Rafa and Ara

Episode 260's

Two days passed and there was no news of Vishnu.

He disappeared like he had swallowed the earth after the incident at the headmaster's invitation.

Ayirin had even asked the teacher and principal about his whereabouts.

They said Vishnu was only half an hour away in the kep room, after which he returned to the classroom.

Regarding his call to the principal's room, just wanted to confirm about the side job he always did after school.

Ayirin is not focused on learning, she is always restless and gets a reprimand from the teacher. He was repeatedly kicked out of class.

"Wishnu, where are you?" ayirin muttered while crying stifled.

Rafa looked at himself.

Rafa is a personal figure who does not want to bother with the affairs of others, but on Vishnu he is also curious where Vishnu went?

Why are these two days invisible to the trunk of his nose?

Is the mob back hunting him?

What's he got to do with those assholes? And what stuff did they hunt from him? inner Rafa.

Despite meeting Vishnu in a bad situation, Rafa feels attracted to him.

His courage and his hard spirit in fighting against the cruelty of life.

Like how tough he was against the thugs numbered 4 people alone. Even though the kicks, punches and sabers of sharp weapons hit his body, he still defended and attacked blindly relying only on a piece of iron.

Rafa himself was hit by a knife in the stomach because more enemies must be served alone.

But despite the unbalanced resistance, the delinquents managed to disable and run the ridge.

Rafa's daydreams were spoiled when he entered the four heroes of a friend of a manger, a perisak who always bullies on students who are timid, weak and poor in this school.

But they always escaped school punishment.

Their tall bodies are stocky with sharp and sangar stares make students afraid and as much as possible away from them and do not want to find trouble with them.

Their gang, led by Jimmy, is most violent and sadistic when it comes to bullying.

With his loyal lackeys Aldo, Charles and Irene were also his lovers.

There have been many students who have been victims of bullying by them, but no one wants to complain.

Although at first glance it is not logical, there are several reasons they are afraid to complain.

First fear of not being believed, second fear of being considered cowardly, third fear that the bully returns and commits torture.

Irene suddenly fell to the floor.

While walking, one of his legs got stuck in Ayirin's leg.

Irene screamed loudly while holding her buttocks and back.

Ayirin and the rest of the room were shocked, looking towards her who was still sitting on the floor.

Ayirin immediately got up and approached him.

"Irene, are you okay?"

"What's your ancestor?" Irene snapped roughly.

"Lo's feet are rather than wretch people mending cut aja."

"Truly cut it.." Jimmy stared cynically at him.

Ayirin's face immediately changed pias mengdugar his words.

"Sorry Irene, I really didn't mean it. I didn't know my feet were coming out of my desk box and blocking your way. I really didn't intentionally. I'm sorry." she said compassionately while helping Irene stand up.

But Irene brushed off her strong hand and grabbed her collar, pulling and slamming her body hard to the floor.

Ayirin's turn screamed in pain.

"Hey cupu, bring here your drinking water and your lunch" Irene exclaimed at the schoolgirl with thick glasses.

The girl gasped between her fears and immediately took what Irene asked for.

Afraid and trembling she handed him her lunchbox and water bottle.

Irene grabbed the object from her hand and then pushed her body hard into the table. The cupu grimaced painfully but silently did not dare to retaliate even staring too scared. This isn't the first time the lunchbox has been made trash by Irene.

Irene approached Ayirin, opened the food box, then in the water, whipped.

Ayirin looked at him from below with fear and dismay.

"What are you doing Irene?" he asked, he could already estimate what Irene would do to him.

Irene just smiled.

Ayirin was about to rise to his feet but violently Aldo and Charles kept her body on her knees.

"You haven't had breakfast, have you?" Irene opened the lunch box.

"Eat for free for you..." Irene spilled the food onto Ayirin's head slowly, continuing to turn on her shoulders. Then throw rough food boxes and water bottles into Ayirin's lap.

They laughed out loud.

Ayirin closed her eyes with both hands squeezing strongly. His hair and school uniform were dirty instantly. The floor is dirty too.

Everyone in the classroom was just watching with a pity face, no one dared to help.

Even some of them immediately came out of the room with fear.

Ayirin continued to be silent, although at this moment her chest rumbled strongly holding back the anger. He could only shut up and sob.

Free to fight, because it's more cruel than this he'll get.

Ayirin tried to forcefully suppress her anger and tears.

The four rogues were still laughing at him.

Jimmy approached Irene, hugging her waist.

"You're great, baby, you really are my woman." Irene's right cheek.

Irene smiled proudly to get a kiss from this man of her puja.

His eyes caught something under the chair.

"But Jim, I want to take something first." let go of Jimmy's embrace.

Then down to pick up Vishnu's phone that fell from his pocket when he fell down earlier.

Ayirin who saw his movements was surprised to see Vishnu's phone in the grip of his hand that was trying to hide.

Ayirin knew very well and knew it was Vishnu's phone.

Ayirin immediately stood up.

"Irene.that's Vishnu's phone, right?" I pointed to Irene's right hand.

"I knew it was Vishnu's phone. Why is the phone on you?"

Irene smiled with a smile

"You think that only your husband has such an ugly, cheap phone like this?" put

Ayirin.

"But I knew very well it was Vishnu's phone, give it to me. I wanted to see it." tried to take the flat object out of Irene's hand.

"What the fuck you.this is not having a husband lo.." jolted Irene while pushing her body strong.

Ayirin almost fell down if only her body had not been restrained on Rafa's table.

Ayirin who had been holding back her tears, finally could not stand her crying anymore. She was crying sobbing.

" Tell me where Vishnu is.You must know where Vishnu is, right? it was already the third day he disappeared without any news. While. the phone is on you. Tell me where Vishnu Jimmy is?.What did you do to him?" said stare hard at Jimmy.

"Anyway, how do I know that stupid guy is? I don't know anything about dongo lo's husband...." Jimmy turned to him.

"I'm sure you guys must have done something bad to her. All this time you've been forcing her to do the dirty work, you've always bullied her and tortured her. Tell me where Vishnu Jimmy is?" ayirin shouted increasingly loudly. He approaches Jimmy and pulls Jimmy's hand.

"You think he's Jimmy, you hide where he is? the phone's on you. That means you know about her whereabouts." said Ayirin between her tears. He stared intently with anger at this arrogant man.

