What's Wrong Pa

Uncovering mysteries

Hakam so believes that his lover Rachel is still alive today, because she often met her lover. He denied his mother's words about Rachel who had died, for her Rachel was still alive and always living beside him.

Although his son was a little mentally traumatized by an incident that caused his lover to die, Hakam still considers that Rachel is still alive and often meets him.

Rachel never left herself in times of joy or sorrow, Hakam was able to see the figure of Rachel, and often spoke to Rachel who according to people around her said that Hakam often spoke for himself.

"He died because of Mom!!!". Shouted Hakam.

Plakkkp..

"Kill me Mom, kill everyone".

His mother slapped him as Hakam yelled at him and beat what he had done before.

"What did you say ha??". Ask his mother while pulling Hakam's hair.

"I'm telling you the truth, Mother!! Mother is the cause of her death, if Mother does not kill her, she will not die leaving me Mother!!".

"You're accusing your mother of this ha? Sia sia this mother of yours is raising you to this size!! If you accuse your mother of this kind!!".

"Mother I'm not accusing Mother!! I'm talking because I know everything, Mother I don't want you to get lost because of this, Mother I beg you to give back your real sister Rachel, pity her, she's still a little mother!!".

Suddenly Hakam was like a young man who had no mental disorder, his words became so clear and resolute, different from usual.

His mother was so surprised because behind this attitude of his son as if it would be different from what he had known so far, maybe Hakam was aware of his crazy.

With Nita arriving (Mother Hakam ) left her son's room, she did not care at all what her son said about the younger brother of Rachel who Hakam knew was being hidden by his mother.

****starting story****

1 year ago, Hakam invited a girl to be introduced to his parents, the girl was none other than Rachel.

Rahel is an orphan, Rachel has a younger brother who is still in his 10s, since he was 10 years old his father left for a long time, at that time his sister was just born.

His father had an accident that was severe enough to cause his father died at the scene, while his younger brother was also born.

During this time his mother who became the backbone of the family to send him and his sister, as well as his sister, but since he set foot at the age of 17 years his mother left because his mother has a disease that is difficult to cure let alone the economic conditions that are less able to get treatment.

Since the departure of his mother he was so close to the figure of a man who was almost 20 years old, the man was always there for Rachel when the likes and sorrows of the two were always together.

During those 3 years, they went through with full mind, Rachel so loved the figure of the young man she knew, the young man was none other than Hakam. Now the age of Hakam at the age of 23, he really wants to marry his idol.

Finally he invited Rachel to meet his mother and introduced Rachel to his mother, initially her mother was so kind to Rachel, and she was very happy, however, since learning that Rachel is a poor orphan, her mother strongly disapproves of her child marrying the girl.

Unfortunately Nita came to the house of Rachel who was still made of clay and also wooden walls with a heated feeling.

"I'll give you the money you want, as long as you leave my son, never come back to this place". Nita said angrily at Rachel's house while throwing some red banknotes at Rachel's face.

"I don't need Auntie's money!! I was still able to make enough of my own life, as long as Auntie knew, I had never been taught by my parents to ask!! I'll also leave without Aunt asking for one".

"Good if you are aware of your position!! You're not my level".

"Excuse me Auntie".

Brakk...

Rachel with her heartache shut the door of her house hard in front of Nita, her legs so limp because of what the parents of the person she loved the most did.

Finally he dropped himself behind the door of his house, he also leaned his body on the door, he was confused as to what he should do next is he going to leave this house? Leaving behind memories that he has been sharing with his family? Leaving everything?.

Because the door was closed inside, making Nita immediately leave the house, he did not care what felt by Rachel the most important for him was Rachel to stay away from the only child.

"Sister, why is Brother crying?". Ask his sister innocently.

"Sister is not papa kok Dek, Brother just flickering, oh yes Adek already eat?". Rachel asked with her shoulder.

"Sister, I'm the one who hasn't eaten, right? Brother eat first".

"Yes Dek, soon we'll leave here, Adek sort out Adek's goods first yes". There were so many incision wounds in his heart, but he had to pretend to be strong in front of his younger brother.

"Why did you arrive, brother? Where are we going? This is Dad and Mom's house, I don't want to leave here".

His sister forced to stay in that place, he did not want to leave the place however he grew up in that place.

"God!! Dengerin Brother!! We need to get out of this place as soon as possible!!". Rachel snapped to her sister with tears, in fact she herself did not want to leave the place, but there was no other choice so she inevitably had to go from there. "Please Adek understand? We'll be gone in a minute".

"Why is Big Brother yelling at me like that? I just don't want to leave this place, this is the only relic from Mother, is Brother no longer dear to Mother?".

Rachel immediately hugged her only sister, however her sister was her most precious treasure, she had no other family than herself.

Rachel felt so very guilty for yelling at her sister, she had never said that to her sister, but because of her emotions she forgot to say harshly to her sister.

"I'm sorry Brother, Brother is helpless at this time, sorry Brother, Brother is wrong, you shouldn't know that young man Dek". Rachel tightened her embrace, she felt so guilty to her sister.

The cry that he had been holding up since, suddenly he just let out, as if he would no longer be able to hold it, the tears continued to rebel asking to be released.

