Fighting or Giving Up

PLOT

*Initial story*

"Erlene! Wake up! You've had bad luck. Do you want to go to school?"

shout angry mami Erlena.

Gubrake ...

Erlena fell from her bed in shock to hear the screams of her beloved mother.

"Ouch... Mommy! Don't yell at me too. Lena's going down." said Erlena in an annoyed tone.

"Yes already. You take a bath, it's late again" the mother ordered.

Skip ...

Erlena rushed to the bathroom to clean her whole body. Then she gets ready to wear her school uniform. Erlena came out of her room and went to the dining table.

"Lena! Want some fried rice or bread?" ask mami Erlena.

"Have bread, Mam, it's too late." replied Lena in a quick tone.

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ERLENA BREAKFAST..........

"Len, do you want to drive or ride your bike?" ask papi Erlena.

"Just get a motorbike deh pi, after all, Lena has not left on a motorcycle" I said while running to take the keys of my favorite motorcycle.

"Yes be careful Len." remembers the papi Erlena.

*Conflicts*

"Why did you kill my sister Len, she's not wrong with you huh?!" Melvino cried out in anger when he saw His sister who was about to close His eyes.

"Gue didn't kill your brother Vin, I helped him from someone who intended to kill your sister!" Erlena's shouting did not accept the allegations Melvino gave to her.

"Not to stop you! His evidence you hold a knife that has a lot of His blood and in the knife there are already your fingerprints. You bastard!" Snapped Melvino while staring intently at Erlena.

"Someone wants to admit it ha-ha-ha!" Accuse Melvino with a slanted smile.

"Gue's not a killer, I'm just calling Adel!" Shouted Erlena with tears streaming down His cheeks.

"Vin! Enough, you take your sister to the hospital first! Problems talk about it later! Poor little brother, you've endured the pain!" Jerk the King while hitting his back Melvino.

"Why do you hit me son of a bitch, why don't you hit that killer?" melvino asked as she clenched her hands together followed the eyes that were emitting anger.

"Because there's no evidence that he's guilty, you've already been looking for proof ha!" Shouted the King while staring intently at Melvino.

"Gue's seen from the video he loves, I've seen everything you know!" Shouted Melvino in the emotion.

"Conscious bego! Your sister needs your help, not your backstabbing!" Zaky said with a hunting breath.

Melvino ran up to his sister and sat on the floor stroking his sister's cheek.

Erlena who heard Melvino's accusation felt pain in His heart, what else Melvino's eyes implied a very deep grudge to Erlena when in fact Erlena was the one who helped Adelia from the murder that had occurred.

*Trale development*

The flow is good, good and very stressful so that readers are interested in reading it.

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Erlena who heard Melvino's accusation felt pain in His heart, what else Melvino's eyes implied a very deep grudge to Erlena when in fact Erlena was the one who helped Adelia from the murder that had occurred.

*Conflict resolution*

"I was feeling the emotion of the hyx... I know I was wrong and I'm so sorry what I did with you.." Melvino said in tears.

"I'm sorry, baby, I'm sorry." said Melvino, sitting on the floor.

Erlena who could not bear to see the figure of the man she once loved and now the feeling of love was present again when the man returned with a sense of regret for wasting himself.

Erlena crouched down to Melvino and patted him twice on the shoulder and said.

"Gue is sorry you, ah no need to cry. Thankfully, there is only me here. Try if there are many others you must be embarrassed." concluded Erlena with a thin smile when she saw Melvino's body stiffened.

"I will not be ashamed, if I have received an apology from you dear." said Melvino Lirih while looking deeply at Erlena.

*Final story*

"I love you so much from then until now. No one

can replace my love." I stroked Erlena's cheek.

This look of love is only for Erlena.(I'm so

loved you from before until now. Love

I will not be replaced by anyone else).

Falling in love is never in the plan

somebody's. Until one day we are new

realize that we love this guy so much.

Love is a happy feeling. Love is strong, though,

too strong to play. That feeling

strange and difficult to explain, but when

you fall in love, you'll know it from

in heart.