Jimmy snorted furiously, he took off Ayirin's rough hand. And turned to clutch firmly Ayirin's collar until Ayirin's tiny body lifted not touching the floor.

"Please keep your words good either. Otherwise the rotten tongue lo I cut" said Jimmy pressed his voice, staring sharply at the glare, as if to pounce on Ayirin alive.

Then with full force he pushed Ayirin's body backwards.

Ayirin's body flung backwards precisely towards the wide-open window.

Some students screamed.

He saw his body approaching the window.

They could make sure the body would definitely come out of the window and would fall from this three-story building.

But before Ayirin's body went into the window pit, Rafa's hand quickly pulled her body strong.

Ayirin screamed a terrified scream with her body trembling limp. He thought his body had already fallen soaring down and was crushed.

Rafa immediately occupied it, took out the drinking water from his bag then gave it to Ayirin.

"Drink...!" just one word, then back to the seat.

He gets busy on his phone.

Jimmy snorted furiously, he did not expect anyone to dare to go against him.

While the other students smile in relief at Ayirin who survived, and stare in amazement and pride at Rafa who has saved Ayirin with his mesmerizing action.

Jimmy kicked the table next door furiously, he stepped closer to Rafa's seat that was lowered. Aldo and Charles followed from behind.

He was eager to break the hand of Rafa who had dared to save Ayirin.

But before his hand touched Rafa's skin, the teacher came in.

Each of them immediately headed for the seat, as well as Jimmy and his henchmen.

Jimmy stared cynically and defiantly at Rafa, then slowly headed towards his seat.

Ayirin also immediately sat down, she turned her head back for a moment.

"Thank you...!" he said slowly to Rafa who was staring at the teacher in front of him.

Rafa turned his eyes to him.

"Once again thank you for pinning my life." said Ayirin back with a lowered face, then immediately turned to look ahead.

Rafa let out a long sigh, then looked back at the blackboard.

Time keeps rolling, until the break.

Four missed calls and two incoming messages carried Rafa's feet stepping out of the classroom and down.

He's headed for the school lobby.

There was already sitting waiting for a man of his age to wear Casual clothes.

Rizal. It's just that Rizal can only come today, even though he has not entered school just to stop by to see his new school.

Previously they studied at sala one High School which is also in this city.

They engaged in serious chatter, occasionally sounding laughter from their mouths.

"Excuse me brother." a voice came from beside them.

Both immediately looked.

A 14-year-old girl wears a Junior High uniform with a school bag behind her.

"What's the deck?" ask Rizal.

Rafa looked at him fixedly, for a moment this face reminded himself of someone.

Vishnu... His face is like Vishnu.

This face is covered with sadness and anxiety.

"Is there anything we can help you with?" ask Rizal back.

"I was looking for someone, but I was afraid to go inside. Can I ask you two?"

Rizal immediately nodded.

"Of course."

"What class are you two? I'm here looking for my brother. His name is Vishnu Adi Nugroho. She was sitting in 12X class." said the little girl softly.

Rizal looked at Rafa.

"Rafa, do you know him? aren't you in that class, too?"

"Is it true that my sister is in class with my brother Vishnu? Is Vishnu's brother in his class?" asked the little girl with a happy expression.

Unknowingly he held Rafa's right hand.

"Son, take me to Vishnu's brother. I'd really like to meet him. Mom and Dad are looking for her. It's been two days that he hasn't come home, Dad is worried about him. Phone numbers are hard to call. Please take me to my brother. I had to take her home.Dad really wanted to meet her. Father's illness was worse because he was worried about him. Please meet me with my brother, sister." he asked with tears that had fallen.

Both were shocked to see him crying.

"Hey little girl.don't cry.calm yourself, we'll help you. You sit down and tell me what your name is?" Rizal tried to calm him down.

"Sir sister." answered the little girl snot, all her tears.

Then immediately sat on the chair that was patted Rizal.

Rizal gave her a drink.

"Hey Rafa, quickly you call his brother, Vishnu. Get him over here. If you don't have her number, call your class president and have him send Vishnu here." Rizal looked back at Rafa.

"Sir.." came a call from behind them.

"Sir Ayirin..," Winda got up from his seat hearing Ayirin's voice.

Ayirin approached him, taking him next door.

"So I told you not to come to this place.danger." held the shoulders of Vinda.

"But I want to find Vishnu's brother. Father's disease is getting worse because thinking about Vishnu's brother continues." Winda was crying again.

"Sister is trying to find him, tell father not to worry and think of Vishnu. Now that you go home and tell Vishnu's father that he's at school, don't worry about him anymore. And brother beg you not to come here again. Brother will contact you if there's any news of Vishnu's brother."

"But I'm afraid of lying brother.giman if you know? you will be sad and worried more and more."Daddy will also be disappointed in me."

"Sister also doesn't want you to lie Wind.we're forced to do it for your father's health.." Ayirin hugged him because she felt guilty for teaching him something bad.

Ayirin let go of her embrace.

He held onto his shoulder again and stared fixed.

"Kak Vishnu has not been to school for two days. There's got to be a reason he didn't get in like that. But you don't worry, big brother has already gotten a hint of the person who found out about his whereabouts. After school, you'll meet the guy and talk to him."

"Is that what you said?"

"Yes Wind, now you go home, and give your father the best possible excuse. You're a smart kid, you know how to calm me down.."

"Okay, sister.I'll be home soon, I'll tell ya ?"

Ayirin nodded with a smile as she swept over the top of the girl's head.

"Let's not take it forward."

Winda approached Rafa and Rizal who pretended to be indifferent to them.

"Sister, thank you for drinking. If you meet brother Vishnu, please tell him to go home" he said staring Rafa and Rizal alternately.

Rizal smiled little

"Of course, Willa.we will convey your message if you meet him" he said later.

Winda turned around to approach Ayirin. Then they immediately walked towards the highway.

Rafa stared at their departure with some questions raging in his head.

"What the hell is Rafa? who is Vishnu?" ask Rizal.

Rafa silently did not answer still with his daydream.

"Hey Rafa, I'm talking to you." jolted Rizal back.

****

In an empty building.

One empty room.

It was seen a man wearing a school uniform that had been torn apart. He was hanging bound with both hands above, his state of apprehension.

A small wound with fresh blood was on his bruised and bluish face. And also all over his body.

Vishnu... has been caged three days by mafia gangs for eliminating 200 grams ****.

