all seemed ordinary, there was Tania in front of me and several other customers across from us and the shop owner's mother was talking to other customers.
"Try your face towards the other side of the road" said Nek Siti.
I followed her words, at first I saw nothing across the street but as I blinked my eyes repeatedly...
"Argh!ha-ghantu ke-head butts, di-he was walking towards this direction nek. In-he looked at me so creepily like he wanted to kill me." I was smudged with bricks because of his fear.
"Princess what happened?what's wrong with him, Grandma?" tania shouted, making the other customers look in shock at us.
My body immediately felt stiff and limp, I wanted to scream again but like someone was holding my voice back from coming out. My entire gaze darkened, only the faint sounds of some people faintly grazed in my ears. I don't know what happened after that.
***
"Uhh..Where is this?Tania, what happened to me?my head feels so dizzy." I cried as I held the temple of my eyes.
"Finally you realize too, you've been passed out for over 2 hours here. Why are you yelling like crazy, and saying that you see ghosts?are you out of your mind?" tania Decit
I started to try to remember him again, but suddenly my whole body began to shake and sweat whatever happened.
"Grandma, I-I saw it, I-I saw it" I cried
"No, what you see is not him." said Siti.
"Who did I see first?" much
"See, but remember the old housekeeper has a very tall body if you keep looking up, he has fur all over his body both hands and feet. He had eyes so red as fire, ready to take life."
"After you see it later, decide to never go back into the old house" explained Grandma Siti
"Keep what to do next Princess Grandma?" timbrung Tania
"Next keep using the antidote amulet that you are wearing right now, never take it off." replied Nek Siti
In fact, he knew we were wearing an antidote talisman from Zumu. Who exactly is this old grandma?why does he know so many things from us?
"Grandma knows you want to go back to that old house, okay. Right on Friday grandma will be waiting for you in front of the old house at 7 pm, bring some stuff that grandma notes in this paper." said Nek Siti while giving a worn paper to my hand.
"Open up at home, not here."
"Good grandma..."
"If on the way home you see something strange, don't mind just passing by without caring for them."
"Good grandma..."
