My Story Elfiza Anestasia's

Dusk At Taman Pinus 1 (Refinition)

...💧 When tears have dripped no more words - words that are spoken💧...

...💧 When tears that speak all senses are no longer able to tell stories💧...

...💧Only tears tell me how bitter the embedded longing, how sweet the hatred becomes the deepest sorrow💧...

Scratches of black ink on the paper were folded by him to make it a plane and flown by the tightness that squeezes the body as if unable to neutralize it.

He only hopes that by flying the plane it brings a little bit of tightness in his heart, although not much, but can slightly reduce the sense of tightness in his heart.

"Bring off the taste that I hate" he murmured softly.

It is difficult if you can never forget everything that happened, whether it was a mistake or a destiny that must be lived.

It was as if it was incessantly scratching his deepest heart, as if it was not satisfied enough to just incise one wound without making a new one in his heart. That day Elfiza really cursed her.

If that day he and others did not go there maybe the incident will not happen again and why must the two people who always scratched the wound for his heart.

Flashback...

It has been a month since the stupid stalker event passed, and sure enough Elfiza speech quiet day is always disturbed by the creature there is only the behavior that makes everyone misunderstand their relationship.

"Elfizaaaaaaa" Sri called the name of Elfiza who was called to turn around in disbelief if her friend was in front of her now, with Yunia and Zia, because they canceled to visit the flower.

"Guysssss" cried Elfiza as her consciousness returned and hugged like a teletubis.

"Oh my God, how are you?" ask Zia

"Allhamdulillah well, you guys?" Answer Elfiza interspersed with questions anyway.

"Allhamdlullilah" they said in unison, which made Elfiza chuckle.

"House ko deserted beut dah, already rich grave on where the hell?" Ask Yunia.

"Lgii on go sister" replied Elfiza casually

"On each weekend, huh?" ask Sri.

"That's the case, Brother Yudis again there is a tour of duty from his campus to Lombok. today his last day may be tonight or tomorrow morning just same here" explained Elfiza.

"Keep mommy together where ?" Ask Zia

"Father same mother has been 2 weeks away to Hong Kong he said the business deal is so, if brother Yudha does not know where the party went" afraid to be asked again all Elfiza mention his brother's name.

"Ohhhhhhh" they just oh ria make Efiza grunt.

"We miss Loe El" said Sri, who was taken by two friends.

"Gue is also very confused even "

"Lpe why the hell since moving loe never play our tengokin, just once at that time, even the malem immediately return" upset Yunia if you remember that time.

"He forgot us brother" replied Sri.

"No, by the way, don't worry" replied Efiza.

"Why don't you ever play?" ask Zia.

It was the question of the Pilgrimage that forced Elfiza to recall the incident that nearly a year and a half ago the Ekfiza tomb was deep - deep.

"Why loe?" Ask Sri

"Yes, we have arrived - we have been bengong anyway" said Yinia

"Okkk... continue to tell you what kind of loe & ga sepetin to play to Pangandaran "pinta Sri, because it does not get an answer from Elfiza.

From where Elfiza had to start telling stories, feeling confused also to tell stories, she just did not want to be considered weak by her friends because of the incident that resulted in her getting rampaged by her father.

How not to get scolded by the father if the only girl who claimed to be staying at the airport even went home early in the morning.

Flashback On Inside Flashback

That afternoon, after returning from the beach, Elfiza immediately rushed to prepare - ready to immediately return to bloom because she no longer wanted to see or deal with Nano.

Sri, Zia and Yunia who tried to ban Elfiza were no longer able to prevent her from coming home that night, even Sri who was worried and offered help to Elfiza to be escorted by her brother Tigor,

finally succumbed because Elfiza still wanted to go home alone.

And that night finally with the drama of the friends finally he managed to return home safely to his destination.

Until the house clock has shown at 02.00 in the morning, which scares him, Elfiza is safe until home but she did not survive the nagging of her father.