Vishnu who did not know at all about the illicit goods that were hidden by someone at the dose of food package.

Vishnu works side by side after returning home from school as a grabfood at a restaurant.

He did not expect the restaurant he knew only as a place to provide and serve food, it turns out also as a supplier N******.

And now he's stuffed, tortured, persecuted to say where the goods are.

The item was just discovered in the package inserted in the food box.

Vishnu who does not know at all about the goods is of course confused and evasive.

Vishnu thought it was possible that the package of food dus was exchanged with other food dus and accidentally given to other customers.

But the gang did not believe him and continued to force him to deliver the item. Vishnu was accused of conspiring and cooperating with the police who had helped him that morning, Rafa.

A cell phone rang from two of Vishnu's guards.

"How's it?" voice from across.

"Sir boss...."

"Fuck, force him. Show me the two photos I'm sending you."

"Good boss."

The two members of the mafia gang were big muscular body that poured water on the body of Vishnu who was silent.

Vishnu who just a moment ago felt torture is now starting to wake up.

"Wake up asshole, tell me quickly who did you give that stuff to? Which side are you on? who are you working for? hand to make it difficult for you. You seem to like torture."

"Your sons and daughters, I told you I did not know about the curse. Why don't you guys trust me? even if I die, you will not get any information because I do not know at all" said Vishnu weakly.

The punches and kicks landed back on his face and body. He then fell silent with blood flowing from his mouth and nose.

Sala, a mafia gang pulled her back hair so strong that her bowed face lifted, then showed her cell phone screen.

"Open your eyes and look at this well.

Boss sent you something sweet, hahaha."

Vishnu slowly opened his eyes.

Amongst her unclear vision, she tried to see the image on the phone's screen.

He was surprised to see two women on the flat object... Ayirin and Winda.

As his blood boiled, his anger peaked.

"Your asses.don't touch them. They don't know anything." he shouted loudly.

while struggling trying to untie the bond, but free.

The two members of the mafia gang laughed out loud.

"Eat him quickly tell me where the shit is." yelled loudly and then hit Vishnu again.

After that left Vishnu who shouted calling Ayirin and Vinda while crying.

"Aaaaaaarkhh..," Vishnu shouted loudly full of anger. He sobbed little thinking about the safety of Ayirin and her sister who were now being targeted by them.

He has tried many times to break away from this bond but it is very difficult because it is handcuffed and bound by chains.

Both of his hands had even been injured due to the friction of the chains trying to escape.

*****

Rafa drives his car home to his apartment at moderate speed.

Beside him, Rizal was engrossed in enjoying the strains of songs from the band Westlife.

In the middle of the journey, passing through a rather silent place his eyes unintentionally saw a group of people were surrounding the women.

He runs his car slowly.

After careful consideration, the woman turned out to be Ayirin, and the one who faced her was Jimmy and his lackeys.

Their bodies were somewhat protected from a large tree.

Ayirin who after school came to Jimmy to ask him where Vishnu was. He was very sure they knew Vishnu's whereabouts by looking at his phone in their hands.

There was an argument and a power struggle between him and Irene. So Jimmy hit him hard and passed out, and was put in the trunk by Aldo and Charles. Then they quickly left the place.

*****

At night in a hidden building away from the city, the place used to hold Vishnu and Ayirin.

In one of the spaces was rather spacious and not too bright but it was enough to recognize a person's face, there was the sound of a dugem music beat with a flash of disco lights that highlighted rotating swivel and ambience lights attached to the wall. The room was like a discotheque used for a party N***** by a mob gang.

Inside there are several sofa stels located on each corner. On the table are a few drinks and snacks.

Some sexy women in open clothes appear to wiggle their bodies following the beat of music with their partners.

Not just a party N***** but also a party ****.

Seen a pair of people who overlap on the sofa in the influence of magic and N***** with a naked body without caring about the people around him. The roar of fast-hunting breaths, ***** and their moans mingle with the beat of loud music.

In another corner there are also some couples who are cool to make out without shame.

Others are engrossed in his drink.

Others are enjoying illegal goods by injecting it into their bodies, inhaling through cigarettes there are also those who directly swallow it. After a few minutes later they are seen to begin to feel the sensation of pleasure and the sensation of a high sense of calm.

Looks like these gangs just celebrated the birthday of their boss who was sitting in his big chair accompanied by two sexy women.

Some of his business guests congratulated him.

"Hey Simon, did the man open his mouth?"

"The son of a bitch is so stubborn, I've tortured him, he keeps his mouth shut" replied the man named Simon, the head of a mafia gang.

"Why don't you invite him to join us here? invite them to enjoy the entertainment of your birth party, definitely more exciting and frenetic." staring Simon grinning meaningfully.

Simon understood the meaning of that gaze. He immediately gave the code to his men.

Within 10 minutes his men returned while carrying the bodies of Vishnu and Ayirin into the room.

The heads of Vishnu and Ayirin were covered in cloth so that they could not see this space. Their two hands were also tied behind their back.

The two are separated, separately,

Vishnu did not know the whereabouts of Ayirin who was in the chaff with his sister in a separate room.

"Open up..." Simon gestured to open their headgear.

Both head coverings are open.

Vishnu and Ayirin blinked their eyes to clarify their vision.

The two were shocked as they looked at each other.

"Airin.."

"Vishnu.."

Say them almost simultaneously. They bring the body closer together. Ayirin smiled happily at Vishnu. But then his face immediately clouded to see the state of Vishnu's body full of wounds. Because Vishnu's upper body is open not wearing a uniform shirt anymore.

Clearly visible are some wounds and also a sign of a bluish bruise.

"What happened to you Vishnu?" said sendu.

"I'm fine, you calm down, don't cry." calmed Ayirin down.

Ayirin began to realize that Vishnu's disappearance was kidnapped and cupped, just like him.

Butwhy?

"What is this place Vishnu? Why did they kidnap us?" tanya Ayirin scanned her surroundings like a discotheque spot.

Ayirin screamed as her eyes looked at the pair of humans who were making out and making love naked. He quickly hid his face in Vishnu's arm.

His screams made some people laugh grinning.

From the entrance are three pairs of young men.

Jimmy, Aldo, Charles with their lovers.

Jimmy and Irene sit down with Simon.

"Jimmy's sister....."

"Hay brother.." said Jimmy to Simon.

Both are half-body.

"Jimmy, so you're behind all this?" Vishnu looked at him sharply.

