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Chapter 98 Critical

Abi and Faizal return from the doctor's office. The faces of the two of them did not look so good.

“You heard what the doctor said, Abi. If, in these two days Alan is still unconscious it means his condition is in danger. So, what should we do?” ask Faizal.

“So, the only way for us is to do what the doctor advises. We must provide stimuli that can make Alan aware by itself,” said Abi.

“What kind of stimulus? Should we give him stimulant drugs?” ask Faizal.

“Are you crazy? Where's your mind? Already the principal is still thinking strangely. Indeed you want Alan to die quickly because of your stupid idea,” said Abi annoyed.

“Not so, I really do not understand what the doctor meant,” Faizal replied.

“Indeed you didn't hear when the doctor explained it to us?” ask Abi.

“That's it, when the doctor explained that Alan's condition was in danger. My mind wandered out of nowhere and as a result I had absolutely no memory of what the doctor had just said. I just heard the doctor tell us that Alan should get a boost,” Faizal said.

“And your brain is too perverted until you think strangely,” said Abi.

“Then what kind of stimulation does the doctor mean?” ask Faizal.

“The stimulus that the doctor said was with the voice and touch of people who were close to Alan and very dear to him,” Abi replied.

“You mean we have to invite Alan to talk and give touches that can restore his consciousness so?,” asked Faizal.

“Iya, so be it,” replied Abi.

“But, what kind of touch?” ask Faizal.

“Come on, Faiz, stop your perverted brain! Of course the usual touches, like hands and everything else,” replied Abi.

“Oh, kirain more than that, hehehe,” sahut Faizal chuckles with his own stupidity.

“Yes, what do you think? Basic !!” sahut Abi was able to guess the contents of his best friend's head.

“Then that means we have to tell Alan the true condition of Rena and Felisa that Alan is in a critical condition,” Faizal said.

“Iya, that's so. For now everyone should know Alan's true condition in order to help the healing process and Alan can get through this dangerous condition,” Abi said.

“But for sure this news will make them very hit,” Faizal said.

“Sure, but how else? This is the only way we can do to help him through this dangerous condition,” Abi said with tears that began to pool.

“You're right. Hopefully Alan can get through this and be back in our arms,” Faizal said.

“Hopefully, aamiin,” sahut Abi.

***

Father and Reni can not linger in the hospital because the health condition of Rena's father for now is not so good. That is why they went home first without having time to meet Abi and Faizal.

The food that Reni had bought for everyone who was there had not been touched by Rena. He was still thinking about Alan's current condition.

“Bu Rena, eat later Mom is sick,” persuade Felisa.

“Let's go, Feli. I don't want to eat yet,” said Rena.

Before long, Abi and Faizal arrive at Alan's treatment room.

“Kak Abi, Brother Faizal, how?” felisa asked as soon as she saw the arrival of the two of them.

Abi and Faizal tell all they heard from the doctor to Rena and Felisa.

“So now Brother Alan is in critical condition and if in two days he is still unconscious, his condition will be more dangerous,” said Felisa who can no longer stem his tears.

“True, but I'm sure with the support of all of us on his side, Alan can definitely get through this,” Abi said.

“Step, Felisa. We do all the advice from doctors,” Rena added.

Felisa knew the heart of this woman beside her felt the same pain as her. It might even hurt more. How not, when happiness had just approached him he had been wracked by a new trial.

“Feli, Brother Abi, Mr. Faiz, I go in first. I want to accompany Brother Alan inside,” said Rena.

“Iya, Rena, come in. Do the advice given by the doctor. Who knows with a special touch from his future wife can resuscitate Alan,” Faizal said.

“Special touch? Meaning?” asked Rena confused.

“Faiz...,” scolds Abi because she can already guess the direction of Faizal's conversation.

“If it's already inside you surely know what it means,” Faizal said teasingly.

Rena began to understand the direction Faizal meant. But he doesn't really care about it. For him now all he wants is to see Alan's condition improve immediately and he will try his best to awaken Alan's consciousness.

“Please Bu Rena,” said Felisa Lirih.

Abi crouched nearby. Look inside the woman who is sitting in front of him.

“Felisa, I'm sorry. I can't keep my promise to take good care of your brother until now he has to bet his life in that room,” he said.

“Kak Abi said what the hell? Feli has heard all the stories from Bu Rena that Kak Abi has fought with all the body of Kak Abi to protect Kak Alan. Even yesterday, Feli saw for himself Kak Abi's clothes were filled with many blood stains because he was holding Kak Alan. Although in the end the condition of Brother Alan is not as good as we expect. But, Feli is really grateful for all the help that Abi Kak gave,” said Feli sincerely.

“Ehem, I think there is a mosquito repellent... Yes already, if you'll excuse me. I'll call Kanjeng Mimi first. Want to tell him if tonight, I stay here,” Faizal said.

***

Rena was transfixed to see the helpless Alan. Tears were back on her cheeks. He held Alan's hand, then placed it on his white cheek.

“Sir Alan, wake up! We all want to see Alan's brother healed. If Alan doesn't wake up what about our wedding plans? Didn't Brother Alan say that Brother Alan loves me. Prove it! Wake up, Alan, please. Don't leave me,” said Renaissance sobbing.

“Sister, I may have never said this to you and now I will tell Sis that I love you. I don't want to lose you,”

Rena's tears kept flowing down her cheeks, repeatedly mentioning Alan's name and hoping Alan would wake up from his sleep. However, it seems that Rena's efforts this time were in vain. Alan was still unmoved until fatigue approached Rena's body and invited her to dreamland.

“Kak Alan's..Brother Alan..,” call someone.

“Goddess,” greet Alan on the figure who had earlier called him.

“Finally you came here too. Come, come with me!” bring Goddess.

“Where?” ask Alan.

“Ke a very beautiful place. A place where there is only peace and quiet. There too our children have been waiting for you,” said Dewi.

“Our son?” alan asked confused.

“Yes, I remember you, right? The child I brought went with me,” said Dewi revealed her sweet smile.

“Alright,” replied Alan.

“Kak Alan, wait!” someone shouted from a distance.

“Rena,” says Alan.

“Sir Alan, please stay here. Don't leave! Don't leave me,” said Renaissance sobbing.

“Rena, but..” says Alan hangs.

“Rena, please don't be like that! Let Brother Alan come with me. Let him see his son,” said Dewi.

“No, Goddess no. I'm not gonna let it go for you anymore. Enough, that time alone I ever let go of him and stay away from him for you. But, now it's not. You can no longer keep him away from me,” said Rena in a high tone, but sounded claustrophobic.

Her tears kept flowing down her cheeks. Looking at Alan who was still silent did not budge.

“Dad... Father...,” the voice of a little boy calls Alan.

“Listen, Brother Alan, our son calls you,” said Dewi.

“Sorry, Rena. ,” says Alan.

***

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