
Hello everybody..
How are you guys doing?
may we always be given the health of the almighty.
Some days I deliberately deactivated Mangatoon account, because during New Normal I was preoccupied with the real world rather than hehe
But not long ago I re-opened this platform and read some comments from you.
First of all I am very grateful, it turns out that my story is much liked. And do not forget there are also some comments about my storyline.
May I discuss here.
Some of you say that my story is said to be less educational, considering there is an 18+ scene that I put in my chapter.
Here I apologize if my story looks like it. Giving the impression of the female character looks cheap and the male figure looks a jerk.
But here I want to emphasize to you, that this is just an imaginary story that I pour into writing. The character I made is not as perfect as other characters that you often read in other titles.
So sorry sorry to say that the Elkana I made was not like the handsome Prince figure and Milly was not like the graceful king's daughter who was liked a lot in most fairy tale books.
I'm just trying to portray someone in a realistic direction.
The ugly side please don't take heart.
But I think my story has many ugly sides wkwk
If you don't like my opinion above, I don't care. Because I write for my own personal pleasure. My story is much appreciated, I assume is a form of gift that I received after I wrote for you.
Well that's all from my explanation.
Oh yeah, some of you are also asking for visuals. I will give you brother 3
Maybe the visuals I give are often used as visuals in other stories.
The first, the,
Elkana Bramawan's..
Until now I like halu. I like to think that El is my girlfriend, not Milly's boyfriend 3
Aditya Andreansyah's,
Hmm want to cry Adit smile like this:')
This is Milly Anderansyah.
Honestly, looking at Milly's visuals for me is easy hard. This is Milly's character in my mind is feminine but has a tomboyish side. There's a masculine side to a girl like Milly.
This visual is a last resort for me, although it's actually still lacking hehe
I only share the main character, well, the others you can imagine yourself.
What's a sequel to Nathan and Lyana, I'm probably gonna rethink. Maybe I can bill that I'll back off publishing the story.
You could say the concept of the story they both have elements of Age gap - mature content.
Well, if I make mature content here it's heavy. Where the Mangatoon Party is very disciplined and strict in the selection of mature stories.
18+ story only I have to be reviewed many times. How do I actually make a story there is a mature scene? 3
"don't you have a mature scene, brother?"
Doesn't mean anything. For me, the story is no touch mature is less greget wkwk
It can be said that it is one of my reasons why I accidentally entered the 18+ scene in my Brother Friend chapter.
Alright. I ended my explanation too long.
Again I apologize if my writing is still not pleasing to your hearts. And also I thank you guys for liking El and Milly.
It turns out that there are also those who like both of them :')
May we all be healthy always, aamiin!
Love, though,
Octavian23