"Why are you keeping us like this? let us go."

Jimmy stared at the grin

"If you want to be free, tell me where the goods are."

"I've said many times, I don't know at all. Why don't you trust me?"

"You think I'm stupid? You attacked my men with your friend the brewok. You work for him, right?That stuff you gave him, right? You're working with the police, right?" jimmy said loudly, then threw the bottle at them.

Ayirin screamed, Vishnu moved quickly in front of Ayirin blocking the broken bottle from hitting Ayirin's body.

Ayirin shivered in fear. She started crying.

Jimmy got up from his seat approaching Ayirin.

He pulled the body of this girl to his feet.

"Don't hurt Ayirin. He doesn't know anything." said Vishnu.

"It looks like you love your girlfriend so much" said Jimmy smilingly.

His left hand moved to Ayirin's collar, then slowly unbuttoned Ayirin's school uniform.

Ayirin rebelled dodging, but Jimmy held his nape firmly.

"What are you doing Jimmy, stop it!" yell Vishnu loudly. He quickly stood up. But his calf was kicked hard from behind by Simon's men, so he fell back on his knees, groaning in pain.

While Ayirin cries in fear with a trembling body as Jimmy forcibly takes off his shirt. His upper body is visible.

"Stop Jimmy, hit me, torture me all you want, but don't touch Ayirin, don't hurt her." Vishnu's plea screamed at the rest of her strength. Because he is very weak. In addition to his body full of wounds and bruises.he also has not felt food during the brush.

His body was weak and powerless.

"I want to see the beautiful body of your lover, Vishnu, you also want to, right?" jimmy said he looked at the people around him.

They laughed and answered the question of their boss's sister.

"Bag you're Jimmy. Your savages." cried Vishnu growled.

They're laughing more and more.

Ayirin was getting stronger crying.

"Vishnu, please just give them what they ask for" he said sobbing Isaac to Vishnu.

"Trust me Ayirin, I have absolutely no idea about that stuff.There is no way I'm more concerned with that stuff than you. Really, I really don't know."

Vishnu said convincingly with a sad look.

Ayirin was crying harder.

Irene got up from her seat approaching Jimmy while pointing her phone at Ayirin.

She took a video of Ayirin's body now wearing only a skirt and bra. Her cleavage that seemed to poking a part of her bra became a spectacle for men's eyes.

"What are you doing Irene..?" Ayirin turned her back to Irene.

Irene pulled her body firmly back to face the camera.

"Don't do it Irene. stop it." cried Vishnu loudly.

He stood up quickly and pushed Irene's body so that the woman fell down, as well as her Cell Phone.

Jimmy snorted furiously at the sight of his lover falling, with a quick movement he threw a hard kick into Vishnu's jaw. Vishnu fell on the floor with blood running down his mouth, nose and even ears.

Ayirin screamed, walking towards Vishnu.

but Irene pulled her hair back.

Jimmy beckoned his men to untie Vishnu.

After the loose bond he gave the order

"Hand him...."

Five members of the powerful mafia gang immediately beat Vishnu with punches and kicks.

Vishnu was unable to resist even though his bond had been broken. He tried to protect his face, chest and stomach.

"Vishnu.. Vishnu.. stop Jimmy, stop it." cried Ayirin hysterically. He revolted in Irene's grip and ran towards Vishnu who was in the thud.

"Don't go near Ayirin. Stay there." cried Vishnu among his helplessness.

Ayirin kept running over and directly barged in. He hugged Vishnu's body.

He also got a kick on his body. He screams in pain.

There is no mercy or mercy for them.

Vishnu braked strongly, he immediately overlapped Ayirin's body under him protecting from the kicks that came alternately.

Until they finally appeared helpless.

Jimmy raised his hand, the torture stopped.

"Are you satisfied, baby?" look at Irene.

Irene smiled sweetly full of cunning.

He whispered something in Jimmy's ear.

Jimmy was shocked, but then a small smile.

and nod.

"It would seem very exciting if they became a spectacle of the entire Maya universe" said as he imagined something.

"Surely, baby, do what makes you happy." Jimmy kissed his lips.

Then he whispered something to his men.

His men raised the bodies of Vishnu and Ayirin before them.

"Jimmy enough, what else do you want from us?" vishnu said weakly.

"My dear is pregnant young, she wants something from you as entertainment, and you must obey her wishes" Jimmy said, gesturing to his men.

Two of Jimmy's men approached Vishnu, then put something in his mouth forcefully and violently.

Vishnu tried to vomit her, but her mouth was immediately firmly rooted and her nape was pulled down until she looked up.

They also injected something into Vishnu's arm quickly.

Irene laughed happily at the sight of Vishnu having swallowed the stimulant drug.

"What did you give me Jimmy?" Vishnu coughed a small cough.

"You'll know in a few minutes." Jimmy smiled cynically.

Irene got up from her seat and walked over to Ayirin who was lying helplessly beside Vishnu. His right hand held a small scissor.

Ayirin tried to move, but her body was too sick and camped.

Vishnu immediately pulled Ayirin's body into his lap to see the bad gurgle of Irene.

"You want me Irene? don't hurt Ayirin. You've tortured her enough."

Irene looked at him meaningfully cynical.

"Calm down.I won't hurt him. I'm not that bad. I just want to help you so that later you don't have to bother anymore to undress" he said with a big smile.

Wisnu's forehead wince.

Irene laughed again. Then she cut out Ayirin's bra strap and also the hook.

That thing fell. So that both Ayirin fruit are visible.

Vishnu was surprised to immediately cover Ayirin's chest with both hands. Then facing Ayirin's body to him.

Ayirin cried as much as she could, weeping and lamenting her condition, the fate of both of them who were treated inhumanely.

"Civilized you're Irene, you women don't have hearts, Ayirin just like you, you can humiliate your own people."

Irene laughed out loud.

"Vishnu what will happen to us? are we gonna die here?" said Ayirin staring at Vishnu while crying weakly.

"It's all Ayirin's fault, but trust me. I didn't do a bad job. I shouldn't have worked in that restaurant. I'm tempted by his great wages." Vishnu stared at him.

Ayirin nodded weakly smiling.

"You're Vishnu's innocent. Because my desire to become a doctor got you stuck in their dirty business. I trust you. Whatever happens to us, I'll take it. Even if I die here with you, I'm sincere. No one knows where we are here.no one will help us."

