Jane's Revenge

Greetings Author

The third novel ended in Noveltoon ⁇ ️

Thank you loyal readers who have accompanied until ahkir with your comments and likes. ''Sorry if there are still many shortcomings of this novel. May you be entertained. 😊

A little story about the character of Jane's Revenge novel.

Edric is the main antagonist. Edric can see for himself quite dominating the story but because the antagonist so evil attitude. Make a character like Edric, difficult easy. How do you explain, he tuh the main character will certainly always be in every chapter but the behavior of kayak dajjal 🙃. Usually the main character tuh baek baek, not arrogant, diligent saving etc. The readers are afraid to read it first,

"Langan taekk kok ya metu continue, males I moco, remove wae novel.e" 😶

So as far as possible I describe the depiction of Edric as detailed as possible seasoned with side story stories so that readers do not run away because they are fed up with the character.

An example of a story that has a main character but antagonist is the Death Note story, Light Yagami. (Anime/comic lovers will know.)

Perhaps there are other examples of stories whose main characters are antagonists as well? I want to read 🧐

While the protagonist is clearly Vivian. If Jane is called a Tritagonis gray figure, or can be called "hero shadow" in the say good no, in the say evil yes too. (Where is tor!)

Like Robin Hood, helping the poor by stealing from the rich. Less is more like that.

So Jane is good what's evil?

I really like Jane-Edric. Their chemistry is strong and fits in with each other. But because I am a cruel author so the author just separate them.

ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha.

Hing ding 😅

Or maybe I'm making another alternative story that this time tells the development of Daniel and Jane's relationship? But later afraid his story is too long and boring like a soap opera ind*** 😶

Can you give his advice, if it is good to make a new novel (perhaps the second book of Jane's Revenge) or in the next chapter let the chapter be long?

Or is it enough that just finished Jane's Revenge novel is really over and I made a novel with another new story?

Hmm confused also 🗿

Want to ask the readers prefer visual stories with photos of people/original scenery like in my novel or with illustrations, examples like graphic design, anim, cartoon?

Then prefer a novel with many chapters or a little chapter like mine this 😅?

Again sorry yes, because if I make a novel do not like it if it is too long. I fear I am not consistent myself, deviating from the conflict and flow everywhere. (Alesan aja lu thor 🙃)

Exceptions to fantasy.

Ask again (Most ask lu thor 😡) besides here like to read novels on which application again? What genre do you like?

For example, adult-romance, romance-fantasy (example vampire stories and the like), reincarnation or others? Horror-mystery stories?

Thank you for reading my unimportant words. Pray for me to write a new story again ya ⁇ ️

Please give advice if you want