"Are you crazy deck, this is what time deck why desperate to go home anyway?" asked Yudha who opened the door for him, at that time Yudha was just going to sleep, if only Elfiza had not called her and asked to be opened the front door.

"You can ask your sister to pick you up" Yudha really did not end up thinking with her desperate sister's way of thinking.

"Sorry brother" that's what Elfiza said.

After arriving at the door of the magnificent villa, Elfiza immediately called her brother Yudha to open the door, she did not want to squeeze the doorbell of her house because she was afraid to disturb others because she called Yudha.

"Yes Allah deck .. deck .. if you know how to try deck?You are this" asked Yudha ..

"Yes, it's gone in" added Yudha.

"Daddy is home, brother?" elfiza asked whispering while tiptoeing.

"Yes, he came home this afternoon, so you went back to the room" Yudha replied, hearing her brother Elfiza's orders to speed up her steps.

Because Elfiza herself was afraid of the father's nagging, and at that time the Wira's father who woke up because he felt thirsty, the two brothers' mepregoki was settling down - ngendap to enter their respective rooms.

At first the father of Vira thought that the same door opened Yudha was Judis his son, who

just coming home and maybe not want to disturb the others, but when Elfiza and Yudha get closer to the stairs then the Wira's father realized that it was not Judis but his daughter.

"Elfiza" someone's call made Elfiza stiffen in her place, because she knew exactly who called her.

"Didn't you ask permission yesterday to stay in Pangandaran?" Asked the Wira's father who approached her, the look on his face showed how angry he was.

"Let's why are you here now?" Back the story said from the mouth of the father of Wira.

Because of the fear of Elfiza did not dare to answer any of her father's questions.

"Anestasia's father's answer!" That was the first time I snapped at Elfiza.

Fear, surprise and other things mixed up in Elfiza made her silence unable to answer her father's questions.

But when Yudha asked him he was lying, out of nowhere came the words that glided just from his lips, but he was never good at lying.

"What's Anestasia?" Once again the Wira's father asked and this time he really demanded the answer, Elfiza still remained silent.

"Dad asked once again to you El, why is it here now?" snapped by Wira's father because he was furious to see his daughter never answer his question.

"Em..ee... i...i.it . a.anu. a.yah" said Elfiza stammering - spoken brick.

"Talk right "back the snaps are heard.

"Dad don't yell at him, let's know El can't be yelled at" Yudha said, trying to appease her father.

"Don't cry Daddy needs answers not your cries" explained Wira's father.

"Dad be. kasian El "pinta Yudha to the father, felt like watching his sister being yelled at like that.

"It is precisely because this father is the same father's son, so the father is like this" this time the target of the Wira's father is Yudha, but Yudha is very accustomed to his father's nagging.

"Do you know what time is Anestasia?" His father asked, Elfiza nodded.

"Well, if you know what time it is, why go home alone?" Back sounding.

"Dad is the father of El" Yudha said.

"Silent Prayudha, let your sister know that what she's doing is wrong" explained her father.

"But yeah.not now kasian El, it's late for sure he cape well" pinta Yudha again persuaded.

"When should? How come he did the same thing again so you want to?"

"Not so well" Yudha answered erroneously, Yudha could no longer defend Elfiza if what her sister did was proven wrong.

"Do you have no family? Don't have your dad's number, or your sisters? Until you don't call one of us, what do you think this is dad?" Back there was a clash that made the Elfiza sob.

"No. hiks...hiks..so .. a...hiks ... well" said Elfiza.

"Where is it?" ask the Wira's father who began to lower his voice, but still sounded firm.

Wirapun's father honestly could not bear to see his favorite girl crying like that, Wira's father never increased the intonation of what he said again yelled at his daughter.

But she also wanted her little girl to know that what she was doing was wrong and would be fatal to her, and Wira's father didn't want Elfiza to repeat it again next time, if not given a reprimand like this.

