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Promise M
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"Mas Aditya, eat first. Aunt is done eating." Kata bi Inah (Sambil pat Aditya's shoulder slowly)


"Yes bi, after this I eat."


Aditya looked towards his phone and saw the announcement coming in his email.


(Fill email messages briefly)


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Notified to all new students of Bina Bangsa University.


The OSEK Campus activity will be held on March 23, 20xx, it is expected that new students wear uniforms and bring equipment according to the division of each department.


For your attention, thank you.


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"Two weeks, yeah.." Aditya


"What's wrong?" Tanya bi Inah (Look at Aditya)


"Look for college bi."


"Hopefully the lady gets well before the first day of college"


Aditya answered her words with a nod, even he was worried that Keysa would not open his eyes.


"Bi Inah just go home, let me take care of the lady here."


"If I go home Aditya can't rest."


"No need to confuse my problem, auntie go home and rest. Tomorrow morning please come here to replace me, because at 09:00 I have to work. Maybe until night, during my lunch break I'll be here.


"Well, auntie go home first."


"I call Mr. Iwan, aunt comes home with Mr. Iwan only. It's a night of danger if aunt comes home alone."


Aditya looks for Iwan's number to contact him...


(Call connected)


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^^^"During night sir Iwan"^^


"Night, how can I help you?"


^^^"I would like to ask your father for help, to pick up bi Inah."^^^


"Well, I'll go to IGD."


^^^"Thank you sir"^^


"Sama-sama"


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(Disconnected Call)


After a few minutes Iwan arrived at IGD, bi Inah and Pak Iwan left IGD and walked to the parking lot.


Aditya continued to look at Keysa hoping that he would open his eyes.


"Wake up..." Aditya


Aditya yawned and rubbed his eyes...


*Why am I sleepy? My body feels very tired* inner Aditya


Aditya put his head on Keysa's bed by wrapping his hands together as a pedestal.


"Italy..."


Aditya hears a weak voice calling his name, Aditya tries to open his eyes and see who is calling him.


As Aditya raised his head, how surprised he was to see Keysa who had come to his senses and looked at his face.


"Miss is conscious?" Aditya asked (Stand up while looking at Keysa)


"Lo's here?" Ask Keysa limp


"Well, I'm here, what do you feel?" (Take care of Keysa's blanket)


"My body's limp, and it's not powered."


"Will you eat or drink?"


"Gue doesn't want anything, why are you here, Dit?"


"Yes me and bi Inah saw the unconscious lady in the room."


Keysa just stared at Aditya, in his heart there was still heartache and resentment. However, Keysa is convinced that Aditya is still unaware of his mistake. Even Aditya seemed not to want to say anything to her.


"Still at 23:42, go to bed, miss. Let it heal quickly."


Keysa agrees with Aditya and sleeps with Aditya's hand.


*Gue does not understand your attitude Dit, I am hurt by what you do." Keysa inner


Aditya looks at Keysa who is fast asleep, and walks out of the IGD room. Aditya sat in the front seat of the IGD room, his gaze directed towards the deserted hospital hallway.


*Thank God you are conscious, I hope you recover quickly* inner Aditya


"Tomorrow Friday, the day after tomorrow I have to go home. Hope the lady's condition improves soon."


For almost an hour Aditya sat down without doing anything, and decided to go into the IGD room again.


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"What have you done sister, I am disappointed in you" said Reyna (Sobbing and hugging her doll)


- Flashback


"Please me, I beg you." Reyna shouted as she tried to release her hand from the senior's grasp


"Lo take it easy I won't hurt you, I just want to show you something about Ivan." Reply Ardhan


"What do you mean?"


Ardhan looked straight ahead again without taking Reyna's question into consideration.


After a few minutes on the way, Reyna is taken down from the car by Ardhan in the yard of a sizable house.


Even Reyna did not know whose house it was, which she definitely felt familiar with.


"Come in, I'll let you go." Ardhan said as he let go of Reyna's hand


Reyna was still wondering what she had experienced, she was forced to follow where the senior was going because of her curiosity with the senior's words.


"Come in..." Ardhan said (By opening the door of the house)


Reyna entered the house hesitantly, she was curious about Ardhan's words but felt fear as well.


*Actually what you're hiding from me, and this senior knows* Reyna's inner self


Ardhan invites Reyna to one of the rooms, making Reyna's heart more worried and afraid.


"Get in, and look inside." Pinta Ardhan (By opening the door of the room and letting Reyna in)


Reyna entered the room, and in front of her eyes was a sweet girl sleeping with her pale face.


"Who is he?"


"And why are you showing him to me?" Ask Reyna


"He's my brother..." Ardhan's words were interrupted


"Ex-lover Ivan." Continuations


Reyna who heard that was shocked and unable to say anything, even she did not know if Ivan had an ex-lover. Which Reyna knows Ivan first dated her.


"Seeing lo's surprised expression, it seems you don't know yet. Did Ivan never tell you?" Ardhan continued while sitting on his sister's bed.


"Don't lie to me, Ivan's first love and first lover is me." Reyna replied with a slight raise of her voice


Reyna looked at the photos in the photo album one by one, clearly visible from their friendly photos if Ivan and Ardhan's sister were in a relationship once.


"Since when have they had a relationship? Ask Reyna


"Since first grade Junior High, my sister's classmate Ardhan. I'm actually one year older than my sister, I'm late for college because for a year my focus was on taking care of my sister. And for that matter in school actually I did that, seeing Ivan who went to university with you. I see from Ivan's attitude to lo, I'm sure you are his lover. Even me and my friends have been monitoring your friends. When Ivan came into class, I knew that he would leave you alone with your friends. And when the lover of one of your friends walks into the crowd to see the announcement without your friend accompanying me, I have a plan to make trouble and pull Ivan out. I'm sure if one of his girlfriend's friends got into trouble he wouldn't stay quiet, I admitted it just to make sure if you really are Ivan's lover and I'm not mistaken. I deliberately kidnapped you, not because I want to hurt you but I want you to know your lover's rottenness." Obviously Ardhan made Reyna drown on the floor.


