THE END OF OUR STORY

13 TRAVEL FACTS “END STORY KITA”

(one)

The original intention when writing this story is actually only 20 episodes, according to the contract terms in noveltoon/mangatoon, with 1000 words per episode.

In fact? Um, it develops into 42 episodes and each episode is quite long (may be divided into 2, but confused where to cut it).

Honestly, as a reader, the number of episodes is less because I can not afford to read more than hundreds or even thousands of episodes. (Please bear it and my patience is not that long. huhuhuu..) So choose to make a story that is without conflict, straight, quickly finished.

Can anyone guess which episode was the most he said, and which was the least? (quiz inih question!)

(two)

This story is a fictional story but wrapped in real conditions. Because the intention from the beginning is indeed a kind of story smells of tourism and there is an element of information about how life (students) in the Netherlands, then.

Can everything be found in the real world?

Yes, unless there are 2 places (mmm, maybe the other is not the place anyway) that is disguised by his name. (if there is an intention to be a detective, it seems like he can meet his real name … *what is quiz question?)

(three)

In addition to the place, there are many names of people also nih... Are they real figures?

Yes, there are 4 real people according to their respective work; but only 1 person who remains with his real name, this character is only mentioned 2 x throughout the story. Who her? (quiz question again)

(four)

With the intention of making a semi-reportage story travel, it takes enough time (or maybe very?) long time to surf with Mbah Google to compile a travel itinerary with fairly up-to-date information.

To the extent that you have to open google maps to imagine the route of the trip. I have made a reasonable route, still have to learn about each place that is told.

As a result ... tetiba many advertisements entered in private social media about Red Light District (hahahaha.... sokooor!).

(five)

Because consciously has many shortcomings in language and writing, forcing yourself to go back and forth to open KBBI and synonym dictionaries (lucky to live in the present accompanied by Mbah G).

The intention is not to make the reader back down because a lot of wrong and messy writing .. (but I think many readers do not care too much too anyway, the important idea and storyline *manyun in the corner)

But actually very grateful anyway, because through writing this found that so many times use the wrong term or writing unconsciously!

However, there is one word that I use, with a common meaning used by people, but if you read in KBBI it actually means a little (or a lot?) different. (anyone wants to guess what word? *quiz questions can also)

(six)

Surfing with other Mbah G is to ensure the temperature in each season and the sunrise/sunset time, especially during the summer (because you want to include information about fasting in that season).

The time to compile the story also deliberately make a timeline (timeline) of years and even months so that all the time events can make sense.

(seven)

Every time you finish writing one script, it can be read repeatedly, edit again..it has been submitted to the review team, uh edit again …

Still after UP and follow reading, then it looks typo or wrong punctuation, or even feel the sentence is not good to read.

Only mempatin: hellow... why is this yesterday not visible??? Where are his eyes??? (well, not that extreme either)

Although I have found the correct word writing through KBBI, there are still many writings that when viewed again (after publishing), do not fit EYD. hahaha..

Indeed, man is not perfect because perfection belongs only to God *uhuk – is very wise.

(eight)

There are a lot of detailed things that end up not being told (extension? lazy reading?)

For example, why even though they studied at the same place in Bandung, but their parents never introduced Awan and Aurora? Can you mean “nitip” Aurora, so….

Or, how did mama Aurora explain to Aurora about her papa?

Or, maybe someone asked, superficially just said to meet new acquaintances, directly “dikerjain”?

Oya, including not so say that Aurora's name is “mentari”nya because it is loved ortunya Awan (two children their name also means sun & adhisti –nyari this name was Mbah G first. hahaha... uh mustnya this is a question quiz aja yes).

(nine)

The initial idea of the story turned a little when mid-writing, especially in what way Awan had prejudice on his father (it was really not a photo, but a photocopy of a marriage book..) and what relationship between his father and mama Aurora (was actually willing to fake marriage, only for the status of mama Aurora, then divorced).

Very initial idea even want his mother does not know anything, let more dramatic and ‘bite’….

But what is the power of my life has been a lot of drama (although it would be a weak story and less shady *hadezig!)

(ten)

While writing, I once felt in love with the characters Awan and Aurora, because they included many good things from the characters and the diverse nature of people known in one character. Like they're perfect, right?

The sweet scenes that try to be presented are also the result of watching what other people experience or my wishes that are not fulfilled.*the last thing to ignore

(eleven)

Who read for sure on the realization that towards the end of the story feels rushed to finish.

Iyeeessss... it's so!!!

Confess honestly, it is in a hurry to be resolved, because it turns out writing the story takes time and energy baaaaaanyak.

So want to quickly finish let alone actually until the middle of the reader a little (with 1-digit statistics).

Plus the tensia office work increased, so really like “Aaaarrrrghhh, when will this end??”

As the episode continues..

The more to the end the more tired want to make dialogue, more stories from the author just*maap yeee

Salut, lift the hat – thumbs up – big toes, the same writers who can parallel the writing of two stories even more, the episode is long too, the storyline is ajib-ajib. You guys are awesome!! *salamhormat

(twelve)

During this writing it is actually repeatedly broken charcoal when looking at the statistics of the number of readers archived.

There are 2 things that make it not stop: one, because there is a reader who is so loyal present to give his comments, he said, very and very honest admitted that it becomes a fire that continues to burn the spirit (let's not blazing2 –because it's not markobar–, but still burning);

second, because you want to finish what you started. Read the story that hangs, right nyebelin? Hehe…

Want a promo story, but stutter want a promotion how. Feel reluctant if promo spam everywhere trus so even bother other readers. ehlulagilulagi

(thirteen)

Even though the statistics had made me discouraged (hiks), but really grateful and happy because through writing this I can reminisce, I can reminisce,

scavenging for old memories that are left and can be poured into the story,

also increase language knowledge, as well,

daaan .. so the arena is grateful for all the things I have lived through in my life.*ciyeee smartass again, instead of asking me quiz ah questions!

(fourteen)

Bentar ... What is 14? Said 13?!

Yes, 13 kok .. because this one is just a cover. Hanging is not good tokh …

In closing, again want to thank all who have given support, have been faithful to read, just finished reading, or even someone read this section first new to episode 1?

Whoever you are, wherever …

THANK YOU for such a wonderful trip*menjura