What's Wrong Pa

What's Wrong Pa
2 Road road



After finishing the peek the two immediately continued their way to surround the square of the city.


There were so many people selling in that place, the more crowded the night, Nadhira felt so happy that night that she would never forget for good.


The night became a long night for both of them, both of them eagerly tried to taste every culinary sold in the place, ranging from cilok, honey-baked corn, ice cream, ice cream, and many others.


After the two were full they decided to sit on the bench of the park closest to the Square, the place was a little quieter than the others, in one of Nadhira's hands he still holds a glass of ice pop bought by Rifki before and the other still holds the fish he has got.


Nadhira drank the ice pop in his hand, he had never felt this happy before because he had never gone to a crowded place like this.


"Aren't you tired of Dhira?". Ask Rifki by arriving.


"No, next time here again".


"Yes".


Both of them stayed there to finish off the ice pop they had bought before, before long they heard something from a distance.


"Ghost please don't bother me yes, I still want to live".


The two immediately rushed to see who was making the sound, both hiding behind a bush to see the man.


Both of them recognized him very well, the figure of a young man who was walking alone on the path with a little fear because of the darkness of the night today.


Both of them laughed in silence at the behavior of the young man before him at this time, the young man was like being frightened for whatever reason, the young man was none other than the Dawn of his classmates.


"I have an idea". Whisper Nadhira to Rifki.


"What'sthat?". Rifki asked and also whispered to him.


"......". Nadhira explains his plan to Rifki.


"Dark".


Rifki and Nadhira soon separated from the place to carry out their respective duties.


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Today Fajar is going to the town square with his friend Hakam, Fajar has never been out the night before so this time it is his first experience out of the house.


If it were not for his friend he would not be out the night as it is today, after he went around in the square of the city Hakam suddenly got a phone call from a mysterious number.


Fajar did not think that Hakam was a young man who had a slightly problematic temperament, as long as the two friends were new the first time Fajar knew the background of his friend.


Hakam's attitude can change at any time sometimes behaving like a good angel and also a smile, and sometimes he behaves like a psychopath who laughs to see his friend suffer even in pain.


Hakam has a little mental disorder caused by violence in his family, so he needs to be supervised in every action, because not long ago the two were friends so that Fajar did not know about it.


Suddenly his friend went on a rampage and wanted to hit Fajar many times but was immediately blocked by a family from Hakam who quietly followed him without the knowledge of the two.


Seeing that he remembered about the thing that happened to Nadhira so he thought that the thing experienced by Hakam was exactly the same as that experienced by Nadhira.


Dawn walked alone on the path closest to the square Square of the city, he felt so frightened because the target this time was himself, like Rifki who was the target of Nadhira's rampage.


"Ghost please don't bother me yes, same still want to live". Say Dawn with fear.


Dawn continued to walk slowly, while continuing to say this, from the story told by Rifki and Nadhira made him feel a little afraid of the occult.


"Hishihi...". Sounds like a kuntilanak laugh.


"aa... Who's that!!". Shouted the Dawn in reflex.


Dawn could only peck at his place without daring to move a bit, he turned around and there but did not find any figure, suddenly he felt something holding his shoulder.


"Please save us". I could hear a very scary voice from behind her body.


"The... Si... Who is ka.. ka.. you!?". Fajar asked with a brick without daring to look back at him.


As soon as Dawn's body trembled because of what she was experiencing at this time, a cold wind seeped into her body making her hair stand up and a feeling of goosebumps enveloped her.


Suddenly the bush in front of him moved with a fast as it was crushed by the wind****pope, the two eyes of Dawn immediately opened with width when watching such a thing that suddenly happened.


"The... Si... Siii... What're?".


A shadow can be clearly seen by Dawn, quickly the shadow immediately disappeared behind a lush bush on the lonely road.


"Bajar!! I'm expecting you".


Again there was a terrible sound from behind the bush, as well as the hand that was holding his shoulder suddenly gripped so tightly.


Nadhira who hid behind a bush suddenly felt something that touched his feet, at first he deliberately scared the nakuti of Fajar but himself who was frightened when he felt someone was holding his feet.


"Let's.....".


Nadhira jumped out of the bush by arriving while shaking his legs somehow what was wrapped around his feet


"Vaaaaaaaa.......".


Dawn who was surprised by the presence of Nadhira suddenly began to scream in fear, but he could not move, he himself was frightened by the figure that was still holding his shoulder earlier.


Seeing Nadhira yelling a scream making Rifki immediately out of hiding, Rifki immediately came to Nadhira to see the situation.


"Aren't you Dad, Dhira?". Rifki asked as she examined Nadhira's leg.


"No papa, it's just that I felt something crawling on my leg".


Rifki looks around to find what has wrapped around Nadhira's legs, he finds there is a large enough caterpillar under Nadhira's feet.


"Law... Lath". Rifki blazed brick.


Although Rifki is not afraid of the occult, but he is so afraid when dealing with caterpillars, let alone large enough caterpillars.


Because Rifki had experienced something with caterpillars that made him so traumatized, because of the itchy pain and heat caused by the silky hair of caterpillars that are difficult to remove.


"Let's....". Shouted Nadhira again.


Nadhira was afraid of the caterpillar, so he screamed in fear and continued to stomp his feet because he was so scared.


Nadhira felt so disgusted by the caterpillar, the caterpillar was unknowingly trampled by Nadhira's feet that the caterpillar was killed immediately stepped on by Nadhira.


