Abandoned House (True Story)

True Story - Anxious Full Night Part 3

Although there are 10 souls under this house–homes that have not been completed are built completely–but still do not reduce the anxiety, which I get, after hearing the sound of the water machine was lit.

I walked into the kitchen room about to turn off the water machine that– was just below the stairs– was still in a ringing condition, when I arrived in front of him. Not thinking long, I immediately pulled the cable connected to the electrical switch, until the machine again rang, shutting down instantly. It's much better, Man ... After successfully launching my actions, I returned to the first room, to join Arif and the others.

"Mouth and fro, you?" asked Ardan, turning to me, "Udah is like an iron."

"Eh ... Don't want to play a game?" added Arif.

I guess Arif's idea wasn't too bad. While waiting for the drowsiness to arrive, there's no harm in me pitting strategy with them, "You slaughtered how empty?!"

"God ... If speaking ... Here's sparring!" exclaim Ardan.

"Main, nih .. " said Arif, put the Stick Game out loud, and then rise up followed by Alvien.

"All make Vin's coffee." Alvien just nodded in response to my word+.

Before long I played the game, there were panicked cries of Arif and Alvien echoing throughout the room, "Fire ... Apis ... The fire!" It made me and Ardan aghast, who then ran into the kitchen.

"Why! Ref!" my loud, seeing Arif panicking, hurriedly picked up a bucket filled with water.

My eyes grew, when I saw the rising flames devouring the vault of the rambutan tree that was shady.

I turned around and ran towards the bathroom–to take the water–but really shit, there was only one bucket left, that was a medium-sized paint mark, too, and one barrel of water containing 250 liters.

The workers who heard the noise we caused, began to scatter from inside his room.

"Help us put out the fire behind the house!" my loud, hastily ran away carrying a small bucket.

I splashed water on the branches of trees that started to burn violently, but as if meaningless. The flames were already growing, very difficult to extinguish. Plus the fire point that was on top of the tree, made it difficult for us to water it. But I don't care about that, because it would be very dangerous if the fire spread and devoured the back of the house, which was still filled with dry bamboo.

"Kurangg!! Add more water!!"

"Woyyy! Bring that water vat here!"

"Lu, do it there, Alviennn!!"

"Patience, Sir!"

Free! It's obviously free! My breath was already wheezing, no longer able to compensate for my body's movements. It all just looks futile. The tongue of the fire continued to lick everything around it, making it so difficult to control. Though it'll be too late, I'd better call the Fireman!

However, just as I was about to turn away from the blazing flames that continued to grow, suddenly streams of ari washed down profusely, passing over my head. I looked around at the source, "Mang Ubun!"

"Cumcio ... Steady Mang!"

"Sorry, Mas. Long time ago, just pull the hose first." obviously.

"Haw! Mang!"

We are very grateful, fortunately Ubun mang act swiftly, unlike us who even panicked uncalled! Until not realizing if this house has a hose, which is commonly used for the purpose of stirring Sement.

But it would be even worse if Arif and Alvien did not go to the kitchen. I don't know what this house is. Because on the second floor is still filled with dry bamboo logs to be used as workers' footing, in order to flatten the back wall, plus the inside of the second floor, which is still crowded by dry beams, dry, as a roof of the building.

After how many minutes, the red whiz was extinguished, the smoke so billowed into the air, seen Mr. Tanto approached us with a face bent guilty.

"Mas, Arif, bc ... I'm sorry, ma'am," There was a voice of contrition, withstanding deep guilt, "I forgot that if I was burning trash under that tree, I don't think it would have crept, therefore, I just stayed, I apologize, Mas."

"So! This is because of it, Mamang! Huh uh?" gusar Arif, his face was drawn furiously, looking at the mang Tanto who was standing before him, bowed languidly. "Think, Mang! What if this house gets burned? Mamang could change!"

The atmosphere was suddenly silent, as Arif's high tone echoed around us, of course the middle-aged man was speechless, leaving only the sound of splashing branches that had been charred in flames.

"Gaji, Mamang for life, not necessarily able to replace it!" We just fell silent, watching Arif pointing at the face of Mang Tanto, who already looked deathly pale, "Have to be poor, his brain is stupid!"

I stepped over to Arif who had been consumed by a sea of anger, "Rif ... Mang Tanto apologized ... This is a disaster, not his will."

