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Salim Tubagus Malik is the second child of the successful couple Jaka Putra Malik and Maria Sihombing. His mother is from Manado while his father is from Java - Malang. Salim actually has an older brother named Pramudia Pestu Malik. But when he was five years old, his nickname, he died in an accident. Salim learned of his father's secret when he was fifteen.
Husni Wiryanto Malik is the younger brother of Salim - Jaka's father. When Jaka was 5 years old his mother died and soon his father married his mother who now gave birth to Husni. Unlike Jaka who has good nature, Husni is a rebellious, naughty and dissident child. Even his mother could not give him advice. Fatmawati's mother died of illness. Since his mother died, Husni has increasingly become a wild, drunk and cunning young man. When their father died, the father bequeathed his entire fortune to his first son. Husni only gets 10% of his father's inheritance. Husni was angry, vengeful and spiteful towards Jaka who gained him more. He will reclaim his legacy with great cruelty and cunning.
Husni kidnaps Mustika the son of Jaka's best friend. Jaka's best friend and business partner, Brata. Husni finds out that Brata owes the Malik family a debt of gratitude for building the business. Husni threatens Jaka if the inheritance does not fall to him then he will kidnap his best friend's son and even kill him. Jaka and Brata did not bother him, but they only realized when Ambar (the wife of Brata) invited little Mustika to the market and Husni plotters kidnapped Mustika.
The tight friendship between Brata and Jaka makes Jaka take the toughest decision of his life. He bequeathed all his father's possessions and efforts to Husni. Jaka doesn't want his best friend to lose a child. Husni keeps his promise to Jaka to free Mustika. Indeed, he released Mustika when the treasure was in his hands, but Mustika could not last long because of the condition of his weak body due to three days of captivity.
Jaka and his wife and little Salim left their magnificent house with only a suitcase. All items in the home should not be taken. Go from his house to the residence of Jayanatra who is ready to accommodate them.
A few years later, his mother Salim died of illness. Since then Jaka and Salim have lived in Jayanatra's house. Closing their true selves in society.
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"Why is Ave crying?" jaka asked when he found out that Ave was crying after hearing that.
"So actually Malik's father who owns the Palm plantation?" asked Ave with her cries that had not subsided.
"Yes Nduk, but because of the incident-" said Brata regretfully.
"Have ... already .. don't continue anymore." Cut Jaka did not want to continue.
"We are as powerful as rumaos klintu dhumatengmu, Jaka." (We feel guilty) Sahut eyang Yaya with Javanese Krama.
"Mboten. Banda sanguh ing pados malih, Eyang." (It's okay. Treasure can be sought again) Reply Jaka with Javanese Krama as well.
Eyang Yaya and Jaka always use Java Krama when speaking.
"Pardon us, Jaka," Ambar said sincerely.
"It's okay, Ambar. I have been sincere with all this even I want to say thank you because the Jayanatra family would accept us," continued Jaka with a smile.
"Most importantly we have to keep each other on guard if they attack again" Jaka said vigilantly.
"Watch from whom, Uncle?"Chirps Bagas who was listening earlier.
"Wes ojo melu-melu," said Uti's eyes that make Bagas pout.
Husni is a threat to the Jayanatra and Jaka families.
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Ave's Pov
"Remain, where have you been?"I asked when Salim's meeting wasn't there.
"There was a need outside so don't go to a meeting" Grim Salim as he got into the car.
"Kok Ave hasn't slept? It's late" asked Salim, telling me to go to bed fast.
Oh my God, Salim. Are you pretending to be*** or what? Your fiance waited a long time and was told to sleep.
"That's even dumb. Let's go in the room. Tomorrow is late to the school. Eyang Uti was angry, "Salim's story was unrelenting.
I don't know why I suddenly wanted to hug her. When Salim put the car keys in the living room drawer, I hugged him from behind. The smell of his body makes him comfortable. I knew Salim was a little surprised, but after that he held my hand tightly.
"What's wrong?" salim asked quietly and sounded soft.
"It's okay. Ave just wanted to hug Salim. Ave is scared."
Salim turned his body and now our eyes are clashing against each other.
"Not be afraid. There's Salim here" he said, hugging me.
"She said karo sapa kowe? Come ndang turu. Wis bengi." [Nduk, who are you talking to? let's get some sleep. It's night ]
We automatically release a hug when we hear the voice of Eyang Uti. We forgot that the rooms of Eyang Uti and Eyang Yaya were in front. We laughed softly.
Salim stroked my bangs and smiled." Sana sleeping. Don't be late tomorrow."
I immediately went into the room and danced in the room because I was happy.
\=Connect\=
Can Salim protect Ave from Husni?
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