In the End I Surrender

Passing Critical Times

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" How's my wife doing Doc?" Gavin asked again.

" I'm sorry, sir, I have to say this! Miss Arvania's situation is critical. He lost a lot of blood, and the hope of life is very thin, we just pray for a miracle." Doctor says.

Gavin's body felt weak. He sat in a waiting chair and could not think about anything else until the doctor left him.

Critically? Losing a lot of blood? The chance of living is very slim? No-no... This can't happen! Gavin doesn't want to until Vania leaves him.

" Hold on, baby for me and our son.. We can't live without you, forgive me for all my mistakes! Please hold on for us, baby." Monologue Gavin with tears streaming down his cheeks.

" Hix... Gava still needs you dearly, he is still too small to face this heavy ordeal. Fight Vania, fight for us." Gavin continued to say the words to support Vania even though he knew that Vania would not be able to hear them.

" Vania!!!!" Shouted Gavin.

Madam Rindu and Sandia ran over to Gavin. They went straight to the hospital as soon as Gavin gave the news.

" Gavin you why, son? How's Vania doing?" Ask the Miss Miss.

" Vania Ma's critical, life expectancy is only a few percent." Sahut Gavin made Miss Rindu gawk.

" Oh my God.... " Murm the Miss Miss Miss.

" We pray that sister Vania will be safe, Sister, I believe that sister Vania is able to pass her critical period. She's a strong woman sis, the ordeal she's been through is much heavier than all this." Said Sandia stroking her brother's shoulder.

" Thank you Sandia, I'll pray for Vania, I'll ask God to save her." Gavin.

Gavin left them for the musholla inside the hospital. He prayed to the Creator to save Vania, his beloved wife.

After she finished she returned to the ICU room where her mother and sister were still sitting there waiting.

A nurse came out of the room screaming for the doctor.

" Doctor... The doctor... Please patient." The nurse ran to the doctor's office.

The doctor immediately ran into the ICU room to check on Vania. Gavin seemed very worried about all that.

" Ma Vania why Ma? Is Vania going to leave me?" Tanya Gavin looked like a dazed person.

" Calm down Gavin! Let's just pray that Vania's okay." Sahut madam Miss.

An hour later the doctor came out of the ICU.

" How's my wife doing Doc?" Gavin.

" Thank God Miss Arvania has made it through her critical period."

Nyess....

Like ice water, Gavin's heart was slightly relieved.

" But at this time the patient is still unconscious, we wait until the next twenty-four hours, if the patient is not aware also we have to take action." Doctor says.

" Do your best for my wife Doc! I don't want to get my wife why napa." Gavin.

" We'll do our best for your wife, sir, then excuse me. You can meet your wife in turn." Said the doctor retreating.

" Thank you." Gavin.

" Mama or Sandia who went to see Vania first?" Gavin looked at his mother and sister.

" Just you! Mama will pray from here. She needs you more now, Mama and Sandia have to go home because we can't bear to leave Gava with bi Tuti." Sahut madam Miss.

" Okay Ma, I'll take my son." Gavin.

" Patient brother yes!" Sandia said in reply to a nod of the head by Gavin.

After their departure, Gavin enters the ICU room. He looked at the pale face of his wife, he clasped Vania's hand and kissed the back of his hand.

" Dear wake up! We need you so much, we miss you, baby. Please wake up! Awake darling!" Gavin said again with his tears.

" I'm sorry I can't take care of you! I will repay the man who made you like this, dear, the debt of life must be paid with life as well." Gavin.

Drt drt..

Gavin's phone rang an incoming call sign.

" Leon." Gavin Murmured.

Gavin picked him up immediately.

" So."

" I've caught Vania's hit-and-run, you'd be very surprised to see the guy." Leon Said.

" I'll be there." Sahut Gavin turned off his phone.

" I'll go, baby! I'm gonna teach a lesson to the man who hit you." Gavin.

Gavian exited the room. He drove his car to his house. Once there he immediately entered the secret room.

" You've come apparently." Leon Said.

" Where is he?" Ask Gavin.

" It's right there." Leon pointed to a woman sitting on a chair with her legs and hands tied.

Gavian approached him immediately. Her hair made her look up.

" Talita." Gavin Murmured.

" I've guessed that you're behind all this." Gavin said with great emphasis.

" Ma. af. I'm Gavin." Talita.

" I won't forgive you Talita!" Bentak Gavin pulls Talita's hair axar.

" I'll teach you a lesson because you dared to touch my wife!!!" Gavin yelled again while pulling Talita's hair rougher.

" Awh." Pekik Talita's.

Plaque....

A hard slap landed on Talita's left cheek. It feels hot and painful.

Plaque....

This time the slap landed on Talita's right cheek.

Gavin grabbed Talita's hair firmly making her grimace in pain.

" You should feel what my wife feels Talita, I'll torture you until you want your own death." Press Gavin.

" I'm sorry Vin, I'm sorry I did all that to Vania. Don't torture me! I'd rather be in prison for life than take torture from you." Talita pleaded.

" It's not that easy to persuade me Talita." Gavin Sahut.

" Leon, bring the knife here!" Gavin's Word.

" Good." Sahut Leon's.

Leon gives Gavin a penknife he used to execute his enemies.

" No Gavin! I beg!" Talita shook her head.

Sreth...... Nyess...

Fresh blood flowed from Talita's left cheek after Gavin slashed her.

" Shhh." Desis Talita holds up the sting.

" How does Talita feel?" Gavin's question stared intently at Talita.

" Sick Vin." Talita Sahut.

Sretti...

Gavin slashed Talita's right cheek.

" Awh." Pekik Talita's.

Gavin continues to torture Talita until Talita passes out.

" Let him be alone." Gavin washes his hands with soap.

Gavin left his home and returned to the hospital. He sat in the chair beside the bed.

" Dear wake up! The initial punishment I gave to Talita. If you don't wake up, I'll kill Talita right then and there. Wake up, baby, please! Don't punish me like this, baby! Please wake up!"

Tests... Tears of Gavin dripping on his hand. He could not help the sadness in his heart.

Arrive arrive...

Vania blinked her eyes.

" Sweetie you're sober!" Pekik Gavin happy.

" Gava... " Vania held her head which felt throbbing pain.

" Calm down, baby! Gava's at home with mom." Gavin Sahut.

" I'm where's Mas?" Ask Vania.

" You're in the hospital, baby, don't think about anything! I'll call the doctor first." Gavin said out of the room.

Vania tried to remember what happened.

" Talita." Vania Mumbles.

TBC....