🐛:What's my fault


Rifki also pulled Nadhira's hand away from the caterpillar and a few steps further from Dawn who was silently pecking at a distance.


Dawn was relieved when she saw the two in front of her at this time, but they did not look at her at all, she was so frightened because until now the hand holding her shoulder still remained on her shoulder.


"To... To... Please". The Dawn of fear.


When Rifki remembered about Dawn who was far away from him, at first both only intended to scare the nakuti Fajar who was walking alone in that place.


When Rifki turned to look where Fajar was, Rifki was so surprised to see the figure behind Dawn at this time, surprised to hit Nadhira who was behind him.


"Ohh... Rif's sick, I think dong wants to back it up". Nadhira's complaint that was hit by Rifki arrived.


Rifki immediately pulled Nadhira's hand to get closer to where Fajar was, but Rifki kept his distance from Fajar and told Nadhira to stay behind him.


"Who are you!!". Rifki asked in a serious tone and her sharp gaze was directed towards Dawn.


"My name is Hakam". Someone who was behind Dawn answered him so lightly.


Dawn immediately shied away from Hakam, when Hakam finished mentioning his name to Rifki, shortly after a couple came to the place and held Hakam.


"Sir, forgive our son, he's a little mentally disturbed". The mother begged Rifki to forgive their son.


"My mother's not crazy". Denying Hakam.


"May I check on Auntie's son?". Ask Rifki while volunteering.


"But son, he's...". Hakam's mother seems a little hesitant about what Rifki will do.


"Tante just trust me the same friend Tan". Dawn tried to persuade Hakam's mother.


"I'm not going to hurt my mother's child". Rifki.


"Mom, let him check on our son, who knows he can cure him". Father Hakam slowly said that to his wife.


"alright".


Rifki drew closer to Hakam who was currently laughing in front of him, Rifki touched his thumb to Hakam's forehead and closed his eyes to feel what made Hakam experience such a thing.


Rifki opened her eyes suddenly and she felt an energy that pushed her to retreat from Hakam's body, as if Rifki would bounce off after she felt something inside Hakam's body.


"Something's wrong with Auntie's son!! Did Hakam ever introduce a woman to Auntie? What has Aunt done to that woman?".


Rifki's words were immediately able to make the Mother of Hakam so surprised, how the young man in front of him knew what he had previously done.


"Mom, what's this kid saying?". Ask Hakam's father to his wife.


"Why did she tragically die??". The question posed by Rifki again that was able to make everyone surprised by his words.


"WHAT ARE YOU SAYING!!! Don't just talk to you!! What woman do you mean? Don't talk nonsense". Hakam's mother was very angry with Rifki about what Rifki had said.


"My aunt doesn't speak!! That woman's called Rachel, isn't she?". Rifki said Rahel's name.


"Rahl.... The Hua... Hua. where Rachel, Rachel don't leave me, Rachel....". Suddenly Hakam screamed and became hysterical when Rifki brought up Rachel's name in front of him at this time.


The hysterical cry from Hakam made her mother feel so panicked, whether what she had to do for now, she had to keep her son away from the figure of the young man who had dared to reveal Rachel's name in front of him.


Nadhira holds Rifki's shirt tightly, he doesn't like to see Rifki being yelled at by someone confronted, but he can't do anything because Rifki forbids it.


"Let's get out of here, sir, don't listen to this shameless child". Invite Hakam's mother to her husband to leave the place.


"No Mom, please explain to me!! Who is Rachel!!". Hakam's father refused to be taken away by his wife.


"So you're more defending this smelly boy than your wife!!".


"I have the right to know, Mom, no matter what happens to our son, I have to know Mom, who Rachel is!!".


"Rahel is a shameless woman!! She's a lowly woman!!". Shouted Hakam's Mother.


"No Mom, she's a good girl, she loves me so much". Bela Hakam when Rachel's name was demonized before her father.


"He's not a good guy!!!". Shouted Hakam's Mother to Hakam.


Hakam is so unacceptable if the name of someone he loves is so ugly, for him Rachel is such a perfect woman and always gives love to him sincerely.


"If Aunty still remains on the establishment of Aunty, it's aunty's right, I just warned Auntie that the female spirit will never be able to feel calm, she will bang the Aunt family next, Aunty next, and the mental aunt's son will be at stake". Rifki warns about Rachel's spirit.


"I've never played in my words Auntie!! If Aunt still doesn't believe my words, then don't regret what's coming next". The addition so firmly.


Rifki immediately pulled Nadhira's hand to go away from the place, Nadhira who was pulled was only able to resign following the steps of Rifki who took him away from the place.


"Sorry before Auntie, my friend was able to see the occult maybe it's true he had communicated with them". The Dawn after that immediately followed Rifki.


"Rif wait for me". Say Dawn again.


Now there are only three people in that place who look at each other, while Hakam cries and several times calls Rachel's name, as if he is not ready to lose a figure like Rachel in his life.


Slowly the shadowy land of Rifki and his friends is no longer visible to the three, Ibu Hakam felt relieved because of their departure from the Hakam side.


"Mom, who exactly is Rachel? Then why is our son like this?". Ask Hakam's father to his wife.


"Already sir, forget it, why do you even believe the word of the child? Some of us also do not know them, Father do not easily believe, who knows they are indeed bad intentions for our families".


Now that Ibu Hakam is no longer safe, because someone managed to leak the secret to her husband by arriving, she must do something that can disappear the suspicion to her.


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