"Yes, this is a disaster, Den! But.. can you still say like that, if this house is burnt because of insolence, Him?!"

I slightly flicked my left arm, without a hint of Arif, hinting for everyone to leave us here. And the workers responded well.

"Liat bitter face mang Tanto, Rif ... His inner cry, He is nothing more than a man, who makes a living for the sake of his family, He is willing to slam the bones to get a halal sustenance. And now.it is being tested ... Not just him, but all of us Rif."

"Yes, Rif ... Poor mang Tanto," added Ardan, "He, right. I'm sorry."

"There's a hose, anyway. Sir," said Alvien, "Tuh ... The fire is dead."

"Sorry, he's Rif ... Don't disconnect the source of the supplies,"

"Yes .. Yes, I'm sorry!" said Arif, who was called by mang Tanto, "This time I forgive the actions, Mamang, but do not let it happen again."

"I wasn't fired, was I. Mas?"

"No, Mang."

"Alhamdulillah, my son is sick, Mas. I don't know where to find work anymore, if Mas Arif fired me," sedu mang Tanto, grabbed Arif's arm, full of gratitude. "Thank you very much, Mommy."

"Together, Mang."

"Well, that's dong! That's just Arif ...," cried Ardan, "Come! fight again, that's."

"Young ... Unbarred!!" I cried out, and We went back into the house.

"Fecause of tension! How about, make laper, yak?" celoteh Alvien's.

"Good noodle cooking, here. Vien," added Ardan

"Well, that's a good idea" I said.

"Let me cook!" exclaim Alvien.

Today was tiring, moreover, the big incident I experienced earlier, the feeling of fatigue also made me want to immediately lie on the bed.

I glanced at Arif who was talking through the mobile network. I don't know what they're talking about.

"Russia ... We're told to chain Gg."

I sighed, clucking lazily, "Why what are you doing?"

"Bokap, I, Den ...."

"Why Wa. Hasan?"

"The disease is relapsing, again."

"Yes, yeah, we're going to Gg. Chains."

Indeed, I know, if Arif's father lately is not in good condition, even I heard the news last time, which he said he was in the hospital.

"Not yet to sleep, my friend? it's almost midnight, you know?" ask Mr. Ubun, who is still standing guard inside the house.

"We'll be back for a while, Mang" replied Arif.

"Wome, Mas?"

"There's a sudden need, Mang," I trimmed, wearing a sweater.

"Okay, Ready, Boss."

"Where are you going?" asked Ardan, seeing that we were dressed.

"Reverse, first," replied Arif, hurriedly wearing his black jacket. "You coming?"

"Lha, there's only one motor, right?" added Ardan.

"You can, twice back," I added.

"Good all, four of you can too," lead Arif.

"Of ... Vien's? Turn around, you?" peekot Ardan's.

"Huh? Back around?" sahut Alvien, from the kitchen room, seems to have not finished being a chef in this house. "Gue, make this noodle, sir!"

"Already, let me just make the noodles, Mas," sambar mang Ubun, while laughing.

"Goddess ... Yeah-well, nih. Continue cooking," explained Alvien, then prepare with us.

Luckily the two-wheeled vehicles we used had tanks and seats that were long enough, to be enough even though carrying five people at once.

"Are you sure you want to go home?" ask Ubun sir who drove us to the front gate.

"Yes, Mang. Household, yes. Mang," replied Arif, accompanied by a motor engine that turns on.

"Ready, Mr. Boss, be careful, Mas," said Mr. Ubun smiling and closing the gate.

The cold of the night wind pierced my skin, and we began this journey, taking a rocky and bumpy road, making us move very slowly. As far as my eyes could see, there was only a row of towering trees with weeds lying along the shoulder of the road.

"Bang Yudi asked us to gather at home, Arif?" ask Ardan.

"Wa. Hasan, sick, Dan," I commented.

"Oh ... "

"Bad news is even answered 'oh' how si, sir."

"Yes, Sorry ..."

The vehicle continued to go on, crashing into the dark and the suny night, my eyes could not stop circling in all directions. Until we were confronted with one location that I thought, this was the scariest place along the Lodge road.

A bad feeling immediately stuck my mind through this road, on the right of the road there is an old house that is already fragile eaten by wild plants that cover every corner. The walls had partially collapsed and blackened, the roof and doors were gone, presenting a scene that was enough to make me shudder, as I glanced into the house. And right on the right, not far from the house. It looks like an old bathhouse that has been fragile inedible time, whether still used or not.

