God's Mistake

Chapter 1: Mistakes

Millions of years after the Gods created the first man, they infused chakra in his body, setting a limit so that every human could not control it to the brain.

A few years after the creation of the first man.....

"Why do we plant in his body.Look what will happen, one of them will be there that passes through the boundaries of Cakra" said one of the Gods named HAKU, who is also known as Haku, actually, he was very happy if there was someone who could cross his boundaries.

"Just be calm, if there is any we just have to kill him" replied the leader of the Gods.

Haku is a God who has a different purpose than the 4 other Gods.he always does his duty as a god, he cannot fight and is not strong enough to fight them. But he believes that one human being will be able to cross the boundaries of the chakra, tomorrow or even for millions of years to come.

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After Haku waited millions of years

In an orphanage far from the city, they lived peacefully. Laughing, joking, and singing, they were so happy. There were 20 children there and 3 caregivers, whom they called Mami.

"Mommy if I grow up, can I be like Sam?" ask a 2-year-old boy, with his serious face.

Sam is the oldest in the orphanage, he is going to the city to do his duty as a teenager.

Mami replied with her chuckle, "You will definitely go there Sachi". He was very happy to run while jumping up and down and crying. The name of the child is Sachi, the careless child who wants to always be loved by Mami.

God made the rules, every teenager when he was 15 years old had to enter a competition where every child had to pass through several obstacles. Amongst them

Each child must survive for 7 days in the forest, with some rules.

Every child must make the right decision, (all children can answer it).

Each child must fight one on one until the remaining 2 people.

Who can survive it is said they can meet with the Gods, and become his subordinates.

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Sachi is now 5 years old, since birth he has a genetic disorder. No one knows the cause, in his chest there is also a scar like the X sign, it is not wide but it is strange because since the baby has been around. Her parents are unknown, but the villagers say her parents want to find out the truth about this world. The villagers thought their families were crazy.

Sachi never thought about his parents, probably because he was too small. She was so affectionate with her family in the orphanage, that she who was a child looked wiser than the older one. He once said, "all of you will be protected stay here, let me do everything". They all laughed at Sachi's words, but with his age, he was very sure of it.

Every 5-year-old child, the Mami will teach you how to control the chakras. Once they are taught, they can run faster, hit stronger, and their vision gets sharper.

One day Sachi, Menma, and popo are called mami to the courtyard. They marched and faced the direction of the mami, they already knew that today would be taught how to control the chakras. His other friends saw them from the 2nd floor, every year this is always in later - later by them.

"Good mami" they said simultaneously.

"First close your eyes" tell Ms. Ren.

They close their eyes

"Feel in the middle of your chest, there is something very warm" Ren continued.

Sachi was surprised, and opened his eyes. He felt a very hot heat, unlike what he said.

"haaaa haaaa haaaa haaaa" Sachi was like exhausted.

"Sachi why?" mami Ren asked in shock.

"Mommy what you told me was too hot, I could die" he said, rearranging his breathing.

Mami Ren was astonished, for so many years she had never seen that incident. Because feeling the chakra is very comfortable, and calm. It feels like there is life in our bodies. Thought it.

Menma and popo still close their eyes, they feel like Ren's mom.

"Mommy why are they surviving"? Ask Sachi.

"Let's do it one more time Sachi". Mami replied with a smile reassuring Sachi.

"Okay, this time I'll see". Sachi said sure

Actually mommy is still curious why can, a child in pain feel the chakra.

Sachi closed his eyes, slowly feeling the chakra in the middle of his chest. This time he was not surprised, his eyes closed firmly, as if enduring pain.

Seeing Sachi like that my mother continued her orders.

"Kids after you feel something in the middle of your chest spread that feeling throughout your body" Ren said

Sachi with his pain in mind, he spread the feeling throughout the body. Slowly he began to lose his chest pain, and moved to the head just above the eyes.

Then he fainted, unconscious.

Menma and popo are forced to stop by mami, after seeing Sachi fall. The other friends go down and see Sachi. They're all worried.

Thank you for reading my first novel, sorry if there is a wrong or confusing word. This story comes from the brain and hands in action. Sorry once again if the reader has difficulty digesting it. follow along so you understand the story. Arigato.