What's Wrong Pa

What's Wrong Pa
Flamboyant Village



Not long after the two finally arrived at an archway that read 'welcome to Flamboyan Village', they saw so many people who wanted to make a pilgrimage to be buried who had been saved.


"Finally until also in this village" said Nadhira.


"Are you sure you want to enter this village?" Ask Mr. Mun.


"Of course, why not Sir? Far away we come to this place then what if not to get into it and see the situation inside?"


"But Non in many subtle creatures that are very creepy indeed Non".


"Emang Mr Mun knows that in many subtle creatures? Not only inside, sir, besides Mr. Mun must also exist, and even being stalked Mr. Mun quietly".


"Non, Non has promised me that Non won't scare you anymore".


Nadhira just grinned and said, "If there are any rude creatures no problem Sir, you just wait here if you are afraid to go inside with us, we will both enter the village".


"I just follow Non, not necessarily here is also safe later what if here even more creatures".


"A wise choice, very wise one" Nadhira praised.


Theo immediately got off the car and helped Nadhira to get off as well, after that Mr. Mun immediately followed to get off the car and immediately ran around the car to get to the side of Nadhira who was standing staring at the gate.


"I feel like there's something strange about this village, do you feel what I feel for Theo?"


"Yes Dhira, it seems like the mystical aura here is thicker than the others, I started to get a little creepy in a place like this, like this, I've never felt anything strange like this before, Dhira, but this place is going to be different".


"You're right, Theo, it makes me even more excited to get into this village"


"Non, should we just get out of here? My feeling was suddenly bad Non, I was afraid something happened in there Non-real".


"Sir Mun Ih, I tell you that we have just arrived here, we have also come a long way to this place, why should we go back again without getting anything we are looking for".


"Are you sure this is the place?"


"It's pretty sure sir, we'll see it later after entering this village".


Nadhira's arrival at that place made the wind blow gently on their bodies, it made Mr. Mun grow creepy along with the wind, in the vision of Nimas, it makes the wind, so many creatures gathered to welcome him to such a place.


"Why can suddenly there be a wind that blows slowly like this? Making my hair sit on its side, but before there was none" Nadhira asked.


"You take it easy Dhira, they're just welcoming me to this place".


"Thank God, I thought they would be angry when they saw me coming to this place before".


"As long as you are with me, you will be safe and feel respected by our nation".


"You're really great Nimas".


"Yes, I was great a long time ago, you never admit it".


"Great in bragging matters, don't be happy to get a compliment from me before I say the next word"


"Huh? What did you say? You're saying that I'm arrogant? Just look at you, you're even more arrogant than I am Dhira".


"Come on in, don't linger in front of the gate like this".


"Non, should we just go home, the air here is not friendly with us" said Mr. Mun.


"How can you be friendly sir, our people have just arrived and have not been acquainted too, if you already know later will be friendly, the residents here are very friendly sir".


"Air right different from humans Non, how do you get acquainted with the air? The air cannot be touched by hand"


"But it can be felt with the skin, right sir? Come on in, will Mr Mun stay in the car? Well then I'll go in alone with Theo, Mr. Mun stay in the car".


"But Non... All right I'll come along".


"As long as we don't do anything and offend the creatures in us it will be fine sir"


"I heard in this village many adults or small children who suddenly disappeared Non, so I was a little horrified to imagine Non, does Non still enter into it?"


"Why not Sir? The creatures here are good, the proof is that they now welcome us to this place"


"Non what do you mean?"


"Welcome you hello, they just welcome me, not you".


"And just the same, you are also a group of us so they also welcome me".


"Didih, it's too painful boy".


"If ngak pede isn't Nadhira, you should know that Nimas".


"It's up to you, I'm tired of having to argue with you all the time like this".


"A very good choice".


Nadhira immediately stepped inside the gate, the gate looks only fit for motor vehicles so that Nadhira can not enter the village by using his car and then Nadhira decided to walk into the village.


After he entered the village, Nadhira seemed so surprised to see so many people doing his activities in the village and the village seemed so crowded unlike what had been rumored in it.


"What'sthis? Why are so many like this? Different from what I heard earlier about this mysterious village, are we wrong Theo village?" Nadhira asked when he saw the crowd.


"This place will only be crowded during the day only Dhira, if at night he said it was quiet, but I don't know, because I never came to this place before, because I never came to this place before, I think this is exactly Dhira's place".


"Why could that be? There's something strange about this remote village".


"I also don't know Dhira why the village is like that, and even before it never was, Dhira tried to open the paper".


"All right" Nadhira then took a piece of paper that he put in his pocket.


"Under the trembesi tree we ran around happily, sobs began to sound, this is what does Dhira mean?" Ask Theo while reading the letter.


"Trembesi hem tree.. is very complicated, is it possible that we should find the tree first in this village? Do you know what a tree looks like? I don't know Theo"


"I know the form of Non, maybe we can look for it together in this village" Sela Pak Mun.


"Good Mr. Mun, you should have Mr. Mun in front of us to give directions to us, because Mr. Mun knows more about the tree than the two of us" Nadhira said lightly.


"But Non, I'm still goosebumps, what if only Non's friends walk ahead?" He said with his body back vibrating.


"Non Dhira and I are different, Non Dhira is used to such things, but I am not yet Non".


