Abandoned House (True Story)

True Story - He's my brother. Part 1's

Arriving at Gg. Lodge, seen from a distance Edi who stood on the shoulder of the road, while bowed to the cellphone in his grasp.

He is seen neatly wearing a white city-box cameja, with Levi's pants made to cone from the knee to the heel and black shoes that are rounded to the tip, solidifying his footrest.

I pulled the vehicle over and stopped right in front of him. "Oi! Hayu!" my broom, made Edi a little surprised and turned his head quickly to my area.

"Weh! Where's the, A, his house?" ask Edi, while riding in the vehicle and sitting in the back.

"Sorry, it was a shower, Di. Still going in again, pretty far, Iah," I said, pulling the gas pedal, starting to slide towards the Lodge house. "What time is it from home, Di?"

"Jam one if not wrong, A," replied Edi. "Oh, yes, A. Said the person who wants to sell the bike can not if C.O.D today," he continued.

"yeah! kok that? Yes, if you can't do it here now!, right, so it's a waste of time, Di," I said.

"It's not clear this is the guy, A! In the old SMS balesnya, on the phone never lifted," explained Edi. "Where's dong, A?"

"Say the Deketeers Gg. The chain? why don't you ask for the address?"

"Yes, that's why Edi came here. There's, uh, A, the address of the guy who wants to sell the bike."

"Oh, yeah, it's, it's good if there is one. Let's go samperin, shall we." After this conversation, we talked a little about my mother and little sister.

However, the deeper I took Edi into the Lodge area, for some reason this premonition seemed to refuse. Don't want if Edi has to spend the night at the Lodge.

"bt ... How anyway? what if he can't C.O.D today? Want to spend the night here, or go home?" I said, ascertaining Edi's wishes.

"Nginep a time, yeah, A. If Edi comes home scared too, continue to come here again tomorrow," replied Edi hesitantly.

I buzzed, looking for another way, "Hmm ... Die! if you sleep in the Arif rash in Gg Chain would not?"

"ah! No, ah, A!" cut Edi in a hurry, "If, A, Deni sleeps there too is okay" he added.

Besides being timid, he was also shy, maybe because Edi rarely played to Bogor.

I let out a sigh of resignation, "Yes, I've already," I said forcefully.

I know very well that Edi is very timid. Never mind where he just met, at home he did not dare to go to the toilet at night.

Of course, this will be very unfortunate if he has to deal with the gripping atmosphere that often occurs in the Lodge house.

I'm not only worried about the disturbance he might find there, but also I'm worried about Edi's panic that will endanger him.

Because the truth that can make someone hurt is not caused by something invisible, but from the panic itself that can bring himself trapped in great danger.

I turned off the engine of the vehicle, when we arrived at the parking lot of the Lodge house. "Yes! We have arrived ... Nah! This is the Lodge house, Di."

Edi immediately came down with eyes glaring around, "Cock not yet, si, A?"

"Yes, it hasn't ... Hayu's in!"

"So cool, A!"

I shook my head faintly, "Yes, go inside, gih. There's Arif in the room." And Ed walked into the house.

But I turned around, changed the direction of walking down the left corner of the parking lot that can penetrate to the backyard.

Trreeett... Ttttreeeeett's...

It is not difficult to find Tohir mang in this rumag, it looks he is cutting a number of ceramics with a grinding machine.

I looked in all directions, to make sure it was just the two of us here, and greeted him, "Mang ...." Mang Tohir stopped his work.

"I, Mas."

"Gini Mang ... What time will it be to go back to Gg. The chain?" tanyaku, making Mang Tohir look into the house looking for a wall clock.

"Fifth hour, Mas, me and the others went home to Gg. Chain," he said, "what's the matter, Mas. How do you whisper?"

"I think Mamang can not, if tonight sleep here," I said, pitched a little ask.

He threw out a face, and took a deep breath, "Duh, how, yes, Mas ...," he replied hesitantly, as he opened the hat that perched on his head.

I don't think this will work, considering he would rather resign than spend the night here.

I snorted, "I just need the vehicle, anyway, Mang ... Fine, deh, then let me take Mang Tohir to Gg. Chain," I close, turning around to leave.

"Mas, Mum ...." I stopped my steps and turned towards Mang Tohir. "Yes, I spent the night here."

Hearing that I raised my eyebrows and exclaimed, "Nahhh! Seriously, Mang?"

He nodded faintly, smiling at me, "Yes ... I don't feel good if I keep going at the boss's house, while Arif and, Mas, just stay here."

I raise my right arm, then throw one thumb at him. "OK, steady Mang, do not be afraid, the red-red paper is there," my words made Mang Tohir laugh amusedly.

"Ready Mas. Set it, set it ... But if Ento and Jajang won't, Mas."

"Most importantly Mang Tohir. Let the others as usual,"

"Ocem! Yeah, I'll hear you later, Mang. If you want to go home,"

"Ready, commander!" he shouted, then I walked towards the living room.

I don't know what other distractions we'll find tonight, hopefully no worse than the night before.

I entered the house and saw Edi sitting on one of the chairs in the living room. "Where, Die. Any word on who's selling bikes?" I said, sitting on a teak chair.

Hearing my words, Edi checked his phone. "There is, A, like tomorrow" said Edi, with a sour face.

"Yes, it's ... Yeah, well, we'll see tomorrow," sambar Arif, from the room.

"Yes already there playing the same game Arif gih, Aa again waiting for the workers first," I said, making Edi move from his seat.

I glanced at the wall clock that still showed at four in the afternoon, but my feelings were already depressed. Until I looked at the half-finished concrete stairs, the only access to the second floor.

I kept looking at the stairs with all sorts of memories implied in my mind. Because last night, almost completely the mysterious sound I heard came from the second floor.

Curiosity raging, as if to encourage me to see what was there, considering that from the beginning of this building stood I never set foot to look at the floor.

I took a deep breath, instilled courage in me, and began to walk closer to the stairs. I had to be extra careful in choosing the steps on this staircase, because in the children still scattered the nails of blessing, and the crust of the pointed wall that could tear the soles of my feet easily.

My fingers retraced against the wall around the stairs, I slowly climbed up one by one the ladders.

Just half way was already felt a thick dust billowing in the air. Maybe the pollution from the ceramic that is being cut by Mang Tohir behind the house.

And upon arriving on the second floor, I observed in all directions. Seen large blocks that stand, neatly arranged that serves as a support for the ceiling of the room.

It is very difficult to step here because the distance of the beam and other beams is very narrow—maybe about less than half a meter. It was so hard that I had to tilt my shoulders to get through it.

Just how many minutes have my body started to bathe in sweat, because the air around it feels stuffy here.

Feeling unable to bear it, I also ended the search. It is very difficult to force yourself to go deeper. There's nothing I can find on this floor anyway.

Although I was sure that last night I heard some iron falling from this floor, but I did not find a single iron lying in all its hunters.

I looked back, and again I got a row of concrete stairs that were not much different from the previous one.

But this one is still covered by sacks on every child. Maybe to be protected from rainwater, see some wide-open four-square holes around the walls—just above the stairs

On the left and right, there are three unglazed windows one meter long and half a meter wide. The windows are still without glass or cover. Likewise with the door hole that is fixed on the second floor balcony.

EHHEMMM~

Suddenly I turned back quickly and glanced at all directions in great haste.

Wait for me not to be deaf, it was obvious that the heavy voice of an old man was growling. I realized I was the only one on this floor.

As my hair bristled, I hurried to leave the second floor immediately.

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