The Path of Madness

Revision chapter 13 - September 15

I changed and improved a few things in my initial chapter. I realized that the story was too mundane in my early chapters and did not emphasize conflict. And yes I want the novel to go slow for the introduction of the world and characters. I quite like the history of the Victorian era and maybe I will put a lot of that knowledge. But I also look forward to the time when the conflict will start in the last chapter.Maybe in the future there will be a lot of depictions of tragedy and darkness. I also learned the importance of a genre. What I previously realized was just how the storyline wanted to have some elements included in addition to the main elements. Just as a complement.