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Salim's Pov
I really can't believe what Ayu said. Dimas and Bhishma followed Ave all the way here. I went to the place Ayu pointed to. In a mall this big how can I find them.
"You looking for me, Salim?" Surprise the Bhishma from behind who realizes if they are being sought.
"Have you been calling Ave since we left Malang?" Stiff to look for answers.
"Not Bhishma but me" said Dimas who walked from behind.
"Do you want all of them?" I was almost angry but I tried to be patient.
"Not much anyway, Lim," replied Bisma arrogantly.
"First Ave belonged to Dimas. Second you must let go of Malik's name behind you," said Bisma as she patted me hard on the shoulder.
"Sorry for everything. I can't. I'll stay with Ave and my name will forever bear Malik." I don't want to lose this fight.
"You don't know the consequences if you're dealing with a Dimas Hardinata!" firmly Dimas with sharp eyes.
"You think I'm afraid of your threats?" I turned to look at him sharply.
"I've been after Jayanatra's family ever since her daughter walked into college. With the wealth they have. My family will be respected" Dimas told the truth.
"I don't want you to be a hindrance to me winning Aveliena's heart" he continued in a furious tone.
"And you have no right to bear Malik's name behind your name. Because all I deserve is Tubagus" said Bhishma cynically.
"Remember what I said today. I'm not gonna let go of Ave and my name is just for a cowardly Dimas Hardinata." I started to look at them.
"Because you say so then I will forcefully make a shortcut to destroy you" Dimas threatened as he passed from before me.
Oh God what is this ordeal? Isn't it enough that Uncle and the Hardinata family destroyed Dad just yet?
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Ave's Pov
I deliberately followed Salim who was going to meet Dimas and Bhishma. I don't need to call them brother anymore. Unbecoming.
Good thing Salim didn't know it when I followed him to the Mall. Salim stood in front of the clothing store. He deliberately went into the store and peeked. I could see Salim, Dimas and Bhishma. They talk about me. Why should I be the object of their conversation.
"What kind of clothes do you want?" ask the SPG shop who found out I only saw and once stole Salim's conversation.
"Sorry Mother. I was just eavesdropping on their conversation" I said in embarrassment.
"If you don't buy. Please get out of our shop" snorted the mbak spg with annoyance.
"Yes Ma'am. Sorry."
I quickly walked out on the street slowly and covered my head with a hoodie jacket.
Ih that mbak anyway. Halangin me aja.
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"Lim, how come you're not with Avel? He followed you earlier," said Ayu who was surprised not to find Salim with Ave.
Degs....
The feeling of being afraid of losing Ave made Salim panic. He immediately ran away not listening to Ayu's chattering indistinctly.
"Yeay Si Salim's. Gua asks him to run," dumel Ayu with an innocent face for not accompanying Ave earlier.
"Where are you, Ve?" Murmured Salim who kept looking for the whereabouts of Ave inside the Mall.
Salim's eyes continued to search for Ave's whereabouts. From all corners and corners of the Mall he continues to sisiri. He was afraid Dimas or Bhishma would harm Ave. The woman he loved. Frustration arose in Salim's mind. Was Ave kidnapped?
Just as his eyes looked at an ice cream outlet. He saw a person he knew very well, was busy eating ice cream gelato he sat while enjoying people passing by. Without feeling guilty, waved at Salim and called out to him.
"Salim Lim." Call it sumringah.
"Oh my goodness Ve. I thought nothing happened to you." The worry still haunts Salim.
"Me?" He laughed out loud. "I want to eat ice cream again. The weather is very hot, anyway," he continued while shaking his hands fanning his face.
It feels like Salim wants to pinch Ave. Search everywhere no one. I don't want to hang out at an ice cream outlet.
Seeing Salim who had turned silent. Finally, Ave opened his voice.
"Sorry Ave, yes. Ave wrong. No word," he said with a face made to cry.
Salim who could not bear to just sigh long to see the actions of his little lady.
"Don't repeat it again. If Ave wants to go. Take Ayu or Salim," said Salim slowly.
Ave nodded as she fed Salim a spoonful of ice cream into Salim's mouth.
Dret.....
"Sir, eling Eyang's message. Ojo lunga. Kudu ana kancamu atawa Salim."
As usual, Eyang Uti and Ambar will remind Ave not to go alone, especially in the city of people.
"From who? Eyang Uti, huh?" Salim asked while eating Ave's ice cream.
Ave.
"Lim, Ave stole your conversation and Bhishma. What is your relationship with Bhishma? Why is your last name the same as Bhishma? Are you brothers?" Read Ave who wants to know.
"Did Ave want to know?" Ask Salim.
"Yes. Ave wants to know."
"alright. Listen to Salim, yeah."
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