"Then get used to it from now on, sir, we'll be the same as eating rice, especially Mr. Mun who has been living in the village since childhood, Mr. Mun should be braver than me"


"That's very different Non, well I'll try to get used to things like this from now on".


"Good then Mr. Mun's decision, it's only Mr. Mun the brave"


Slowly the land of Pak Mun began to step forward followed by Nadhira and Theo, they then looked for where the existence of the trembesi tree grew in such a place, after circling the village the three did not find where the existence of the trembesi tree was.


"We've been around this village, but we didn't find the existence of the tree, maybe the tree does not exist in this place, and what might be the village in question is another village Theo?" Ask Nadhira.


"I don't know Dhira either, but my hunch is that it's true that this is his village, maybe we didn't manage to find him this time, but we shouldn't give up looking for him".


"You're right, should we rest first in the store or in the store, it's late afternoon too".


"Alright, we'll rest in the front yard" Theo said, pointing to a stall.


Nadhira looked so exhausted after walking far enough that Nadhira's entourage decided to rest in a stall in the village, the stall looks quite large than the stalls in the village.


"What food do you want to order?" Ask the mother who sells at that place.


"White water only Ma'am" Nadhira said.


"I just coffee Ma'am" said Mr. Mun.


"I'm also coffee Ma'am" Theo said.


"Well, if you eat it?".


"What's all this about, ma'am?" Ask Nadhira.


"There is soto, chicken satay, grilled and fried gurami, roasted chicken, vegetable soup, chicken krispi, and others there are still many Mbak".


"If there's a soy sauce Ma'am?"


"There's Ma'am".


"Yes I have bought soy sauce chicken ma'am, the sauce is not much".


"Well Ma'am, wait a minute I prepare first, if Masnya want to eat what?" Ask the seller to Theo and Mr. Mun.


"Just like Mom/Mom" said Mr. Mun and Theo simultaneously.


"Okay, please wait, I'll prepare your order first".


Nadhira just nodded to the seller, the seller immediately went into his kitchen to prepare the order that had been ordered, the three of them, The seller thought that Nadhira's entourage was a group that came from a distance to the place and was resting where he was selling.


Nadhira's breathing began to be unstable because he was too long to walk so Nadhira inhaled and exhaled with a little faster than usual, it made Pak Mun seem worried.


"Is Non okay?" Ask Mr. Mun.


"I don't know what sir, just tiredness will also improve by itself, sir, Mr. Mun don't worry too much like that, I won't why" replied Nadhira.


"Dhira you really why? Should we just go home? It looks like you look so exhausted".


"I wonder what Theo, rest here for a while later will also improve again"


"You sure about Dhira? If you're okay".


"I'm pretty sure Theo, you don't have to be that hot right now".


"Alright if you're okay".


"If this young man knew that now Non Dhira's kidneys only live one, maybe he would not let Non Dhira come to a place like this" Inner Pak Mun when he saw Nadhira's face.


Nadhira only smiled faintly at Theo and Pak Mun, he did not want the two people to feel anxious about him at this moment, he said, Mr. Mun immediately asked the seller to bring a glass of water to them.


The seller hurriedly gave the drink to Nadhira, Nadhira immediately drank it to restore the stability of his current breathing, after drinking it Nadhira felt so relieved and able to breathe normally again.


"Have you heard yet? That sacred tomb will soon be closed".


"Why did it close? Wouldn't that disappoint people like us who want to make a pilgrimage outside the tomb"


"He said there would be improvement in the area around it but whether it was true or not, I thought it was just hearsay but the truth is true, there is already a lot of material that comes and is ready to be used to build the tomb".


"Can the tomb be built? Did the inhabitants allow them to build it? If it can't be the tomb it will take so many more victims as it was before".


"You remember Mbah Bejo? The person who knows about the tomb you forgot, he himself said that the tomb will be built so as not to disappear as the times develop anyway".


"Oh yeah? What about the tree? Will the tree be cut down?"


"It looks like he is, but I also don't know if he wants to be flanked by the tree, his age has actually reached dozens of taun if it is cut down may take a very long time".


"Konon said he had heard a mysterious voice that came from the big trembesi tree, whether it was a laugh or a cry, both indistinguishable, it's mysterious, isn't it? But after searching no one found the origin of the sound, horrified right".


"You're right, if maybe it was the bouncer of the trembesi tree that time, yes, they also said that the sound came from the trembesi tree, if the tree was cut down maybe the waiter would be angry".


"I don't know either, I hope it's not a bad thing for this village".


Some people were chatting near Nadhira about the trembesi tree he was looking for in the village, Nadhira and the two people who were with him listened to the story of the person carefully without wanting anything to be missed.


After chatting for quite a long time finally the person immediately left the place after finishing to pay for the food they ordered before, after the departure of the man the food ordered by Nadhira immediately came to the place.


"Have you heard what that guy was talking about?" Nadhira asked in a whisper.


"Yes Dhira, we heard it".


"It may be the tree that we have been looking for since then but we have not found".


"Maybe Non, but according to the person the tree was very haunted, until sometimes there was a sound like crying and laughing simultaneously".


"But sir, according to the letter in the hand of Dhira the next temple is under the trembesi tree we are running around happily, sobs begin to sound, I'm sure it must be what is meant, I'm sure, that laughing and crying voice is our next clue Dhira".


"You're right Theo, after this we'll head there to see it firsthand"


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