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However,
Just a few steps away from Clara, the voice of someone in front just made the second step stop, and the voice stopped,
"Denis.." said Dana.
"Loh mas denis." said Clara
"Who is that guy" they said simultaneously and then Ana and Dana turned to glance at Clara and looked at each other.
"What will he do on stage." said the three of them at the same time..
But simultaneously their focus immediately turned to a human figure who was standing on the stage, which was noticed by everyone in that place...
"Hello all good afternoon by evening." said the person who is none other than Denis...
Compact everyone answered "sianggg", not least Ana, Dana and Clara..
"Duh-duh what do you want to say yes.???, why suddenly my feeling is not good gini ya...!! Oh my gosh hopefully not something big. But how come my heart suddenly beats like this huh..?" Said Clara in the heart, while continuing to pay attention to the movements of the denis mas up there..
"Well that's why dens mengelitin me with a strange look so..?" He thought again with a feeling of anxiety..
" My name is denis, my purpose is in this place at this time is." said Denis hanging..
"Well, what's wrong with my heart." said Clara again in her heart..
"What will you do up there..?" Thought Dana too...
"It looks like this guy is trying to give someone a romantic surprise...." Ana said in her heart while smiling happily imagining the romantic treatment that someone ahead would take...
Behave Ana who smiles alone while paying attention to other men, certainly not separated from the supervision of a Dana..
Until suddenly...
"Hey take good care of your eyes remember now that you already have me as your lover.!!, so don't try to upset me, or you'll know the consequences..!!" Again Dana threatens Ana, making Ana back in control of her emotions so as not to look too enthusiastic in front of Dana, with the treatment of someone who is certainly no one for her only a stranger ..
"Hemzz my goal here is to say something that I think is very important..!!.." Denis then stops to regulate his breathing...
"The last few weeks, my originally mediocre life.., flat, nothing special suddenly turned out to be extraordinary...! Since..." again denis hanging his sentence..
Doing denis on the stage makes everyone scream hysterically so hysterical, most of them understand where the direction of the conversation denis, including Ana..
"Remember my words just now..!!" Said Dana again this time with a glint of her sharp eyes, which made Ana shudder in horror...
Ana just nodded her head slowly..
"What is Denis trying to do, I'm really scared..!! Oh my gosh my heart seems to be jumping up in a minute..!" Clara said in her heart...
"Yes my life that was so rigid changed after the arrival of someone who currently means a lot in my life. Honestly, I love that person very much..!! But I realize my attitude has been too rigid for him." said Denis with a smile so sweet.
"Owh, my goodness, his smile is so sweet." cried those who saw his demeanor..
"For that I want to apologize to him for the unusual attitude I showed all this time.!!, you know, it's all I did because I tried to hold back my feelings..!!" Denis again. This time his pair of locked eyes looked at Clara's pair of eyes, which made Clara even more wrong, as a result everyone became increasingly hysterical...
"Am I really nervous..?" Clara said slowly...
Then Clara ran over to Ana who was still silent at the exact moment they stopped earlier..
Clara gripped Ana's hand very strongly, trying to channel her nervousness. That of course made Ana moan in pain..
"Well what a.." asked clara curiously..
"If only the person he meant was you, I would definitely jump happily ra..hahaha" Ana said that made Clara cough reflexively
Uhuk uhuk..
"You're why ra.." asked Ana curiously..
"Do you know who that guy is?" Clara asked, she wanted to know if she knew the person she was talking about...
"No, no." replied ana relaxed
Then they refocus on denis who often stop the sentence just to breathe, and also try to hold back his nervousness..
"For that..!! Because, just today I've been so unable to hold back my feelings anymore, then I want that woman to be my lover right now..!" Denis was nervous
"Call...!!, call..!!, call..!!" shouted everyone including ana, who this time was left alone by the funds...
"Hopefully not me." murmured Clara, staring at the denis mas who just kept staring intensely at her, then slowly Clara shook her head a sign that she did not want to if that person was her
Yet..
"I hope you're not angry if I ask you to come up here." continued Denis because he saw clara shaking her head. He knows Clara is very panicked at the moment and maybe he knows if the person she is leading is Clara..
Destroyed was clara's hope after hearing the sentence denis just now..!!
"I beg you,,!! Come up here and tell me if you want to be my lover from now on." he said again hanging. (the author was nervous๐).
"Cla.....claras.....!!!" Continue denis a little nervous at once steady...
The sentence made Ana and Dana in great shock..
"What..!! so that guy is really you na? Oh my gosh even I just realized with his name is denis, denis close to you, at this time." said Ana wanted to pat her jidat loudly but was held back by funds..
Clara was silent...
"I beg Clara to come here." asked denis by pleading
"Sono ra, look at him so romantically..!!" He then pushed his best friend onto the stage..
Slowly but surely clara stepped her feet closer to the denis mas with great nervousness, then mas denis extended her hand to make it easier for clara to climb.. of course Clara received the helping hand..
Arriving above...
For a moment the atmosphere became a little more tense precisely between the two of them until the end...
"I.a..aaa..akkk..."
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