Melody Love Aqila

Author Notes

The assalamualaikum warahmatullahi wabarokatuh

Praise be to Allah the Lord of the worlds, with His mercy, all the lives of nature become harmonious. His science will not run out even if the entire ocean becomes his ink.

Shalawat and greetings may be bestowed upon sayyidul Anbiya' the prophet Muhammad Shallahu alaihi wasallam, his friends, his family, his descendants and all his people.

Thank you author say as much as possible to the loyal readers of the Aqila Love Melody, because this is the author's first novel, it must be admitted that many notes need to be repaired.

Author notes that receive criticism from readers include:

Word writing without editing which causes there are some words that are miswritten. In this case the author apologizes to the readers.

The storyline that the author originally used was a back and forth plot, in accordance with the genre of adventure. But it turns out that it can make it difficult for some readers to understand the content of the story, so that the plot is made forward. The backflow is there but not as much as it was.

There are several contents of the story that autor trim, including:

the love story of Gamal and Shinta

Initially the author wants to create more in their love conflict. From the start of introductions, matchmaking to within their households.

the author originally wanted to create the figure of Anwar antagonist after the accident

causing damage to his face and loss of some of his memory. The author would like to write that in the memory of Anwar Shinta is a person who has hurt his heart, an evil and selfish figure. Because of this misunderstanding, revenge arose in Anwar's heart. Revenge that caused him to regret for the rest of his life.

Why do pruning?

There are some stories that change between the thoughts and writing of the Author, such as:

- the process of returning Anwar's memory, in the mind wants to be made as dramatic as possible but this is constrained by the dragging of other characters. The author himself is less satisfied with the author, less greget.

A relatively long time for the creation of novels. This is because the author is not experienced in writing so that in writing it takes relatively longer than professional writers. This is also influenced by the busy author in the real world.

The initial description of the story for which it is still difficult to understand is as follows:

Bagus Anugerah is the CEO of Lion gold Company, a company that is very well populated in almost every field, from IT to Petro Chemical. The condition of his company can affect the economy at home and abroad. His wife's friendship with Shinta's mother made the bond between their sons and their daughters.

The conflict begins when Shinta is faced with two difficult choices, the first choice is to obey her mother's orders or the second choice fulfills her lover's promise to wait.

Shinta chooses to devote herself to her mother and breaks her promise to her lover

The conflict continued because it turned out that her lover was the sister of her future husband. Her heartbroken sister went to comfort herself for several years. He returned with a beautiful woman as his future wife.

The conflict gets complicated because the woman whom Shinta's sister-in-law married was not an ordinary woman, she was a disaster bearer in the family of Bagus Anugerah.

From the marriage of Ardian and Shinta was awarded two children, namely Aqila and Tegar, while from the marriage of Gamal and Anggun was awarded a daughter named Qeira.

I hope the readers understand more about this story.