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Subtle creature

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Riana is a 17-year-old girl.

Riana has a special ability that is able to see subtle creatures or known as indigo children, she has been able to see supernatural beings since she was still in the womb, Riana is very depressed about it that makes her feel uncomfortable or disturbed by the presence of these creatures. and one night Riana just came home from her friend's house that is not so far away, from her home, but the place is arguably very haunted.

people called the place "a haven of subtle creatures, and a hell for humans"

but according to Riana it was not too scary because she could already see such things, so for what fear the thought that appeared in Riana's mind.

Riana paved a very dark road, passing through oil palm plantations, which are haunted because there are kuntilanak hanging there.

but Riana did not feel that there were any subtle creatures there in the palm oil garden, there was no strange aura that enveloped the place, and the air was called very capable, and there was no walking in that place.

"it's strange people say there are subtle creatures here but I don't feel anything, there's not even a sign of them here" Riana said as she walked through the garden, and also his two eyes that continue to look towards the palm tree.

after passing through oil palm plantations, Riana also met with TPU to train.

"aish it's getting late I have to go home quickly, must be very anxious mom waiting for me to come home." exclaimed Riana as she added the speed of her footsteps.

Riana continued walking and finally she arrived at her doorstep and knocked on the door.

"buk Riana came home, keep the door dong buk." call Riana while knocking on the door made of wood.

Riana seemed to have a bad feeling, she felt that there was a gripping aura that followed her from earlier, after passing through a cempaka alley.

Riana had guessed from the beginning of the entrance of the alley, there must be a waiter there, because she was like listening to strange whispers, and negative air from the alley.

Riana felt that strange thing ever since entering the alley, and she felt that the negative aura was following up at the entrance of her house.

"buk bukain his door dong." Riana kept knocking on the door hard.

"iya Riana, the door should not be gedor-gedor that way." upset mother from inside and pointed towards the door to open her.

Riana entered the house in a hurry, and closed the door as quickly as possible so that the creature that followed her had not entered the house what else disturbed her parents.

after Riana entered the house, strong winds began to blow and the rain that fell with a rush and the sound of a very powerful lightning strike.

I don't know what happened to the weather that night.

as it is not rain can, not wanting to think hard Riana decided to go into her room and also clean her body and sleep.

the rain did not stop even getting heavier, and making Riana unable to sleep well that night, Riana took a pillow beside her right and covered her face and only one thought Riana.

"quick sleep Riana tomorrow you have to take the class exam." said Riana while trying to sleep, and as a result Riana was also unable to sleep, even her eyes increasingly wanted to open all night.

until midnight, about one in the morning,

the sound of the wind was like crossing her room, and that made Riana astonished.

"how the wind can enter my room, when I do not open the window or door, and I also do not blame the fan." it makes Riana surprised and increasingly unable to sleep.

pringgggg, who goes into the kitchen these nights, can not mother right?!, mother has slept from nine o'clock in the night. Riana said in her heart while walking towards the kitchen.

and suddenly all the lights in her house went off, and the room was very, very dark, and Riana took the phone to her pants and turned on the flashlight on her phone.

TAP TAP TAP, Riana continued to tread carefully so as not to cause sound, and when she got in the kitchen.

BRuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, like a figure passing in front of him.

"who is it." riana said. Riana tried not to be afraid.

there is no...................... silent........wind blows slowly but very frightening.........

and make Riana's hair stand up.........

"what do you want, why do you disturb my family, I beg you to leave here" Riana told the creature, the creature kept circling in front of Riana.......

the creature strangled Riana's neck until it made Riana's legs and Riana's body float in the air......................

"let me go. What are you doing. If you need my help, I'm willing to help you, but if I can." riana said to the creature while trying to escape from the creature's strangulation.

"what really, do you want to help me?." asked the creature while lowering Riana's body to the floor and slowly releasing the indentation.

"yes, but if I can do it" said Riana, with a hoarse voice as a result of the creature's strangulation.

"can you help me find my son's whereabouts."

said the creature while changing its form to be not creepy.

"how are your son's traits?and is he a boy or a girl?" ask Riana

"huhhh, her name is rifal she is nine years old, she is white and has blonde hair" the creature said.

"i'll investigate, but you have to promise that if your child is found, you have to leave quietly" Riana told the creature

the creature that resembled the woman was immediately removed from Riana's sight, Riana was finally able to breathe with relief.

Riana returned to her room and tried to sleep.

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