Little Miss

Part 1 The Beginning of Everything

Please advise and criticize....

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14 Years later

The roar of the sound of cars entering the yard of a typical Javanese house combined with modern style. A girl with a sour face got out of her car and shouted to her nanny host. The driver just smiled at the behavior of the employer.

"Mbok Jum ..." he shouted up the stairs.

"Mbok Jum ..." call him again.

"Ono opo anyway, Nduk? Ojo yells. Ora's polite." A middle-aged woman asked her granddaughter in Javanese. [What's up, Nduk? Don't scream. It is not polite ]

"Eyang Uti, where's Mbok Jum?" ask her slowly because it was found out the same.

"Remember the pawon, Nduk. Ono opo anyway?" [In the kitchen, Nduk. What's up, anyway? ]

"I'm hungry, Eyang Uti."

"Yo wes dahar." [Yes, I ate ]

"Mbok Jum, make me champal pencit, yes," he called in the kitchen.

Eyang Uti Rahma only shook her head to see her grandson.

"What's up, Mom?" ask the daughter-in-law.

"Regular, Nduk. Your son is screaming. Kupinge mother is sick," grumbled Eyang Uti to his mantle. [Often your son is screaming. Mother's ears hurt]

"That's Ave's mother?"

"Sopo maneh anyway?" [Yes, who else?]

The son-in-law just smiled.

"Kok iso anak wadon kayak lanang kayak behavior," said Eyang Uti as he stepped towards the terrace. [How can girls behave like children ]

The child in question is his youngest grandson. He is an adult, but his behavior is like a child.

"Tole, wes dahar?" eyang Uti asked the young man who had parked his master's car. [Have you eaten? ]

"Not yet Eyang Uti," he replied courteously.

"Yo wes dahar. The risks mung meko ae," he said while holding a fan in his hand. [Yes, eat first. Clean it up later ]

"Express Eyang Uti" said the young man named Salim.

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"Oh Allah, Non. His feet should not be raised when eating. Not polite, Nope." Mira's nanny from childhood was surprised to see her non-living behavior.

Mira then lowered her nonanya legs.

"Ih, Mira Ma'am. I'll wear pants not skirts."

"Yes still, Non. That's not polite. If you get caught by Eyang Yaya, you get scolded."

Hearing the words of Eyang Yaya made the lady named Ave shudder in fear. Eyang Yaya is the parent of his father. Famous fierce. Soon he lowered his leg.

A young man came from outside and sat down next to Ave.

"Salim, don't take my penchit sambal." Ave gave Salim a warning.

"Yes Miss Ave."

"Eat first, son," said Mbok Jum preparing a meal for Salim.

"Thank you, Mbok Jum," he replied politely.

"I'm full. Good food at home." Ave finished in an instant eating his meal.

"Mbok Jum, thank you, yeah. Sambal pencitnya Mbok is the best." Ave held up his thumb.

Mbok Jum, Mbak Mira and Salim can only smile at the behavior of the employer's child.

Ave's his nickname. She is not a spoiled girl even though she is a child of a famous family. It is famous for its style of uracan. Polite outside the house, but inside the house is famous for children who can not stand still. The thing to fear was not the beast, but Eyang Yaya. He once brought a caterpillar to his sister. Her brother immediately cried loudly. Eyang Yaya immediately scolded him and punished him by not giving him pocket money for a week. From then on he was caught dealing with Eyang Yaya.

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"Arep nang endi, Cah Ayu?" Ave's wide footsteps made him stop when someone he feared and was reluctant to ask him. [Where to go, Miss Ayu ]

"Ave went to Pendopo, Eyang Yaya. Salim wants to teach Ave to learn." Ave lied even though his intention was to punish Salim who was in Pendopo to learn.

Eyang Yaya nodded. Ave can't speak Javanese. Whether it's Krama Inggil or something. But he knows what it means. His family is Javanese. Moreover, Eyang Yaya was still the descendant of the King. Eyang Yaya's name is Gusti Raden Bayanaka Waskito Jayanatra. I don't know that's all Ave remembers about her.

"Salim ...." Ave called Salim's name, but the person he called was not in Pendopo.

"Duh ... Where, anyway, Salim Lim?" Calling people's names by themselves.

"Salim Lim ..." call him again with a loud volume of sound.

"What's up, Non Ave?" tanya Mas Bowo came out from the kitchen close to Pendopo. Bowo is the husband of Mira.

"Mas Wowo, where's Salim going?"Ave no longer screams, maybe his voice can no longer come out. He coughed.

"Salim escorts Eyang Uti, Non," he replied politely.

"There's no Mrde Malik." Ave calls Salim's father to Pakde. According to Eyang Yaya do not call "Sir" to Salim's father. It is not polite said Eyang Yaya.

"Pakde Malik anterin his father Non Ave to the plantation."

"Yes that's it." Ave resigned.

"What's wrong, Non?"

"I want to mukulin Salim. Just look at that Salim Lim guy, yeah." Ave walked away feeling annoyed.

The Bowo behind him is silent.

It has been a habit of Ave since childhood. If he is upset with someone then his easy target is Salim who is ready to be the material of his body slowly punch.

"Sir, his face was bent like that. What's up?" Mbakyu Raras, his first brother looked at the face of the sullen sister.

"Bored I'm Mbakyu. Salim is not there."

"Yes already. Just play the same Jaka," joked Mbakyu Raras.

Jaka is the son of Mira and Bowo.

"When did I tell you to play with a kid? Ih, this Mbakyu loh," his rent made his face more sour.

"Where is Makyu Raras going? Same with Kangmas Bayu?" Ave glanced at the neatly dressed Raras.

"Mbakyu same Kangmas Bayu want to take the kebaya used for the day after tomorrow," said Raras with a face sumringah.

After Mbakyu Raras left, Ave walked into his room. He had a moment to see Eyang Yaya invite his pets to sing.

The first child of the Jaya family is Raras Anindita Putri Jaya while the second child is Bagas Arnawama Putra Jaya. Only the youngest child does not use the name Java. Let it be different his father said despite being opposed by Eyang Yaya. Because the man he seeks does not come. Ave listens to music through her favorite cell phone.

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