Wira's father was afraid that Elfiza would do it again someday.

"A...ku. just. .. hiks ...hiks .. do not want ... troublesome.... hiks....hiks ..... father and brother only " elfiza replied still with her cries.

"Listen to the deck .. If it's like this you even make everyone bother, if something happens to you like where?" Wira asked, and Elfiza realized her mistake.

Elfiza did not realize that her actions would cause her harm, she only realized when her father spoke like that. "Sorry dad, don't think about it" said Elfiza honestly.

"It's already ... This is your first mistake, but if I hear you do it again I will not hesitate to punish you" explained Wira's father. Elfiza nodded her head.

"Yes rest and another Atmaja Hero is not weak and that applies to you, if the slumped one must be able to rise again .. understand" said Wira.

"Understand father ".

Flashback off in Flashback....

"Woi even daydreamed" said Sri surprised Elfiza. "Ihhhh loe mah" said Elfiza in shock.

"Ya abis daydreaming anyway" complained Sri.

"Emang daydreaming what the hell loe?" Yunia asked, Elfiza just shook her head.

"Here sis, you rich do not know the miraculous nature of the child, if he drowned rich earlier, sometimes a smile - a smile of his own even the worse laugh itself, it makes you horrified" said Sri.

"Yes Yun, when she was in SD she fell off her bike" Zia added.

"What connection?" Ask Yunia.

"There, his brain a little sliding sis, fortunately ga geger brain yes "the answer of the last Sri makes Sri grimace because it is told in his head from Elfiza.

"Sia***n is really good to say to the filter "the Elfiza snort, which makes the sahabtnya laugh.

"Ehh yes he said temen - temen loe want to play here where?" ask Zia.

"Home home" answered Elfiza briefly.

"Co home?" ask Sri.

"And you guys who said you didn't come come home are them" explained Elfiza.

"Well, you can't see dong" said Sri

"Who can I meet ?" someone from the entrance and exit of the side courtyard asked, Elfiza and friends turned their heads.

"Alifffffffff" shouted the three girls together.

"Well, I don't want to scream - can I scream?" ask Alif.

"Since when?" Sri bantal asked,

"Five months ago" It was Elfizula who answered Sri's question.

" Just .. Why did you say five months ago?" alif asked which Elfiza answered by turning her lazy eyeball.

"Ko Loe can be here? and for five months anyway, I never saw loe again junior songong " asked Sri.

"Gue join bonyok (bokap, nyokap ) I moved my polite senior brother!" answer Alif.

Alif and Sri do not always get along if they are together then it is not surprising if they are like that. "Oh dear Elfiza" said Alif who made everyone glare at her eyes facing Elfiza and Alif alternately.

"WHAT!!. Darling?" said the three girls slightly shouting at the same time.

"Look down my boss dong, you guys haven't gotten a call before, dear what?" tanya Alif who was presented by Sri.

"Have a son to say" Sergah Sri quickly.

"Yes abis so that it just glares, the first thing I want to talk about dear" Alif told Sri Sabil poking his chin.

Making his chin flick his brow hands off his chin, and glaring at his eyes ready to get angry.

"Isss is fierce," said Alif as he stepped closer to Elfiza.

"They have come a long way - why not make a party" suggested Alif.

"Yes as a welcoming ceremony" explained Alif.

"Loe's idea is ok too, how is it?" asked Elfiza, and her three friends managed to gap as well as Alif, because they knew very well the nature of El who did not like the party because many people, this even agreed to Alif's speech.

"Loe sure El?" ask Sri

"Why do you" said Elfiza.

"It's not that you hate parties the most, it's just that many people" replied Yunia.

"The party does not have to be a lot of people we are everywhere so stay added music and snacks" reply Elfiza

"It is also" said Zia.

"From a party like that how about going around Lembang?" tawar Alif gave advice back.

"Where?" ask Elfiza

"Agreed" replied in unison from the three girls.

to be continued....