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“Brie.” Vivian patted Brie's cheek softly as she slept. “Almost in the minimarket yes, I have to fill up the gas. We have arrived in the city and soon arrive at home.”

Brie nodded and opened her eyes because she had fallen asleep during the trip. A few minutes later, he got out of the car due to a bowel movement.

“Viv, I'm in minimarket huh. Want to nitip what?” Brie asked Vivian who was standing refueling.

Viv shook his head and went back to chatting with one of the police officers who was also refueling.

Brie walks towards the minimarket restroom. When he finished, he decided to buy some snacks to prop up his empty stomach. Brie brought some of her groceries to the cashier's desk.

“There can I help you again?” The cashier asked after he mentioned his nominal purchase. Brie nodded and thanked me. Minimarket visited is quite complete, typical of Seven Eleven in every corner of the city. He looked at some souvenirs of postcards hanging near the exit.

“Halo, Sweet!” Followed by the whistling sound of a man standing beside Brie. 

Brie looked to the side and got a ignorant face teasing her. This guy might be his age. The handsome face of a man does not easily make Brie melt.

“Mau accompanied spend a myriad of snacks that? Or are you more interested in being her snack?” The man was still trying to tease Brie.

Brie passed to the doorway and did not

“Hey, I'm talking.” The man followed Brie to the front of the minimarket. “By the way, nice butt, Sweet. Can I break it?” The sentence was accompanied by a loud pat on his butt.

Jesus, this guy is looking to die apparently! Brie could not help herself and instantly twisted her body while grabbing one of those brazen hands. With a martial style that has been crammed father since the age of ten, paralyzing one man is not difficult.

With one flick, Brie could twist the man's hand and push it against the minimarket's glass wall. 

Brie's getting pissed. He dropped his groceries, with his free finger he pressed a vital point around the man's neck. “You're chatty once. With a single tap, I can make this big mouth won't make a sound in the next few months.” Brie threatened calmly.

“Argh!” The man returned.

“What are other words besides ‘argh’ and yell like a frog boy?”

Brie further pressed her grip as she was annoyed the man still refused to apologize and just smirked. 

There's no harm in making this chatty mouth deterred a little, so thought Brie. When he was about to carry out his goal, suddenly a firm hand reached his waist and pulled him away from the wall.

“Choking him to death, will not deter this man, Miss.” The man who pulled her voiced steadily as he pulled off his pull on Brie's tiny waist.

“Let go of me.” Brie turned around and immediately looked at the man who had pulled her. The man didn't answer just looking back at him.

“Jax.” The raspy voice of the brash man patting Brie's butt suddenly broke the silence between the two. “Lucky you came to save me, man. This girl is crazy!”

“You're a fool, Otto.” Jax rebuked him and immediately grabbed the collar of the unbuttoned shirt Otto was wearing. “Come, you must apologize immediately.”

“But, man!”

“Or I'll choke your neck.” Jax said kalem. 

“Sorry.” Otto apologized half-heartedly as he stepped inside the minimarket and did not wait for Brie's response.***

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