I was flabbergasted when I felt the speed of our vehicle slow down and faltered, accompanied by Arif who grumbled, "Apes is very late at night!" And suddenly the motor suddenly just died.

"Campus!" gusar Aliven's.

"Oh, how is this!" peekot Ardan's.

"God! On the way down first, why!" gusar Arif, bowing his body, like he was touching the inside of a motorbike engine.

Who would have thought this vehicle would go on a complete strike, leaving me and the others, stranded in the middle of this pitch-black road, on the left and right, there were only wild trees, he said, it looked at us suspiciously.

Ardan and Arif are trying to turn on the dilapidated motorbike engine, but have not yet brought results, this seems to answer my bad feeling.

"It's almost 15 minutes we're here" I said, glancing at the clock on the phone's screen, "Any ... Why can't there be no signal?"

"Gerutu aja, not bantuin ..," said Arif.

"If I know a machine, I've helped from earlier, times."

"Lu, I think I understand, what?" lead Ardan.

"Call the house guy, Rif," I suggested, "Hp, I don't have a signal."

"Nah-lho, this is why my phone also has no signal!" Arif lifts his phone to the ceiling, hoping to find a little signal, "Try on you, Dan."

"Name ..."

I turned towards Alvien who had just been silent, from the beginning we arrived at this location, "Oy ... Diem aja, you."

"Sarum! It's unclean! iiii!" muttered Aliven, who was standing not far away from me, he looked like a cold person, with both arms clutching his chest, and his face bowed as if looking away from something.

"Lu, why, Vien?"

"Jp ... No, look over there, Den!" he said, with a stifled tone, he pointed towards a large tree.

"What sight?" I said, with the netra observing a big tree, "There's nothing, Vien."

Alvien was just mute, his body looking shivering.

"Rif, that's a still not?" my many. "This is Alvien sick as he is."

"Huh? It hurt?" refute Ardan, turning for a moment towards Aliven.

"Again clean his Bussy, be patient, lah," cried Arif, he was still focused on improving the engine of the motor.

The atmosphere is getting worse with the condition of Alvien yamg getting weaker. Even to stand up he depends on my shoulders.

I don't know what he went through to make it like this, but when we left the house, he still looked fit, there were no signs or symptoms if he was sick.

"Eh! That's see ... There's light!" Ardan exclaimed, sticking out his arm in reference to a faint light, which moved slowly.

The long we looked at, the light moved closer and closer, breaking through the dense weeds among the large trees.

Before long, a man was seen with a lamp on his left arm.

"Naraon's chef, Jang? (For what, son?)"

Because it was so dark, I couldn't see his face, but from

the heavy sound that he let out, and from the way he was not upright anymore, I can be sure if he was 60 years old and above.

The grandfather was standing on the shoulder of the road, probably three meters away from where we were.

"Motor and kunaon, Jang? (What's the motor, son?)."

Honestly speaking, I am not comfortable with his presence, because it is quite strange that there is a Grandfather in a place like this. I think Arif and Ardan feel the same way, they face to face, as if full of big question marks.

We were silent, looking at him suspiciously, until he repeated the question, "Motor na kunaon, Jang? (What's the motor, son?)"

With hesitation, Arif replied, "Yes Ki, strike ... Is there a workshop around here, Ki?"

"Caving ka imah Aki weh, Jang. (Follow to Grandpa's house, son),"

Arif turned his head towards me and raised his chin for a moment, "Where?" I just shook my head faintly, conveying my disobedience

"Moal bener mun icing didieu, mah, Jang! (It wouldn't be right to stay here, son!)"

"Where, Rif?" ardan said, it seems that he considered Grandfather's words.

"The road is far away! Not to mention the terrain you know yourself," explained Arif. " Want to push the motor home?"

What Arif said was not wrong, but I'm not sure if it's a good idea. After all we don't know who this mysterious Grandfather is, and don't know what his purpose is.

"Mango, Jang, (Come, Son,)" said the Grandfather, allowing us to follow him.

By tapping Alvien's body, I tried to approach Arif and Ardan.

"Rif ...," I whispered, Arif and Ardan turned towards me, "lu, sure? I don't feel good, you know!"

Arif sighed lazily, "Yes, continues? We have to how!"

