
Please advise and criticize...
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Ave's Pov
I forgot to tell my friends, don't come home in the afternoon. There is Eyang Yaya who will be ready to give a message. Well this is how it happened. Instead of going, uh instead they enjoy the dish (advice ) given by Eyang while sitting on a mat. Eat boiled cassava and drink warm tea. Do you know what Mom did? Yes, my beautiful mother even cooked dinner for my friends. Fortunately not much. Because in class, I only knew ten children. Si Rani and Ayu don't count. There were also Dimas akak who accompanied them to come home.
Exactly at seven. They went home with full stomachs. Tell me you're hungry. The proof of rice in the toilet magic jar is not left.
"Sir, how many weeks have your friends eaten?" Sindir kak Bagas as I help mom in the kitchen.
"Bagas, it's not good to talk like that." Mother defended.
"It's true, isn't it? Ask Mbok Sum or Mbok Jum. Right, Mbok?" Mas Bagas is seeking a defense.
Mbok Sum and Mbok Jum did not answer for fear of being wrong.
"Bagas, what are you talking about? It's still your sister's birthday. Let us share the windfall with one another." Finally, Mas Bagas was silent when Father spoke.
"Dad, when Bagas wants to go to the dining table and open the hood of food instead empty," said mbok Jum there is a friend of Ave who ate."
"La wong is your fault, Cah Bagas. Wayae manganese or manganese. Ojo call karo your boyfriend tok." Eyang Uti emerged from the direction of the living room hearing the commotion in the kitchen. (Yes your own fault. Time to eat not eat. Don't call your boyfriend anyway)
Kapok you, Mas. Whose fault is it trying?
I won by the wind because Eyang and Dad stopped an unimportant debate.
*****
This morning there was the sound of Ave screaming who woke up late again. Mira is not in the end with the behavior of her little miss. Already know tomorrow leave the morning to campus even sleep at night. She watched her favorite Korean drama.
"Come, Non. Salim is waiting for you in front." Mira nags because time has shown seven o'clock.
"Mother Mira, Ave came in at half-nine. Just chill. It can't be too late."
"Remember non Ave. Our house is not in the city. The journey is far." Mira reminded because the location of Jayanatra's house still entered the village.
"Geez, Mira's so chatty, anyway. At home, it's Mas Bowo and Mira."
Mira stroked her chest to see her nona was not finished getting dressed and said a lot.
"Cah Ayu iki arep the lecture missile at the speech?" The appearance of Yaya's eyes made Ave silent a thousand languages. He picked up his bag and said goodbye. (This lady is going to school or a speech? )
"It's powerful if it's Eyang who speaks." Mira said in her heart. Smile themselves.
******
Salim was busy checking the state of the car in the yard when Ave and Bagas were involved in a small commotion.
"Mas, how come you're with Ave anyway? What is the same as Mas Bagas?"
"Yes, Adek. Just one day. Mas's motorcycle is in the workshop."
"Yes, I understand. You want to be with Salim, right?" Tempta Bagas with anxiety when he saw his brother jutek.
Ave didn't look at Salim. He was still upset and closed the car door hard.
"He's angry with you, Lim," Bagas told Ave's obtuse attitude.
"Salim doesn't feel wrong, Mom." Salim did not understand.
"Oh my goodness Salim. Where do you divide your brain, anyway? You don't get the brains of love, do you?"
"True Mas Bagas. Salim did not understand. From yesterday non Ave jutek same Salim."
Bagas patted his forehead because Salim never understood the money of love.
"If the English is Jealous. Find that word." Bagas gave instructions and got into the car.
Salim knew the meaning of the word. He smiled to himself when he realized his mistake.
"Is it true that Ave is jealous of her female friends?"
******
"Happy birthday, Ave," steam the lady Gayatri when I got to campus.
"Yes Brother. Thank you," I replied while receiving a gift from Gayatri.
Tumben he's good with me. There must be a reason behind all this.
"Hi beautiful. How's kadonya? Hope you like it." A special sound of Brother Dimas beside me.
Don't you? There is no way the mouth of the nyinyir be kind to me.
"Oh so the brother who brought the gift. Ave thinks sister Gayatri."
"Yes I told him to stay close to you. Who knows if you'll be my girlfriend." Brother Dimas chuckled with his sentence.
My boyfriend? Oh, this Dimas. I don't understand it either. Ave doesn't like Dimas.
"Vel, are you okay?" ask when I don't hear it.
"Ave is okay. Go to class first, yeah. Thank you for the card." I pulled myself from Dimas to class.
Before I go to class. I heard the voice of my best friend talking to Brother Dimas.
"It seems that Brother Dimas will never be able to get Avel deh." Ayu said while looking at me. I glared at her eyes to stop talking.
"What's the matter, Yu?"
"Sister knows for himself. Isn't that Ran?" Continue while eating gum. Rani nodded.
\=*Connected\=
Well Salim has a rival nih**.