"You don't speak badly Ayirin, believe that God will help us." said Vishnu swept his tears.

Vishnu began to feel a strangeness in his body. A sense of heat began to spread in his body. He was agitated and unsettled, his gaze started to blur.

He felt something unusual, his libido rising, the passion that was running through his body, especially the blood flow that ran through his possessions.

"It seems to have started to react dearly, let's start the real party" Irene told Jimmy, smiling happily at the change in Vishnu.

Slowly Vishnu began to realize what was happening to him.

"Your asses." he jolted a little hard staring at Jimmy and Irene.

Ayirin who hugged Vishnu's neck with her weak body

"What's Vishnu? you why?" he said weak was almost inaudible.

"They gave me Ayirin's stimulant drug."

"What?" Ayirin surprised.

"Don't move a bit Ayirin, don't do any movement, be still ...." vishnu said back with his body stiffened restlessly feeling the breath of Ayirin at the nape of his nape and the hands of the girl on his neck. She tried hard to hold back and get rid of her growing libido so as not to get aroused by Ayirin's half-naked body and was hugging her.

"Quick start the Vishnu party." cried Jimmy.

"Don't do this to us Jimmy. It's very inhumane..."

"Just do it...or do you want my dogs to enjoy every curve of your lover's body?" jimmy's jolt loudly cut his words with a grinning look.

Ayirin gasped at Jimmy's words.

He immediately embraced Vishnu's body strongly making his body firmly attached to Vishnu.

Vishnu groaned feeling Ayirin's chest.

his tightly clenched hands suppressed his growing craziness.

"You're still gonna hold on? Okay...." Jimmy smiled cynically while coding a sexy woman closer to Vishnu.

"You serve her.and you two..take the woman to the sofa, wear it as you please." pointed to Ayirin.

Vishnu and Ayirin were shocked.

The sexy woman who was a stripper approached Vishnu, as well as two of Jimmy's men approached to pull Ayirin's body from Vishnu. Sexy women hug Vishnu from behind, his hands rubbing his chest and stomach biceps Vishnu gently make Vishnu groan.

"No. let go of me," tried hard to resist her desire and to strike the woman's hand that opened the hook on her pants.

A moment later he gasped at Ayirin's scream on the sofa. He immediately turned his head and saw a boy Jimmy was about to rape Ayirin, forcefully pulling Ayirin's skirt.

"Wisnuu help me.." Ayirin screamed hysterically trying to pull over the hands of Jimmy's men who touched her body.

"Ayirin.." cried out loudly Vishnu. She pushed strong sexy woman's body and ran fast on Ayirin while enduring the pain in her groin area. He collected the remnants of energy and immediately kicked the body of Jimmy's men who overstretched his lover's body.

The man fell down next to him.

Ayirin woke up with her body that looked like a thread, she immediately embraced Vishnu in fear and trembled to hide her innocent body.

"Datan you Jimmy, Laknat you, savage all of you." cried Vishnu loudly full of anger hugging Ayirin.

His screams even invited their laughter.

"Hurry up, you bastard...." Jimmy yelled back at him.

"Kill me Vishnu, choke my neck. I don't want to live in humiliation. I'd rather die than live in humiliation. They have all seen my body, the whole world will see us in disgrace." Ayirin held Vishnu's hands together and carried them to his neck.

"Kill me quick.I'd rather die at your hands than...."

Vishnu quickly closed his mouth. He hugged Ayirin's body firmly.

Vishnu's crying. Crying and being angry because of his helplessness protects the woman he loves.

"Death to you.ayo please. Haha..." Jimmy got up from his seat and approached them.

"And your brother will accept and endure all your humiliations."

"Haha.... Jimmy laughed like a madman while showing a picture of Winda in the room next door guarded by four of his men.

Vishnu and Ayirin were devastated.

"Mr.."

"Cursed you Jimmy." said Ayirin staring very sharply full of anger at them both.

"You want her little body shredded by my four dogs? uh huh? hahaha..!" Jimmy's laughing crazily.

Ayirin cried sobbing.

Vishnu roared loudly.

A few minutes later, under Jimmy's threat to save Winda, they were forced to have sex with the whole room under the flickering flickering disco lights and the loud thumping sound of music.

Everyone is mentally ill and feels happy to enjoy the spectacle of free hot scenes while enjoying a bottle of drink, swaying a happy laugh in the influence of alcohol and Nar****.

Irene and Jimmy recorded their action through Video while laughing with satisfaction.

Even the two depraved humans have no heart and are mentally ill, having intercourse without shame because they are aroused to see the hot scene of Vishnu Ayirin.

An hour passed ....

I heard a loud scream from outside.

"Our base was attacked, our base was attacked, our base was attacked." Then there was an alarm as a sign of danger.

All were shocked and panicked among the unconscious influence of alcohol and the Influence of N******. The music and disco lights stopped instantly.

The room lights are on.

"Take your guns.quickly." cried Simon as soon as he came out of his room, who was engrossed in two sex women.

Jimmy and Irene were shocked to hear the sound of the alarm. The two immediately put on clothes and ran towards Simon.

A group of humans dressed in black and wearing black masks attacked them blindly.

Battles happen.

Attack each other.

Vishnu who heard the yell quickly got up and put on his pants and woke Ayirin. His eyes were looking here and there for Ayirin's clothes but nothing.

Sala a black mask threw a long piece of cloth at him.

Without thinking long Vishnu quickly wrapped the cloth into Ayirin's body.

"Ayirin, we need to get out of this place quickly.take care of yourself." Vishnu patted the two cheeks of ayirin who looked weak. He himself is still sultry because the influence of stimulant drugs has not disappeared.

"Just follow us." said the black mask member back.

"Who are you?" Vishnu stared at him.

"Don't ask too many questions, let's hurry before their consciousness returns and the large number."

"You?" slowly Vishnu recognized the sound even though it was still under the influence of stimulant drugs.

He stared fixedly at this black mask-covered face in front of him. He was familiar with this voice despite having only met twice.

Vishnu did not know his name but he remembered his voice. The man who helped him in the mosque.

"Vishnu, we must save Vinda." said Ayirin weakly remembered Vinda.

She screamed a pain and pain at hers as she stood up.

Vishnu surprised.

"Ayirin, what's wrong with you?"

"A I'm fine, let's quickly save the Winda."