Not long after they had finally finished packing their goods that they would bring, they immediately left the house that was so very meaningful to both.

Memories that mean so much to them, a father's struggle to build the house, whether they will live where next because they also do not have the right purpose for them to come.

"Sister, I'm tired, until when do we have to keep going? Where are we going, brother?". Complaints from his brother.

"Patience Deck, Brother is still on a cheap contract, we rest here first yes Dek".

Rachel invited her sister to come to the nearest musholla from that place, so that her sister could rest and herself could worship in that place, however she did not want to lose the direction of her qibla.

His sister immediately rested in the corridor of the musholla, Rachel immediately left her brother who rested with peace to perform his worship.

"God has no greater problem than You have prepared great happiness, You will not test Your servant beyond his ability, give the Servant patience and fortitude for all the trials You have given, make the way easy for the servant to reach Your guidance".

As Rachel prayed fervently, there came a noise from outside the place where her sister was sleeping, Rachel immediately let go of her face and rushed to her sister.

"Sorry sir, what is Buk? What's wrong with my brother?". Rahel asked while trying to get close to her sister.

"Oh this is Ma'am's Grandpa? Say the same Adeknya, musholla is not a place to sleep!! Better get out of here". Said a Father to Rachel with a very rude word.

"Yes sir, we're sorry for making such a fuss in this place, we'll be out of here soon". Said Rachel while hugging her sister.

Rachel hugged her sister tightly, what other trials they had to face next, in silence Rachel shed her tears at the words she should not have heard.

"Sorry Father, what is this?". Ask someone who looks like an Ustadz.

"Look, Mr. Ustadz, this kid sleeps haphazardly in this musholla, soiling the environment".

"Astaghfirullah piety, sir, we as Muslims do not say such things, Allah hates such things very much".

"I'm sorry sir, we don't have a house, we're leaving now". Rachel Obviously.

Rachel immediately picked up the bag she had brought earlier, and helped her sister to stand up from the place, with a tearful groan she walked away from the place.

"You don't have a house?". Ask Ustadz while stopping the steps of the brothers.

"Yes sir, we're orphans, actually we're looking for a cheap contract, because walking far enough we rest here for a while, forgive us".

"Dek, how if you live in my house, just deket house from here too, it has not been in residence for a long time, later the rent can be nyicil".

"Really Sir?". Rachel asked with both eyes glazed over.

"Yes Dek, let me show you the way".

"Thank you sir, for the good of the Father, may Allah repay you many times".

"Aamiin ya Rabbal alamin".

Mr. Ustadz immediately took Rachel and his sister to where they meant, the house was deliberately vacated because it wanted to be sold but when he saw the brothers made him give up the house for them to take care of.

Rachel was so happy, perhaps this was the answer to her prayer even though the process was so winding.

While on one side Hakam continues to look for his lover because some days have not returned home, his neighbors also no one saw the departure of Rachel and her sister.

"It's not wrong a few days ago that someone came to his house".

"Who is Ma'am? If you can know how it is? Is she a family away from Rachel?". Ask Hakam enthusiastically.

"Women aged 40 tabunan Nak, clothes are good, her hair is in a bun and there is tahilalat on her cheeks, I also do not know who that person is, she was angry with Nak Rachel while throwing money like that".

Hakam was shocked when he heard what Rachel's neighbor told him about the incident at the time.

Hakam immediately took out a photo from his wallet, he also showed the photo to the mother.

"Is this the man, Mom?".

"Yes, son, this is the guy, I'm pretty sure this is the guy".

Hakam was so surprised by what the person said, the photo was none other than a photo of his biological mother, how Hakam was not surprised because the person in question was his own mother.

Hakam immediately rushed towards his house in anger, however what is done by his mother is very outrageous especially with the orphan who has been abandoned by his family and lives alone with his sister one has been treated like that by his mother.

Many days that Hakam continued to seek the existence of his lover but never found it also after socializing with the environment around where Rachel lived he finally found out that his mother was the cause of Rachel's departure.

"Mother!!... Mama!!... Mama!!... Mother where!! Mama!!". Hakam kept calling his mother from a distance.

"What's up, son? Why scream like that!!".

"What did you do to Rachel!!! Why did Rachel leave her house!!". Shouted Hakam.

"Mom ngak why, he left the house is up to him, not Mom's business too".

"You know, she's an orphan, Mom!! Not having a brother!! Why did you do that to him? If you don't approve of our relationship, don't do something like that Mom!! What if he's why?".

Hakam immediately entered his house and followed by his mother from behind, Hakam angrily put his clothes in his bag he wanted to go to find where his lover was.

"What do you want to do? Don't leave Mom". Nita immediately stopped what her son Hakam was trying to do.

"I'll find Rachel Mom, if Rachel doesn't meet I won't go home!!".

"Rulers!!! Stop!!! Don't stay with Mom Son!!".

With his anger Hakam left the house and ignored his mother who kept screaming calling him.

Hakam continues to seek the existence of Rachel, however Rachel is a gentle girl and she is the backbone of her family, she must provide for the needs of her sister.

Because of the lack of income that he got so he could not afford to send his sister, the money from his work can only be made to eat every day.

****Thank you for your support****