Making a Game in High School

Chapter 48: Visiting Rin's House

"How's it?"

Inside the library room that was still not too crowded, second grade student Sari asked me about the script she made.

It's the first time he's shown it to someone because that's probably an honor.

"The writing is tidy, there is little dialogue that is not fitting here and a few more here. The storyline was also a little messy in the middle."

"Okay," he said limp.

When it comes to work I don't want to lie to anyone, because that's what the previous assessment was right.

"Why don't you try sending it to a publisher after revising it?"

"I'm not yet confident to do so, knowing that Rin wrote the Magic School Assassin, I want to be like him."

"Then, would you stop by her place?"

At my invitation after school we both went to his house, because Rin did not come in so we all wanted to know the situation as well, for our own gaming work only once every two days we gathered at my residence.

I pressed the bell and a reply sounded.

"Can I help you?"

"This is my aunt, is Rin there?"

"Ah Tora, just a minute."

As usual Rin's mother greeted me cheerfully.

"You haven't stopped by for a long time, Rin's a little unwell so she decided to take a break today, then?"

He turned his eyes towards the friend I was carrying.

"His name is Sari, he's Rin's friend too."

Hearing that she cried.

"I didn't think that my daughter actually had any friends other than Tora, I thought she was lying, thanks for being friends with her."

"Tora, is she okay?"

I smiled doubtfully.

"Well, he's like that."

Hearing a friend he would cry.

"I have to call my husband to get home sooner."

"Please don't do that."

Obviously it would only bother him, we knocked on Rin's door and after being invited in my face was surprised because the room was much more tidy.

"Fufu how, my room is clean right."

I clapped my hands to respond.

"It's not her?"

"We've met in the library, please don't be formal."

I explained.

"Eh, so Sari wants to be a writer as well. That's very good what kind of genre do you like?"

"Genre school."

"I see your script."

"A little embarrassing but please look."

Rin read it a glance then nodded small.

"Good, it seems like Tora has already flagged things that should be fixed. Once completed this is promising enough if offered to publishers."

"You think so?"

"Yes, I can call Rana later to confirm that."

"Thank you very much."

Rin's mother showed up to put some juice and snacks for the three of us. He was a little bit of a play on the way out of the room.

"This is what's called the love triangle."

"No, we don't have that kind of relationship. Mama stop eavesdropping."

"Heh, but mama also wants to know the affairs of young people."

Rin painstakingly pushed her mother out.

His mother was most likely a victim of soap operas.

"You're not feeling well, are you okay?"

"I'm just sleep-deprived for working on the next script."

"No problem to relax, even the game is still a long time and also you have completed a quarter of the work."

"Mexi so I want to fight hard like everyone else."

"Health is important too."

Sari stared between me and Rin with sparkling eyes.

"You're like the protagonist of a novel, it's good material."

Rin and I both gave long bafas.

The writer's tendency is to write whatever he sees before his eyes.