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Good morning ...
Have you stopped by my other story yet? The story of Rifal and Elyna. Guaranteed to make the chest tight and prepare a lot of tissue. A story that won't be long. Not a rich Bang As story. I know many of you are disappointed that Rifal is not Keysha, but ....
Oh, let's read it, Mom.
Chapter snippets.
Look at Me, My Husband!
Chapters 1.
"Well!"
A legitimate word made Elyna's heart both relieved and moved. He did not expect that he would eventually be summoned by a man he did not know, but he was very confident that he would be a good priest. A smile arch was engraved on her beautiful face that had been self-sufficient from the morning.
"Mother, Father, El is today lawful to be a wife," she said. He closed his eyes for a moment. Resisting the deep sadness he was feeling. When the other children married accompanied by both parents, different from Elyna who can only hope if both parents are calm in heaven there.
"El, we're going to your husband." A soft voice sounded.
Nesha, she is the wife of her husband's older sister. Her face is beautiful and looks very simple. While beside her was a woman who was more beautiful than her brother-in-law, the sister-in-law of the husband. In terms of appearance Elyna can judge if her husband's sister-in-law is not from the ordinary. As simple as it looks, it is still an expensive item that he wears.
Nesha and Echa took Elyna's hand to the place where the agreement was held. His chest was rumbling very fast. She wanted to see the real face of her husband that she could only see in a photo that her father-in-law gave her.
Step by step his feet stepped onto the red carpet that stretched. It has been seen the sturdy back of a man who is now legally her husband. Wearing the same clothes as himself. The heart is no longer conditioned.
It does not feel like he is now right next to his beloved husband. Nesha and Echa help her to sit on a chair right next to the groom. They must put their signatures first in the marriage book.
Elyna did not dare to look at the man beside her. His sight still he could not look. Until the ruler said that it was time for the groom to wear a ring on the bride's ring finger. Elyna was so happy. She could not wait to see her husband's face.
Slowly the man turned his body. At that moment the nektra of their eyes met. Elyna wanted to scream very loudly.
"Handsome!"
That's how his mind says. Her eyes did not blink looking at her husband who was more handsome than the photo she always looked at.
"Now, it's Elyna's bride's turn to put a ring on the groom's ring finger, Rifal Addhitama."
Elyna's hand shook and could be seen by everyone. Those who were there were just smiling. Is that what it's like to get married for a match? Still equally awkward. What about their first night? This is the mind of the guests there..
"Now, my son Rifal kisses your wife's forehead lovingly too deeply." Pak Penghulu's orders made Elyna's body stiffen instantly. Putting the ring on her husband's ring finger, she trembled. What if he was frowned upon by the man who is now his master.
Elyna did not see what her husband's reaction was like. He just looked down with a smile. Along with the chest that is beating is very great.
A warm, chewy thing touched his forehead. Elyna's reflex closed her eyes. Not feeling a clear circle dripped on the end of his eyes. It feels so happy.
"And you Elyna, kiss your husband's hand with love." Elyna grabbed Rifal's right hand and kissed him deeply and for so long.
"Son Rifal, kiss the head of your wife who is now in front of you." Whatever Mr. Penghulu said Rifal did.
Many congratulations and prayers flowed on them both. Rifal and Elyna responded with a smile. When it started to relax, Elyna started talking to Rifal.
"Mas, ka-"
Rifal left Elyna without a word. Elyna was stunned, but she was still thinking positively. Life is filled with bad thought will make the human body thin dry and the brain is not good.
"Thank you, El. Already want to accept Papih's proposal." Addhitama's words made Elyna tear up. His father-in-law's words were the same as his late father's. Very soft and full of love.
Elyna's eyes continued to look around the room so beautifully adorned. She also smiled when she saw her husband's nieces who were very close to each other. Elyna's eyes squinted when she saw her sister-in-law holding the body of a very beautiful woman in tears. Elyna's forehead shriveled and many questions were in her mind.
"Who is that woman? Why is she crying?" His mind kept saying. He saw the sister-in-law very close to the beautiful woman.
His gaze was sidetracked when Elyna was approached by one of the men who arranged the wedding dress that she had to use. He followed where the man went.
"Sister, Key wants to say congratulations to them, ' she said. Plus his face was so puffy as well as his eyes were red crying too much.
"Are you sure?" A nod that became the answer of the woman.
A rough sigh escaped from Echa's mouth. He did not want his cousin to get hurt. This will definitely hurt his heart.
"Think about it, Key."
The suggestion of Echa was rejected by the woman. He still insisted that he wanted to meet the two newly legal brides as a couple.
Echa complies with his cousin's wishes. However, he did not see the whereabouts of Rifal nor Elyna.
"The bride is changing her costume" Nesha said.
Echa looked towards her cousin. Only a sad face he showed. Echa invited him to join their families who were there. There is a sense of compassion that families show. However, the young woman just looked down deeply. Holding back her tears from dripping in front of them all.
Half an hour later, the couple changed clothes. This time Elyna looks more beautiful and Rifal is very handsome. A matching couple. Coinciding with Rifal and Elyna towards the pelaminan, the woman who was waiting for him turned her head. He saw the new married couple was very happy and suitable. There was water that already wanted to drip from his eye patch. As much as he could hold.
Everyone was shocked when the woman left them and headed for the shelter. Echa and her sister had already wanted to chase after the woman. However, they were banned by the woman's real father.
"Leave it! For the last time."
A sentence that slices the heart. They could all just look at it from a distance. It looks like the body of the woman was frozen just like the groom who was sculpting.
🎶
I should have been there
With you and not him
It should be me you love
And not him
You should have known that
My love is more than her
What you should have chosen was not him
"Congratulations!"
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