"Can you walk?" ask Vishnu who understands the pain Vishnu feels on Ayirin's property. The lights are suddenly on. Vishnu sees blood in the wrapping of the sofa. The virgin blood ayirin.

"Let's get the hell out of here" said Rafa back loudly, the masked man.

(When helping Vishnu this Awal Rafa formed a Black Mask Gang. With members of the people who managed to be defeated in boxing ring fights, free wrestling, karate, taekwondo, and other free fights, even wild racing. At that time the number of his men had only reached 78 people).

"I am good Vishnu, you do not worry" said Ayirin trying strong.

Soon they came out of the room looking for space in the room like Vinda. Vishnu who knows the space leads the way.

While Rizal and other black mask members were fighting, attacking each other and retaliating blindly in front of the main entrance.

"Don't let them get away, close the gate and the main door." cried Simon.

"Who attacked us, brother? which gang are they from?" ask Jimmy to panic. While Irene was terrified holding her arm.

Simon himself is confused by this attack, because he does not know with this mafia gang. It was only the first time he knew and confronted this gang of black masks.

Vishnu Rafa and Ayirin walked quickly to the room in his swamp Winda.

As soon as the door was opened, four secret weapons floated towards them.

They were surprised they could not escape.

But Rafa who was used to facing this kind of thing with a quick movement fended off with his sword.

Unfortunately one missed and stuck in Vishnu's left arm.

Vishnu squealed in pain. Blood is pouring on the floor. Ayirin screamed a terrified scream behind her.

Simon Jimmy and Irene who were in the Vinda's room had confirmed that Vishnu would come to save his sister.

15 Simon's men surrounded them after a gesture from his boss.

Ayirin fearfully held Vishnu's right arm strong.

Rafa immediately handed over his sword to Vishnu. And he himself took out two of his dagger blades.

Vishnu pulled out the knife that stuck in his arm while groaning strongly resisting the pain.

He tore off a bit of cloth on the bottom that covered Ayirin's body, then tied it to the wound on her arm.

"Stop them..," cried Jimmy.

His men immediately attacked Vishnu and Rafa upon hearing the order.

The fight happened.

Rafa threw his dagger and stuck it in the forehead of Simon's two men.

Both men fell on the floor. Soon Rafa takes the other sala sword and attacks blindly at Jimmy and Simon.

Next to him Vishnu also attacked without regard for his safety who tried to protect Ayirin. He attacked recklessly no matter what else. Some parts of his body were hit by several sword incisions, but it didn't matter.

The flames of anger and vengeance ruled his soul and mind.

He breaks into Rafa's fight with the brothers.

"She's mine. Give her to me." point her firmly at Jimmy with a sinister glare. Then he quickly jumped to attack Jimmy. There was a fight between them.

Rafa lives with Simon and some of his men.

While Ayirin quickly stepped closer to Winda who was lying unconscious with both hands tied.

"Wins.. Winda.. wake up win.." patting both cheeks. He immediately untied the bond of Vinda.

Irene who saw him immediately ran up to him.

There was a struggle between them.

Ayirin lost power, plus she was wearing only a piece of cloth that covered her body. He was more focused on maintaining and maintaining the cloth so as not to escape from his body. Until finally punch after punch landed on his body.

Irene laughed triumphantly while sitting on Ayirin's stomach. Like a man of infidelity he was about to stick a knife in Ayirin's stomach, but a knife thrown by Vishnu stuck in his forehead. He fell down on the side of Ayirin.

Ayirin woke up soon

"Irene..," cried Jimmy saw Irene's body lying on the floor with eyes glaring.

He stared with anger at Vishnu. Then attacked Vishnu blindly.

Rizal who had managed to cripple the enemy outside immediately entered with the other black mask members and stood guard.

It didn't take long for Rafa to take out Simon and his men.

Vishnu also managed to paralyze Jimmy. Jimmy was sprawled out with his stomach hit by a sword.

Vishnu was also full of wounds on his body, but he was still able to survive.

He slashed his body and knelt down with the sword still in his hand. His breathing hunted fast irregularly, cold sweat soaked all over his body mixed with blood.

Rafa immediately gestured for Rizal to clear the spot before the police arrived.

And also told to bring the body of Winda who was still fainted by the influence of drugs.

Ayirin slowly approached Vishnu.

He knelt down in front of Vishnu.

The two faced each other, smiling sadly.

Vishnu immediately clenched his body, hugging it tightly.

Ayirin was crying in her arms, crying happily.

A few moments later they stood up. Ayirin was wide-eyed to see the figure behind Vishnu swinging a heavy wood.

"Awas Vishnu.

He quickly pushed Vishnu's body to the side.

The large wood landed firmly on his head. His body slowly fell on the floor.

Vishnu turned around immediately,

"Ayirin.." she was surprised to see Ayirin's body on the floor. For a moment his eyes looked to the side, seeing Jimmy was recirculating the wood to him.

With a quick movement Vishnu pushed the sword still in his grasp to the back. The sword went straight through Jimmy's stomach.

The wood in Jimmy's hand fell off, followed by him falling down on the floor.

Blood soaked the floor in his stomach area.

A moment later there was a loud roar from Vishnu's mouth while hugging Ayirin's still unmoving body. He shouted hysterically calling out Ayirin's name.

Rafa and Rizal were shocked. The two who were in the party room at that time gathered evidence immediately ran quickly and re-entered Vishnu and Ayirin's room.

Ayirin was rushed to the hospital because Rizal still felt his pulse.

Ayirin got medical attention.

The effect of a blunt force blow on his head made the blood vessels in the brain and inner skull rupture.As a result of which blood collected and froze on his brain and skull bones.

The doctors have done various ways to even perform surgery but there have been no signs of awareness from Ayirin.

Doctors said Ayirin suffered extensive brain tissue damage because her brain was bleeding, swelling, and her skull was broken.

7 Months had passed, ayirin still remained in her long sleep. Just waiting for a miracle from God to make him aware of his coma.

And the doctor no longer performs the operation again for fear that it will have an impact on the fetus that is pregnant.

Ayirin is now 7 months old.

Vishnu patiently and faithfully accompanied him.

Various efforts and efforts continue to be made to make Ayirin recover and wake up from a long sleep, but still no sign of anything shown Ayirin.

Until one night when Vishnu was sleeping near his bed, Ayirin came in his dream.

Ayirin cried and hugged him. But Ayirin's cry was a happy cry. Ayirin repeatedly stroked Vishnu's hair and calmed the weeping Vishnu into her arms.

