The End of Love ?

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'The great commander is he who is generous and does not care about fame'

Shasa silenced her lover who was busy looking for her attention earlier. It had been almost 2 hours he silenced the Arab-faced man.

"Grandfather!" Erzo's voice softened as usual

"The way is done Bang! No need to say anything else" he said

Erzo was surprised

"Yes yes, no more"

Suddenly the man in a striped uniform approached the two of them.

"Izin Bang, the plan is over" he reported

"Good! Where's?"

"It's Bang!" He said while giving his cell phone

"Yes you can go!"Erzo said firmly

"Ready!"

Erzo clasped Shasa's hand.

"Second, instead of just silently mending Physical exercise yuk!"

Shasa looked at Erzo in disbelief, Physique? It's his birthday. Shasa thought Erzo would still persuade him. Erzo can understand him, naturally Shasa childish because he just turned 18 years old. Shasa was 6 years different from him. Erzo 24 years.

Shasa looked furiously.

"Now I'm Bang's birthday!" Didn't take it.

"Kan Adek himself said no need to say anymore. Nih mumpung Adek wear sports clothes, we are all physical!"

"Gee! Yaudah spit her way! How can a snail cake be an officer?!"

"Yes my dear sister"

The bule-faced man told Shasa to run ten rounds of Kodam field.

"Ten Bang? Seriously?"

Erzo nodded

"If you want to be a soldier, you must be able to" he said

"Who said you can't? I'm just making sure Bang. I heard that Brother only told me to go round once" he said

"Oh Allah, may we have children. Our son's a runner amen...Yaudah hurry!"

Erzo saw Shasa running until the ninth round. But Shasa was running slower. Shasa collapsed on the spot.

"Oh God!" Startle

It's not according to plan

"Well! Watch out for the kids why!" His Lettingan.

"It didn't go according to Deck's plan"

"Yes Bang, what about you?"

"Just check first, if not what goes to plan B"

"Ready Bang"

"Nurse, how come your calbin dong!"

"I am the one who raised you as a woman. Where are the others?"

"And you told me to wait. Plan A you failed."

"Jaudah tell me to come here, plan this with Bang Alex"

"Let's Letting be glad I didn't have Lu Suh!" Mandaic

Manda's the same age as Erzo.

"That's why find a girlfriend there!" Joking ejekannya.

"What connection?"

"Let's not get angry!"

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Shasa

I blinked my eyes, focusing the beam of light on my retina.

I saw this guy next to me, he looked worried.

"You are conscious!"

Why is he so stupid? Obviously I'm awake. Yes, I must have realized.

I can't stop thinking, how can I love a man this stupid?

"Akh" my ring when my head was dizzy.

"Drink the Deck!" The woman of the same rank as my boyfriend gave up her drinking water

I saw her name in Amanda.

"Te.trima Kasih Bu" said I .

Amanda just doesn't take it.

"Call me Brother Manda, Don't Ma'am. Do I look old? Entering Akmil education at the age of 19 years and inaugurated at the age of 23 years ago now I am 24 years old. Suh! Am I really old? " the nagging is upset

Why use me? Is he from Jakarta?

What the hell is that? Inner asked.

"Yes Brother.makasih Airnya" I said.

"Eh later you enter Akmil yes. let's be my Foster Brother" he said with a firm tone.

"Ready Dong!"

"Ready!"

I pulled the end of my lover's smudge. He looked and smiled at me. His face was approaching my face.

Oh no! Very close!

"If there's just a whisper!"

His words make my hair goosebumps

"Huh?"

My son cannot be lied to. The insolent! Why would Erzo bring my ears closer to her?

"Who is he?" I whispered to him

"My parents...My acting..."

Really less! Erzo laughed after whispering me with his sensual tone. I once read a novel by E.A.E whose title is 'My Lady' there said that Xasena disguised herself as a man to marry her man. Then I read the next page. Adham always bristles when Xasena's mouth is in his ear.

And facts! This is what I feel, so the novel is a little true. I really brushed Errrrzh...!

"No! Why so close to Bang?" I try with a sensual tone

Amanda looked at us in wonder

"He's my cousin, Abiku's sister's mother" he replied

Oh quick! They deserve to be very close.

"Daddy, do you want to be here until tomorrow?" Ask Amanda

I shook my head, why am I here until tomorrow?

"Come on out!" I nodded

But when I came out, I was given a surprise that I would never have felt if I wasn't with him.

"H-A-P-P-Y B-I-R-T-H-D-A-Y !!!"

I saw some soldiers, more than ten people carrying balloons of letters and beautiful flowers.

I smothered my mouth in disbelief.

Was he? Did Erzo prepare all this for me?.

"Happy Birthday of My Soulmate" he said loudly

Soul mates? Why that?

I cried, I thought he wouldn't say it again.

"Don't cry, tissue make snot!" Mandaic

Why can't he see the mood? Why wear it on all mockery? Uhk sucks, if no one else I've given Jab Strike, Hook and Uppercut. Complete right?

From his face it was like he wanted to aim at me with his rifle.

Oh if this game is 'no OAM ndas'e'

I tried to smile for Manda, but she would be my sister.

"Ma.thank you, Bang"

"Yes deck"

Erzo gave me a chocolate and a red velvet box.

Oh my Ring!

He fell down, he knelt before me.One of his legs remained.

Oh no this is like the Korean drama I used to watch 'Descendants of the sun'

"Be my Rib! I'm ready to wait for you at any moment" he said seriously

I'm ashamed! Maybe my cheeks are red

This what the hell? A proposal? Or what? They all cheered.

I nodded, what is this? Really really embarrassed.

"Yes Bang"

He put his ring on my ring finger.

I stared at the ring.

"So this is your heart? It's a little girl!"

"Ready Bang!"

"A representative, right?" Ask him to me.

I'm nodding.

"Still small!" Prattling

Small one? Small where? I am 18 years old! 18. I'd love to throw this guy at **, lucky to be handsome.

"It's 18 years, about 15." Try reading from earlier

"How tall are you?" Ask her

"172 cm" I answered

"Your postures are good" I saw Erzo boiling a little

"Bang, this guy's got me loh" he said

"Oh yes I forgot"

Erzo embraces Shasa.

Shasa smiled at him.

Seriate