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Ave's Pov
Today everyone in the house looks busy preparing for Mbakyu Raras' wedding tomorrow. Almost a week Mbakyu Rarasku was pingit inside the house. You cannot go out of the house or meet your future husband. At first he did not want to follow these rules. Yes, the name of the tradition must inevitably be obeyed. Right no? Imagine for a week at home still not allowed to go out and can only hear the voice of her future husband on the phone. Like I was teasing her right now. I peeked behind the trees when the phone with her lover of heart.
"Dec, you don't know, you know, you're peeking. Didn't the mosquito bite there?" Tempta Mbakyu Raras who knew I was peeping.
"Do you know, anyway?" I came out of hiding and sat next to him in the Gazebo.
"How did you not know you were hiding in a rose tree? Are you a child?" Laughter until Raras reddened his face.
I was washing my lips.
"What's Dek Raras?" The voice of Mas Bayu across the phone was shocked to hear the sound of Mba Raras' laughter.
"Ups .. sorry Mas. This is Ave. I know I called the same. Hide behind the rose again. Yeah, it's gonna get caught." Raras laughed again.
"Mas Bayu do not cry anything said Mbak Raras." I spoke on the phone when I heard Mas Bayu was laughing too.
Uh ... know that I'm not hiding.
"Yes, it's Mas. Call me again, yeah. This is Raras wanting to tease Ave again," said Raras, hanging up his phone line.
"What's up, deck? Use the show all. Kangen, are you the same as your beautiful mother?" Sweet mouth seduce.
"Here you go, Ma'am. Yes, Ave was peeking. It's tomorrow Ma'am ...." My sentence is broken I do not want the togetherness with Ms. Raras will end.
"Dek, tomorrow Mbak is already the wife of people, but that does not mean Mbak will leave forever. Ma'am will remain your Ma'am and Bagas. He will remain the son of father and mother. Whenever you and Bagas want to meet Ma'am. Yeah, just come. Our house is only a few alleys away." Ms. Raras stroked my hair.
"You're a big one, deck. I don't realize time is passing by. If only there was a Mustika. You will not be lonely" said Raras sadly.
"Actually Ma'am Mustika is sick what the hell, Ma'am?" I was wondering about a sister I never knew.
"If that one asks only mother," said mbak Raras did not want to answer.
Every time I ask about my brother who died, no one will answer. I want to know too.
*****
In a room that was transformed into a place where the bride and her attendants look Ave who is a little upset because the clothes of danger are not as desired. She likes purple, but Yaya refuses.
"Widow color purple, Cah Ayu. Eyang ora ngijino kowe pake purple." That was said by Eyang Yaya yesterday. [the purple is the color of the widow, Cah Ayu. Who wouldn't let you wear that ]
Finally Ave gave up. He wears a special modern kebaya designed by the famous designer teenagers of the capital.
"Mother Mira, am I beautiful?" ask Ave with the pedal.
"Beautiful, Non," said Mbak Mira while putting makeup on her non-male face.
"But I still don't like the color of his clothes, Ma'am." Ave started to pout.
"Yo wes toh Nduk. Iku ayu tenan. Pake klambi what wae keep ayu." Eyang Uti told wisely. [Already, Nduk. You are beautiful. Wear anything and everything is beautiful ]
Ave could not say anything else but according to what was said by Eyang Uti. If we don't listen to our parents.
"This introduces my daughter-in-law's future grandchildren. Salim Tubagus Malik." Eyang Yaya introduced Salim in front of his friend. Salim gave his greetings.
"Oh, yes I know Eyang. Salim is a college friend of my son Gayatri and Dimas" said Mr. Adam.
Salim let the elders continue their conversation. He's looking for his little miss who hasn't been seen since morning.

"What are you doing here, Ve? Invited too, huh?" gayatri asked suddenly as she stopped Ave's steps on the small bridge towards the podium.
"If so, why?" Answer Ave accordingly.
"You don't think you deserve that shirt, deh," he sneered.
Ave's head feels hot hearing Gayatri's words. If it wasn't for this is her brother's wedding. It will push the mouth of the nyinyir into the fish pond.
Patience .. patience ...
"Loh, Non Ave here apparently? Looking for Eyang Yaya, Non," said Salim taking a deep breath.
"How are you here also Salim?"
"That I am here" Salim looked at Gayatri.
"Pretend to know or intentionally this child." Ave muttered in his heart.
"Yes, it's Lim. Stay here this nyinyir," snorted Ave while leaving.
Gayatri looks upset from the look on her face. He did not like Salim's treatment of Ave.
"Tri, sought after here you are" said someone whose face resembled Gayatri.
"Ih ... What's up, anyway? I'm pissed off about Ave."
"Ave? Oh, the girl that the guy was holding, huh?" Dimas showed his index finger.
"Yes upset me. Why is he here too." Gayatri stomped her feet.
"You have to be here anyway. La, your friend Ave is the daughter of Jayanatra who has an event. How are you, uh, Dek?"
Gayatri gawking in disbelief.
"So the news is true? I thought it was a lie."
Dimas did not care about the words of his brother who slurred. He left because the bride was coming soon.
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The marriage of Raras and Bayu looks simple. There is no luxury even though both parties are wealthy families.
Raras looks beautiful with the wedding dress he wears. A smile continued to expand on her small lips.

On this happy day made Ave shed tears when the sungkeman event took place. Mbakyu Raras whom she loves and always defends her will come with her husband.
"Doa Ave always accompanied Mbak Raras." Ave prayer without a sound.
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Uh... is there another guy, Gayatri's brother? He likes it, does he like Ave? Yuk ... follow this story.