BETWEEN THE CEO AND MAFIA 2

Ayash vs Bayu

Hi bund....

Read the comments like serem-serem yes. There is a hardline Ayash team and a frontal line Bayu team. Why become a blasphemed author.... 😱

It's just a fictional story that's just pure. The goal is to entertain anyway, but if many become high blood because read this story the author apologizes, yes.... The author can't create a story that conflicts plates and ultimately happy ending.

This novel is indeed a heavy conflict, if read in earnest, the content is also not about the actor or the player. Where is the reader who likes to say Bayu wants to take people's wives? How easy it would be for him to take Prita from Ayash. But he didn't.

This novel is Bayu's first lead male, yes.... So it's only natural that his story now focuses a lot on him. The story is also intended to make the development of the character of a Bayu from the once very cruel mafia into a better human being. Can't the bad guys repent? Once evil times are forever evil.

You are too focused on the issue of the player so you cannot enjoy the story. But there are many conflicts. Especially Ayash's supporters, can't you focus on the character Ayash the author made so perfect. He never changed in the first place, remained a good man, a woman's dream in the real world.

That kind-hearted Ayash can't make you proud and moved, how dear he is to his son and wife, especially his relationship with Daniel. Though they have no blood ties, but the closeness is like a biological parent. Why do you guys focus on the problem of pebinor players continue? That's not part of the author's story.

But yes, back to your own taste. There may be a lack of liking for novels with heavy conflict and a distorted plot twist that is completely unpredictable.

Writing a story is not easy. It may take you only a minute or two to complete a chapter. But, the author takes hours to pour ideas in the form of writing. Especially if you have to tell about medical problems, the author must read many references so that the story is real.

Similarly, when the author tells about drug smuggling, weapons smuggling that Bayu had done in season 1, the author to read the references and imagine if he became a mafia himself, he said, what sly idea to use.

Please, finish the war and enjoy the story. Whoever your favorite character, please continue to support in a way that permeates the core of the story that the author wrote.

The author also does not forget to thank the kind reader who wants to like, comment, vote, thank you gift.... all of that really became an encouragement to continue writing this story until the end. Sorry if the author can not satisfy all of you because the author does write following the author's own mind path that may be not in line with the author's thinking path.

Saranghae ⁇ ️