Mystery Old House (STAGED REVISION PROCESS)

FOOTSTEPS

I helped her walk slowly through the land, and when I wanted to open the door, it locked from the outside by itself, making me overwhelmed to open it.

"Please everyone out there!" I shouted, kicking the door hard, hoping that someone would hear my screams from inside.

"If we don't get out, he'll kill us" said the farmer, fearfully pulling my sweater hard.

"Calm down, we're going out.so stop pulling my sweater, you're almost making me have trouble breathing." I said, letting go of the hand that pulled my sweater.

Tania started to shut up and squat under me, I don't know what to do now by looking at the condition of the peasant as a frightened person right now.

"Please lock us in here!" I said loudly, while continuing to kick the door so that someone heard from outside.

Since there was no other way, I called my sister to help me get out of this old house, but what a signal was not at all inside this big old house.

"What's? there's no signal!" reveal me with annoyance, by clenching my hands and pounding them against the wall because of his irritated crotch.

"Tania, what should we do now? we're locked in and no one hears us, it's all my fault that brings you into my troubles.I really don't know what to do now." I squatted in front of the tania, while patting her shoulder slowly.

He didn't answer me at all, he just kept quiet and covered his ears with his hands.

Now I just know why Grandma always buy time for me to go back inside this old house, because she knows how hard it is to get back out after coming inside.

"Ah, how unlucky am I! get in here without thinking about the circumstances that will happen." exclaimed me, by floating my gaze to the loadingscreen of my mobile phone that was wrong.

"Battery is 98%, there are cards and pulses, but unfortunately why the signal does not exist at all.then what use this phone I bring!" I shouted by throwing my phone, while bouncing away from my front.(honey uhhh.).

"The clontang!The klontangg!" the sound of drink cans rolling from the top of the stairs, this makes the atmosphere that was silent now filled with the sound of this drink.

"He has come! he has come! surely he will kill us" said tania, who suddenly blurted words like that, making me all annoyed to hear him continuously.

"Actually what did you mean by that?you say the same word over and over again, making me like a madman to understand it. Try to explain what you mean!" i firmly.

"Someone, wanting to kill us, he said if we've been in for as long as we can't get out again and others will never know about our whereabouts.then in that moment he instantly kills us." clearly tania stood up, looking at my eyes seriously.

"someone?who her?and what does it look like? why would he scare you like this.!" ask me again in a firm tone.

"Someone who once strangled you!"reply tania with a high tone, when he said like that felt my whole body began to stiffen, but I tried to stay upright.

"Ba..how did you know?" again, trying to stand up straight.

"She said to me like that, with a heavy voice and a clutch of hands whose nails were so long she also wanted to strangle me." she added withholding her cries.

"This is impossible, surely you're wrong how could he possibly want to kill us both right? you must be wrong." I said an obscure word.

behind our debate, began to sound a very large footstep from above, the sound of the footpath began to slowly land down the stairs and like there was the sound of clothes being dragged, drag,it was as if he was dragging something behind his feet.

"Shuttt! try silence!" I told the tania to stop chattering, so that I could hear what the leg was.

And turns!