"What's the matter with Ivan and your brother?" Ask Reyna


"So it all started when my sister went to Junior High with Ivan..."


- Flashback


Entering the first day of school, Ariana prepared with enthusiasm to learn in a new place after releasing her Primary School period.


at the school


"I can't wait to see how my friends are" Ariana said as she walked towards the classroom


When about to enter the classroom Ariana accidentally collided with male students who were about to enter the same classroom with her.


"I'm sorry I didn't mean it." Ariana said (Take the boy's book)


"It's okay." Answer the boy


Ariana and the boy entered the classroom together, they were confused to sit where only two benches remained in the middle of the row.


Ariana walked up to the bench and sat down, while the man was still standing in front of the class.


"Let's go..." Shouted Ariana to the man


The man walked up to Ariana to sit down, and placed his bag next to Ariana's bench.


"Hello, my name is Ariana Clara Liandra. You can call me Riana." Ariana said, extending a hand


"I'm Ivan Nicholas, call me Ivan." Ivan answered while receiving Ariana's hand


Because their benches close together make Ariana and Ivan closer, until the first class of the 2nd semester Ariana felt comfortable with Ivan's warm attitude to him.


Almost every week Ivan approached Ariana to the house to invite her to play.


Until one day Ivan said his side of feeling for Ariana and made Ariana relieved to hear it because his feelings did not clap one hand.


"Rian, do you want to be my lover? Tanya Ivan (Make Ariana who is eating ice cream chokes)


"Slow down, are you okay?" Ivan asked while giving a handkerchief


"I'm fine."


"How did you answer that?"


"Yes, I want to be your lover."


Ariana's answer made Ivan happy, he did not expect even Ariana would be his lover.


Their relationship is running well, and when they are almost 2 years into a relationship unexpected things happen.


- October 12, 20xx


"Darling what do you want to buy?" Ivan asked, holding Ariana's hand


"Mmm, I want to buy some hair accessories."


"Okay, we buy as many as you want."


When walking to enter the mall building, on the right side of the door is made repairs that require mall visitors to pass another entrance from the side of the mall.


When they wanted to take another path, Ivan and Ariana heard a loud noise from above them making them reflect up.


Iron material from the repair project to the right of the entrance, just above Ariana and Ivan stood collapsed down.


"Ivan.. step aside" cried Ariana (By pushing Ivan's body away from the point of fall of the material).


Brakes...


The project employees looked into the circumstances, to make sure there were no casualties from the accident.


Ivan tried to stand up and find where Ariana, how surprised he was when he saw Ariana's right leg hit by the other side of the iron material that fell.


"Ariana!!!" Shouts Ivan


The people who saw it approached and surrounded Ivan and Ariana, they helped so that the iron could be moved and Ariana could be helped.


The Project workers and some people there helped move the iron material, a few minutes it could be moved. Seeing the condition of Ariana's feet are alarming, making many people who saw it could not bear.


After a short time, the ambulance came and took Ariana to the hospital.


One week Ariana was unconscious due to blood loss and underwent a critical period.


Almost 4 months of Ivan and Ariana's relationship is still going well, although Ariana suffered complete paralysis and lost one of her legs.


Until finally in mid-March, their relationship was increasingly tenuous and Ivan often lost news. It made Ariana feel devastated and her situation has worsened to this day.


- Flashback off


Reyna who heard the story of Ivan's past from Ardhan made him shed tears and could not do anything.


Even in the same month, Reyna and Ivan had a love affair.


*So long has Ivan lied to me? Even on the moon he had no news and disappeared, in that month also me and brother Ivan soan* Inner Reyna


It was clear Reyna's face was hit hard, Ardhan could only silently look at her. Until he continues his conversation...


"Now you know why I hate Ivan. If it wasn't for Ariana, Ivan would've run out of my hands. Even when it happened I and my parents couldn't do anything at Ariana's request not to blame Ivan."


Ariana who heard a little noise woke up from her sleep and looked towards Ardhan and Reyna who were crying.


"Sister...What was? And who is he?" Asked Ariana in a limp tone


"He's a friend of brother's, he's here to see you."


"Why are you crying, brother?" Ask Ariana


Reyna tried to hold back her tears from coming out and rubbed her wet cheeks.


"Hi brother, I'm Reyna junior brother Ardhan on campus." Reyna said as she approached Ariana


"I think my sister's classmate, greetings know my name is Ariana. Why are you crying? What did my brother do to you?"


"No brother, it's just that I don't have the heart to see brother. Very pretty girl."


"You can, it's my destiny and I'm willing to accept it."


Ariana's words made Reyna even more sad and regretful. Reyna understands very well that Ariana is a very kind and sincere person.


- Flashback off


"Because of me, brother Ariana suffered alone and endured deep pain."


Reyna continues to blame herself for the incident, she does not know how to deal with Ivan. Reyna knew Ivan loved her but this was not how she wanted, having seen Ariana sacrifice to save Ivan.


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- 03.44-hour


Aditya awakens from his sleep when he sees Keysa still asleep, Aditya pulls out his cell phone and sends a message to Dion...


(Khatsing)


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^^^"Yon, please, at around 7 o'clock, get my clothes at home and bring them home


^^^sick well. Key to my house reserve


^^^there is under the front flower pot of the garage."^^^


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Aditya closes the screen again and puts it on the table next to Keysa's bed. Aditya exits the IGD and walks to the mosque to prepare for prayer.


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