LEGEND OF THE GOD OF WAR

ANNOUNCEMENTS

Assalamualikum w.r.w.b

My name is Ulfy suryajana or often called Kang Bobon, I am the brother of the Baron author of this novel, he said, For some reason Baron could no longer write novels because after he fell ill Baron missed a lot of school lessons, so yesterday the headmaster came to the house asking Baron following the lesson at least 50% already he understood, so yesterday the headmaster came to the house asking Baron following the lesson at least 50% already he understood, so now he is studying because if he does not meet the requirements he is forced to study in the next year.

There are some things that Bobon wants to convey to loyal readers also about this novel plot changed or not.

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Bobon is actually very surprised Baron turns out to write a Fantasy novel, Honest Bobon personally not too can if the novel Fantasy, because Bobon usually writes children's fairy tales that are 100% Fantasy World, because Bobon usually writes children's fairy tales, so maybe Baron likes to read Bobon's stories and he also wants to be a fantasy writer like Bobon.

Bobon's point of view on the Plot Novel "LEGEND OF THE GOD OF WAR" Actually very well laid out, But because Baron is also in the process of learning, material baron is still immature and his experience is still lacking, Maybe the purpose of him making this novel is also actually he is looking for experience.it can be seen when you try to reread from the top, The writing is getting lower, the writing is getting lower, it gets more and more disheveled as Baron tries to implement something new like the implementation of tag dialogs, expressions, and diction.

Actually applying Diction in the middle of a novel that was not a lot of literary words will be very influential, the plot of a previously quiet story even becomes bumpy and broken, making this novel very long-winded.

A. REVISIONS

1. Venue background

Baron wrote in Prologue about 6 lands, should Baron not use other worlds because his own world is very broad. If according to Bobon why the Baron did not move the Protagonist to the most remote land like somewhere in the North than to an obscure world like the Ice World. There he had missteps because he had made it even more complicated to understand.

2.Expertise

The protagonist is already very strong, plus he has the talent to be an alchemist, but the Baron instead forces the Protagonist to become a Chef as well, It becomes insignificant according to Bobon, The Baron makes the Protagonist multi-Talented but he really doesn't understand the "Process" theory."

It was very clear that the Baron recounted the Protagonist's Process of becoming an alchemist and becoming increasingly powerful, but as the Baron made the Protagonist a Chef, concocted herbs, searched for spices etc.. The Baron did not recount the process in detail, he only mentioned the Protagonist learned from his mother, Do you believe?? Of course believe because the protagonist is also the son of a hunter whose mother is certainly very reliable in terms of cooking meat.

The question here is, Can an 8-year-old want to be taught how to cook?

Here it appears that the Baron considers this as a transparent thing that is not widely realized, it turns out oh it turns out... Cooking is not an easy thing because it takes years to understand it all, the protagonist is very reliable in cooking when he is still 8 years old, that might happen if the story is like the novel Legend of the Dragon Warrior or After the and which tells the story of the old man who returned to the past.

In conclusion, According to Bobon, the baron should have made the protagonist not very skilled in all things including cooking, He should have made Sahran only understand a small part of the gastronomy so that the story can develop.

3.The protagonist's power

Bobon was very disappointed with this third point, Why? Because the Baron made the protagonist seem to understand everything, want it to learn the skill, learn alchemists, or raise a sword; everything looks like Cheat.

The beginning of the baron makes the protagonist have a mainstay style, whether it's the legacy of his father or the gift of his teacher is certain from the beginning of the story to the end, whether it's his father's legacy, the protagonist has one style that is not too strong and not too weak but always saves the Protagonist in various situations.

But the baron instead makes the protagonist like a Beggo, because he never uses the style given by his teacher instead uses a style that is not clear of its origin.

B. REPAIR

For various reasons Bobon may only improve and not change the storyline, Bobon will only improve from Chapter 78 only, What will be improved?

1.The protagonist wakes up.

Bobon will change the place when the protagonist wakes up in an unfamiliar place, Bobon will take the protagonist to an arid remote land by not changing most of the scene.

2.Personage

Bobon would change the nickname "Self-Defender" to "Immortal" (Each land is different in its name). Because the protagonist is not on the same land but he is on a foreign land far from the mainland.

The Bobon will also transform the inner power into "Magical power"

The Elemental Power becomes the "Spirit of instruments"

Etc...

Actually Bobon wants to make the protagonist like just starting his journey, and all the things in the previous chapter will make Bobon like the Protagonist's past, So here Bobon will make a new Antagonist.

Triragonists such as "Zhuge Feng, Zhilong, Ryukei, and Osamu" will be reinvented with new characters such as Osamu being the most powerful person and Ryukei being the mysterious person.

3. Female protagonist

The most prominent thing in a novel is the presence of a female protagonist, It will make the novel come to life, This is indeed not a fantasy romance but It does not mean the Author should not slip the Romance story in the story, it is not a fantasy romance, Bobon plans to make the two protagonists love each other gradually as their struggles become stronger their feelings also get stronger.

So far the Baron does not present a female protagonist even though this is quite significant, specifically the Baron focuses on male protagonists alone which makes no Ciwi-ciwi read this novel :v

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Maybe just this for a while, the rest of Bobon will add a few things while repairing, he said, So Bobon asked for a week or two and after that Bobon hoped you would reread Chapter 75 to understand the story.

Greetings from Baron and Bobon, greetings and see you a week later...

Wassalamualaikum.l.w.b....