
This story is in the revision stage.
Sorry if it disturbs the comfort of your readers, because the previous script was too many scenes that I cut. Until making the script seemed lifeless for me personally.
However, with the presence of a new script, I hope it will be better and you can understand this storyline. This is my first novel and my first book.
If there are criticisms and suggestions, you can tell me directly through Instagram with the account name @bossytika
So much and thank you.
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Point of View 1 All - knowing
Point of View 1 All-Knowing
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Tika POVs.
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The sound of a car horn in front of the fence broke my conversation with my brother. His name is Max, he always scolds me with a few weird questions if I want to get out of the house, especially if I'm picked up by someone else, like now.
More like introgating his own sister. Go where? How-how long? With who? Know where? What job? Where is the home address? And there are still many others that always make me dizzy instantly.
If it is in this situation, usually I always pray, may the person who picks me up soon. So that I can be free from that pile of questions.
“I go first yes, Brother!” I shouted as I got up and walked away leaving him.
“No manners, deh! Should he go down first dong, permission is the same cake house people want to take you on the road,” scolding Max.
“My brother, darling, I'm in a hurry! So I didn't allow him to meet you, my god” while blinking one eye. “Byeee.” I walked quickly to get out of the house.
“Basic naughty,” umpatnya while shaking his head. I saw that before turning around.
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“Haiii .. how was your day?” sweep me when opening the car door and then get into it and immediately sit. *yeah sit, Bambang, standing period~
“Good, you?”
Once I glanced at the living room window, the curtain was slightly open. The window looked black, but not so thick, until I realized that a pair of eyes were watching, and then nimbly, I immediately closed the car door.
“Where do you eat?” ask Jefri.
“Do not know the children, 'the ones who fouled. Are they no longer happy?” I asked while looking at him.
“Nothing, just this afternoon when I told you to call.”
“Ooohh,” I replied when this hand started rummaging through the contents of the bag to look for that thin object, which is a mobile phone.
“However I tried whatsapp Emperor deh.”
My two thumbs began to nimbly press the phone screen, without a sound, I sent whatsapp messages to a group of many members.
Me : So where are we gathering? I've already picked up Jefri.
Emperor: We ate first, I haven't eaten all day. I'm the same Dodi, Alex and Nando are also already he said.
Me: I know how to eat first, but where are you?
Let me go with Jefri straight there.
Emperor: Sorry sorry, we met at Aroma Depot deh. Ordinary place, Jefri knows where it is.
Me : Oh okay.
As soon as I closed my phone, I immediately said to Jefri, “Say eat at Aroma Depot. You know the place?”
“Oh, over there? Uh, but we stopped by and it's okay, right? Just a moment, not ten minutes. It's okay, right?” pinta Jefri.
“Yes, it's okay kok.”
Jefri immediately targeted the gas car faster than before, because he already knew the direction and purpose of our trip to where. Not long after he deflected the direction of his car, went into a yard someone's house and parked it backwards.
“I want to give you this package. Do you wait here or come down?” jefri looked at me.
"I just wait here, yeah, what the hell is that?” I asked when I saw a box in his hand.
“Oh this, his vaping temen me, want him to sell. Wait yes, if that's the machine I turn on, let the AC keep alive,” he explained while opening the dashboards in front of me and taking his wallet.
I only replied with a nod of my head as a sign of agreement. I stared at him until his back disappeared from my eyes. The heart of the gospel suddenly felt attracted to him. Both times, she was too gentle for a friend's size. It was so different when we were together with other friends. And my curiosity began to appear.
I wonder what kind of man this is. And I always couldn't hold back my curiosity until I could get the answer. That's me.
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