"Si Alvien aja lemes like that, Den," said Ardan. "Can't you walk alone to Gg Chain?"

Maybe there was no other choice, I had to put this bad feeling aside. Moreover, Alvien's body feels hotter. I'm worried that he can't walk anymore.

With a heavy heart I said, "As far as you are, Rif." Make Arif get up and prepare to hold his vehicle.

"The point is that we moved from here first, Rif," prune Ardan, who is called by Arif.

After considering everything, we agreed to go with Grandpa, of course we have a plan. Arif and Ardan were already planning to repair our vehicle upon arrival at Grandpa's place.

Seeing the Grandfather had started walking— entered the bush right on the side of the road—we also started following him.

"Dan ... Help me push the bike!" Hearing that, Ardan swiftly helped him push the motor from behind.

"Eh! ... That's the way, huh?" My eyes could not escape the figure of the mysterious Grandfather, who was now waiting for us among the lush weeds.

"Have he gone through our time?" cetus Arif, with his heavy breath. "Russia ... What's the Alvien, si?"

"I don't know me either, but he's really hot, Rif."

"G ... When he left, he was in good health!"

"Ref ... If it turns out that Grandpa set us up, how?"

"Yeah, Den ... Udah, lah. Let's see it first!"

"Not that, Rif ... I'm just weird."

"What's so weird, Den?" sela Ardan's.

"Yes! Where there are grandfathers who wander about in the middle of the night, in the garden, again!"

Arif snorted, turning for a moment towards me, "Suudzon aja you, same person!"

"What's that old Grandpa afraid of?" tymphal Ardan. I chose to be silent, not to debate the matter.

Rustling dry leaves and branches, accompanying our steps to trace the path squeezed by thick shrubs and trees. I was very careful in stepping, other than having no lighting, the ground on this road was so humid.

Our journey was very draining. How not, I have to hold Alvien's body that has been drooping, even to step alone is difficult for him. While Arif and Ardan try to lead a motorcycle, which is often mired by a hole covered in leaves.

"One! Two! Pull! ..," Pekik Arif, pull the motor wheel that is stuck in a hole, with the help of Ardan,"Sip!"

Every now and then Ardan wiped his brows and grumbled, "Crazy! This is not the road!"

"That's what Alvien can't walk on his own?" gusar Arif, "Here ... Change me, Den."

It turned out that the motorbike was more gloomy than helping Alvien walk, only a few minutes after my body was flooded with cold sweat. And Grandpa was still walking leisurely in our arms. He never looked even a little, even though we were in trouble. In fact, the light is one-on-one only from the lamp she carries. Either I should thank him or be angry with him.

"Brand ... Still far?" my question, in a decapitated tone.

"Sakeudik deui, Jang. (a little more, son.)"

"From now! A little mute feeling!" muttered. "Rif, replace Ardan."

"No ... I push 'aja, I'm."

And until finally, the Grandfather's step slowed down, "Geus nepi, Jang. (It's here, son)" He stuck out his right arm somewhere.

I let out a sigh of relief, as did Arif and Ardan. After a few minutes we struggled with the rough path.

There was a hut house, standing among the trees surrounding this location. The walled house of the room did not have enough lighting, as if hiding behind the darkness of the night.

Just looking at it has made my romantic feathers bristle, as if I am getting closer, with a bad feeling that has been firmly attached to this mind since.

"Cadieu soup, Jang! (Come in here, son,)" said the Grandfather, "Aki bade kadanya heula.(Grandpa's going there first." The Grandfather pointed at the path that ended up entering into the wild plantation.

We were speechless, silent and silent as Grandfather continued on his way, and lost in the darkness of the night and the thick trees. The dim light from his lamp, now no longer seen.

I don't know whose house is in front of me. The door was tightly closed, I could not hear a single human voice beneath it. There was only the singing of the insects exclaiming, breaking the silence of the night.

Feeling tired with the burden that I carried earlier, I also laid Alvien's body on the bamboo hall in front of the house. The air around here feels so cold, it feels right through my skin.

"Continue, how?" I said, breathing tired. "Grandfather, you're gone."

"Let's go, huh!" arif's job, then he collapsed next to Alvien, "In pain, I!"

"Maybe, si, Grandpa is looking for help" Ardan said.

"Search for help in the garden!?"

"Calm down, why, Den."

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