Ayirin requested that Vishnu immediately save their child because there was not much time left.

The next day Vishnu immediately told his mother and Ayirin's parents.

The afternoon after Vishnu finished taking the final school exam. He immediately married Ayirin in the hospital after getting the blessing of Ayirin's parents. With witnessed by two parents each, as well as Rafa's father Mr. Artawijaya, Rafa, Rizal, KUA officers and doctors who handle Ayirin. The process of kabul ijab goes smoothly even in a blanket of sadness and novelty.

Vishnu put the wedding ring on his wife's ring finger, then kissed her forehead.

The next day the doctor immediately performed SC surgery on Ayirin. Everything went well. Both male babies were born safe and healthy despite being born prematurely.

Vishnu laid his two children on the body of Ayirin who was unconscious. Both of Ayirin's hands were rubbed gently on the twins' heads. He looked at Ayirin's face with a happy smile.

"Ayirin My wife. Thank you for bringing them to me. I promise you I will raise our children well. Make them children who will always remember and miss their mother" he said with tears flowing. She kissed Ayirin's forehead and lips gently.

A few minutes later, the doctor declared Ayirin dead.

Ayirin was buried in a public cemetery close to the tomb of Vishnu's father.

Vishnu's father died of a heart attack and asthma when he learned Vishnu and Vinda were kidnapped first.

No one knew about Ayirin's pregnancy while in the hospital, other than them and also the doctors and nurses who handled it.

After graduating from school, the three of them went on to study in America.

The twins come under and to America at Rafa's wishes. Let the twins be safe with them there.

Vishnu and Vinda's mother were also invited to America to accompany and take care of the twins.

Linda went to school there.

From that time Vishnu followed Rafa.

Vishnu made Rafa his master for saving himself many times and helping his family.

His master who has a cold attitude is firm and hard, but has a very good heart.

Rafa in between his lectures continued to expand and develop his business venture with Vishnu beside him, accompanying him faithfully.

Although they studied and lived in America, Vishnu occasionally visited the tomb of Ayirin and his father when his master visited Indonesia

for work or a visit to the main house.

Sometimes his mother and Winda come along.

Sometimes they both come alone.

After they finished their graduate studies, they returned to Indonesia.

The twins remain in the United States with their grandmother and aunt.

And until now Vishnu has not opened his heart to other women. She is still loyal to her first love, Ayirin...

(The end is already the story of Vishnu's past).

And Ara, while listening to her husband's story, wept. She did not expect it turned out that her husband's private secretary had a dark past, experiencing a hard and cruel life with the woman he loved until finally separated by death.

Her cries grew louder considering her late husband Raka. Remembering their love is also separated by death.

*******

Morning time.

The House of Raymond Alkas

I heard a loud scream from the bathroom.

Dion, who was arranging his files and briefcase at the time, was shocked.

He quickly ran to the bathroom and went straight in.

"Cindy..kamu why?" tanyanya.

Cindy immediately covered her front body with a towel. He was shocked to see Dion coming. He didn't wear anything.

"Why aren't you here? get out of here."

"I heard your screams, so I went in. I was worried something bad happened to you."

"I'm fine now get out."

"Why did you scream then?"

"What's wrong.I just saw the cockroach."

"Kecoak? where are the cockroaches in this house?"

"The truth is there was a cockroach, but it ran there. Now brother's out, I'm gonna take a shower."

"You think I'm easy to lie to?" Dion approached and held his hand.

"Say what's up? you're pregnant Cin, I don't want anything to happen to you and your fetus" Dion said in a high-pitched voice.

"Despite ah.don't hold hold hold." jolted Cindy while stomping Dion's hand off.

Dion was surprised by this unusual rude attitude. Dion tried to calm down.

"Did your boobs hurt again?"

"No one hurts my body, if anything I can handle it myself. Now go out. I want to take a shower."

Dion let out a heavy sigh with a frowning forehead.

"You why the hell Cin? are you upset with me again? are you mad at me for helping Bela last night?"

Huh huh? Cindy smiled wryly.

"Why am I angry? why should I be angry? what did you do with Bela so I should be angry? uh huh? It's not like I told you yesterday that I don't care what you do to him. Now get out, I'm gonna take a shower." she screamed back a little hard.

"Cindy.." jolted Dion hard.

Cindy was instantly speechless with a quick hunting breath.

The two stared at each other sharply.

Cindy can't stand this long-looking. Her tears will spill. Soon she wrapped the towel around her body.

"If you don't come out, let me." he said with trembling lips, then immediately stepped up.

Dion "Cin... Cindy..."

Dion tried to reach her body, but Cindy brushed off her hand and quickly stepped out of the bathroom.

He went into the dressing room.

Quickly wear a short dress and scarf to cover the red mark on her neck.

I don't know why there's such a mark on his neck and I don't know who made it.

That's why he was shocked and screaming.

He immediately walked out of the room after grabbing his cell phone and sling bag.

When he came out he saw Bela and Dwi were going down the stairs.

The two girls saw it too.

"Hello Cind.." said Dwi giving a smile.

"Hello also Dwi.." she replied with a half smile.

"Why did you come down alone? where's Brother Dion?" ask Bela to look at the door.

"Son Dion while preparing to be ready."

Oohh. Bela's mouth is rounded.

"We're going first, aren't we?" Dwi.

"OK...."

Both are coming down.

Still had time to see Bela gave a smile to him. but a smile with another meaning.

Cindy grunted in annoyance.

Then head to the stairs and get down.

While Dion was stunned for a while in the bathroom, thinking of Cindy's unusual demeanor.

Was it due to the influence of her pregnancy as well? his inner.

Dion gave a rude sigh, he immediately came out of the bathroom following Cindy Wanted to ask him a kind talk.

She did not want Cindy to suppress the anger and annoyance that would later make her stress and affect the fetus in the womb.

But he couldn't find Cindy in the room or the dressing room.

"Is he really angry with me? he didn't even take a shower to avoid me." Dion's mumbling got more confused.

******

As the message received at dawn from Cindy, Ines headed straight for Raymond Alkas's room. Cindy sent a message last night to invite him to visit Ara's house this morning, but only had time to read it at dawn.

Of course Ines was very happy, because he happened to want to meet Ara as well. He wanted to thank his best friend because thanks to Ara he could work in the company RA Group.

