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CHAPTERS 17. THERE'S MISSTEP.

"Sister, when do we meet Kei again, I want to pick up his cell phone again...!"

Leo whined like that, one night. Since returning home from the cafe, to witness the performance of Kei, Leo the younger brother is often whining like that. Kei's phone, Leo's dream phone. To him. That is the kind of phone he will buy.

Used to play games smoothly, the screen is wide, the phone with a laptop form he said. Micah glanced at it for a moment, before focusing back on typing with the laptop he borrowed the other day.

"He's busy at work now. On what basis can we meet him..!"

"It's kangen, anyway,"

"Nhd..!"

"Sister, I think that Kei likes big brother..!"

Micah sneered at his sister's words, although he remained focused on the laptop screen in front of him, but his ears were very clear to hear what was said by his sister.

"Sister..?"

Leo called the older brother, feeling that the older brother was ignoring him.

"Hum..!"

"Kalo Keitaro likes big brother, how about..?"

"No way..!"

"Why is it not possible...? Big sister, hardworking, prettier than the blonde chick in the cafe again..!"

"Why, are you comparing me to Kalisha..?"

"Because that girl has a crush on Kei..!"

This is a great kid, he even knows, if Kalisha likes Kei, don't don't...

Suddenly, the front door was knocked from the outside.

"Let me just..!"

Leo immediately got up, and moved to open the door. Micah continued typing his writing on the diltop. He must immediately complete the manuscript of the novel he wants to send, so that the laptop can be returned immediately.

It doesn't taste good, borrowing expensive stuff for too long.

As Leo opened the door, Micah heard a familiar voice in his ear. As he turned his head, Micah could not hide his surprise when he saw who had just come.

"Key. Why are you here..? No work..?"

Micah asked in a tone of astonished voice.

"Just got home, I was in the morning...!"

Sahut Kei, sitting on the carpeted floor of Micah's house. Micah tried to remember remember, did he ever tell this man his home address..? Feels not.

Micah glanced at Leo. Leo threw his gaze in another direction. Pura pura blind. Micah was like kissing something was wrong, whose main role was the younger brother.

"I'm sorry Kei, my house has no sofa, you can just sit on the floor, but I can guarantee you, the floor of my house is clean..!"

Kei smiled, hearing Micah's words.

"When I sleep on the ground, relax. I don't care, the important thing is that having a home can welcome my arrival well..!"

Now, replace Micah who smiles at the words spoken by Kei.

"If your purpose of coming is good, God willing, it will be welcomed here, just as..."

Micah hung up his speech, feeling uncomfortable.

"Origin...?"

Kei asked Micah to continue with his hanging words.

"Originally do not break the curfew, here the neighbor rese, ntar brother Micah in gosipin kind of, same neighbors lack of work..!"

Who called Leo.

"Love your job, let them stop gossiping..!"

Kei tried to joke. Leo laughed crisply.

"Bring the phone..?"

Leo asked that, but Micah glared directly at the younger brother. But, Leo did not care, and Kei laughed at hearing her. The young man took out his cell phone from his pants pocket. Then hand the phone to Leo. With a cramped face, Leo received the very thing he coveted from Kei's hand.

"Make up, thank you..!"

Leo stepped towards the corner of the house, began to squeeze the expensive object. Not realizing that his brother was staring at him. From his gaze, Micah wanted his sister to know, if he objected to his sister's behavior.

"Udah, no papa. Just relax, I'm sincere..!"

As if knowing what was in Micah's mind, Kei immediately said the sentence.

"I'm sorry, he likes cell phones, he likes eyes..!"

"Eh, seriously..!"

Leo immediately said the sentence as if he did not believe it.

"Yes, but on one condition, play a game to chase your dreams. Don't make a fad doang..!"

Kei, suck. And Leo cheered with excitement. Micah was just a head-scalp.

"You're it. That stuff is expensive, you must have got it with full struggle, do not want to be let go..!"

"Yes, I also saw Micah's man, I saw that your sister was serious about trying out abilities, making her a gamer, so let her fight..!"

Micah sighed.

"Eh, what are you doing...? Nullis..?"

Micah immediately wanted to close his laptop, when Kei wanted to see what he wrote.

"I want to see, can't I..?"

Kei looked at Micah with a serious look.

"I don't care..!"

"Hey, yesterday we didn't talk about this..? You can't feel bad for the work you do..!"

"Yes, but..!"

"I want to see..!"

Without asking Micah for his approval, Kei grabs Micah's laptop and opens it.

His eyes traced Micah's writings, and Micah closed his eyes. It was shameful that what he wrote read like that before his eyes

"Good you know. It's non-fiction, your own story..?"

Micah nodded, there was a sense of shame sneaking up on him, while admitting it all.

"It's cool, so want to read, ohya, but I can input not same you..?"

Kei, turned to look at Micah with a meaningful gaze.

"Please. As long as it builds, why not...?"

"Your writing is good, the story is also flowing, it's good to understand, but.."

"But what..?"

"There's a slight mistake in your typing..!"

"Eh, time ..?"

"This is what I tell you,"

Kei, shifting his seat closer to Micah, could smell the perfume from the man's body. Suddenly his heart was beating..

"Try looking at this. Dialogue sentences after quotation marks should be capital letters, then, try, do not mostly use the point in the middle of the sentence, if not because the sentence is hanging..!"

"A sentence hangs, for example, a person who says, but hesitates, so that his sentence can not be completed, is it..?"

"Yes, that means. Maybe, this seems trivial, but if we send the writing to the publisher, usually a lot of mistakes like this, make them lazy to fix it, when you send your short story, you say gini..?"

"I pay people rental typing..!"

"Eh, why don't you take a tick yourself..?"

"What cake..?"

"This..?"

"That's a loan, Leo's looking for a loan so I can type my own script..!"

"Over time you see what the typing results are..?"

"More or less like this, I just follow what I see, because the results are like this, yes I follow..!"

"That's why, your short story is not published in the magazine, while when Kalisha who sent your short story was loaded, I'm sure, her mistake was there. How to type, because your story is cool..!"

Yeah, it makes sense too, right..? So here's the answer, from my questions these past few days, my writing was loaded when Kalisha sent her, maybe she typed it herself, I'm sure her rich college kid, her typing technique pinter, she wrote, while I'm in school, so use typing rental services, they don't pay attention to this anymore, my gosh. It turns out that to be a writer, there are indeed many things to learn, not just smart to make stories...

Note: Which looks easy, sometimes not easy when done, but if we know, every thing must have its own level of difficulty, then he will not be surprised, but if we know, every thing must have its own level of difficulty, if faced with a very difficult challenge.

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