Last night Vishnu sent him a message telling him to come to the headquarters of RA Group.

Ines got off the taxi that stopped right in the front yard of the entrance.

Cindy who already knew his whereabouts was waiting in the front yard of the entrance.

"Cindy.." cried Ines a little loudly while smiling happily. He's approaching Cindy.

"Ines.." The two hugged each other.

Cindy hugged him hard.

"Thank you Nes for what you and Ara did to me. If it wasn't for the two of you, somehow it would be my fate as well as my son's later."

"Udah Cin, don't say anything. We did it because we love you the same."

"Yummm.... Ines.I love you too." Hugging Ines full of haru.

From above Dion looked towards them.

"But Nes, you and Ara know where I'm pregnant from?"

"Let's tell me when we're with Ara later, let's be exciting" Ines said with a smile. "But I'm very disappointed you, have such a problem even hidden to us. Don't want to share with us." annoyed with a manyun's face.

Cindy hugged him back.

"Sorry Nes, I didn't mean that." Feeling guilty.

"Yes already. We understand that." Ines grunts softly.

Cindy chuckled, then let go of her embrace. He immediately invited Ines inside.

They headed straight for the dining room.

There were Raymond Alkas, Dinda, Dwi and Bela.

"Ines.." said Dinda as soon as she saw him.

Ines smiles.

"Good morning aunt.. Om." He immediately shook Dinda and Ray's hands.

"Hope with us. Please sit."

said Dinda in between her meals.

"Yes aunty, thank you."

"Come on, sit down.." Cindy invited me to sit down.

Ines immediately sat down while looking towards Dwi and Bela.

"They are Dwi and Bela. Dwi's aunt's nephew, and her friend Dwi's martial. They just came from Australia yesterday. And you two.This is Ines her best friend Cindy and Dion" said Dinda to introduce each other.

Ines, Dwi and Bela. The three greeted each other with smiles.

"You came down alone, Cin? where's brother?" Ray opened his voice between his meals.

"Yes, because I was waiting for Ines.

Brother Dion I left still ready."

Cindy said as she sat down.

"How, does he want to go to Artawijaya's main house?"

Cindy was about to answer, but stopped by Bela's words.

"That's brother Dion coming." cried Bela saw the arrival of Dion.

He immediately stood up to welcome Dion's arrival with a sweet smile.

"Please sit down, brother." pull up Dion's chair.

"You don't have to bother Bela" said Dion immediately sitting down.

He turned to Cindy who looked indifferently picking up the green apple slices without looking at him.

Dinda noticed the attitude of the two of them which was still the same as last night. Ines also finds it strange to see Cindy's indifferent attitude towards Dion as well as Bela's excessive attitude towards Dion. No matter how Cindy is near Dion.

"I don't feel in repotin anyway, I'm happy to do it. Last night Dion's brother helped me too." said bela back.

"Well, we'll sit down, I'll eat." Dion opened the plate.

"What would Dion eat? let me get it."

"Don't, let me take it for myself, you keep eating you."

"Bel, quickly finish your food, later we miss the plane." interrupted Dwi as she pulled her hand to sit.

Bela immediately sat down with a pouting face, but quietly glanced at Cindy with a faint smile.

Cindy took a long breath. He immediately got up from his seat.

"Excuse me ma, pa. I want to make milk first in the kitchen."

He immediately stepped over while carrying the apple slices and his mango.

Dion snorted softly as he put down his knife and fork.

He again threw out his coarse breath, then massaged his powerful forehead, enduring his deep irritation of Cindy's attitude.

5 minutes later Cindy turned around with a glass of milk in hand.

He immediately sat down and went back to pick up the mango slices. His attitude was still like that, silent and indifferent without turning a little to his left.

"Why do you eat young mangoes and green apples continue since then, do you not feel pain and acid?" Bela again opened her voice to see Cindy had not touched the food and just eat mango apple continues.

Cindy was gulping her milk.

So Ines answered.

"Cindy is pregnant."

"What ?" Bela was wide-eyed, her eyes were round.

He coughed a little because he was choking.

"So Cindy's pregnant?"

"Yes.he cravings young mangoes." continued Ines with a happy smile at a glance to see the shock on the face of bela, which was mixed with dislike.

"So Cindy's pregnant with Dion's son? why did I just find out? Damn it.." Bela snorted inwardly.

He stared intently at Cindy eating her mango fruit.

"Papa's done, you need to get ready. We're going to Artawijaya's house in 10 minutes" Raymond said.

He immediately stood up.

"You should go with Dion too."

"No pa, I told you last night, I don't want to come."

Cindy turned to him and looked at him.

"Dion, listen to your papa son..." Dinda spoke up.

"I couldn't have been better off going to the office."

Raymond did not comment, he immediately stepped into his study to pick up something. Dinda also stepped into the room to pick up something that was prepared for Ara.

Bela and Dwi got up from their seats.

They also finished eating.

Bela approached Dion.

"Son Dion's going to the office? me and Dwi hitchhiked to the airport, huh? can you, brother?"

Cindy smiled wryly, she looked at Dion who was also looking at her.

"Of course you can bell, go.from you bother to take a taxi. Please take them to the airport."

"Then what about your visit to the home of Mr. Artawijaya? uncle wants Dion's brother to come." said Dwi.

"The visit is not important to Dion's brother, so go with him."

"Then we'll just get in Dion's car" Bela said with a happy smile.

"I'm gonna grab a bag in the room first Bel..."

"Please give me Wi..."

Dwi immediately ran towards the stairs.

While Cindy and Dion are still looking at each other with their frustration.

Bela arrives touching Dion's tie.

"Sorry.dasi kak Dion seemed to be tilted" he said with a sweet smiling face.

Cindy and Dion are shocked. But then Cindy smiled broadly.

"Thank you, Bel, so much attention to Dion. I didn't have time to take care of it just now as he prepared." he said without turning his gaze to Dion, then he turned to Ines

"Come on Nes, we wait for uncle and aunt in the car." then immediately get up and step quickly out towards the parking lot.

He wanted to scream loudly and cry loudly. Her tears were on both of her cheeks.

Ines rose to his feet, he drew closer to Dion who seemed to be standing in suspense with a reddened face, hardened jaws holding back the various outbursts of emotion that were ruling his heart.

"Excuse me, brother Dion," said Ines pamit, he glanced at Bela who seemed to smile sweetly at Dion.

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