ADORE YOU'S

Episode 7's

The school was still very quiet, only a few boys from the basketball club were seen running around the basketball court next to the canteen. Other students may not have come because school activities will still last more than an hour.

This morning Naomi came early to the dance room to practice a new movement a few days taught by Teacher Kim. Not wanting the previous event to repeat itself, Naomi wants to train harder so as not to

disappointing Teacher Kim and impacting his other friends. Only a few months left until the time of the international dance championship, his last chance as an ace at this school.

He went straight to the locker room in the middle building, an extracurricular building adjacent to the canteen between the High School building and the Arts Campus.

“What is this?” ask Naomi who saw a piece of blue paper tucked in her locker

‘This morning who put the paper here?’ ask her in your heart.

Slowly open the paper..

“Wow.. so diligent, so early this has come.”

The male voice surprised Naomi, quickly hiding the paper in her red jacket pocket.

“Oh.. Vishnu.. Good morning, tumben is here? You're also going to use the dance room?” ask Naomi who can't hide her shock

The man named Vishnu walked straight to his locker which was right in front of Naomi's locker.

“No.. no. I just want to get my jacket that's left behind. You want to practice this early?”

“Emm.. You know, right. I have a lot to practice, Teacher Kim will not forgive me if I make a mistake again. Honestly I'm scared.” Answer Naomi

“If I could, I would definitely accompany you to practice now. But unfortunately I had to hurry to copy the math task that I had not had time to do yesterday. I'm sorry.” Says Vishnu who is pouting

“Hei.. You don't need to apologize.” Reply Naomi while gently hitting Vishnu's arm while

“Then I go to class first, yes. Spirit, Naomi!” pamit Vishnu

Naomi smiled as she waved her hand at the man.

After making sure no one else was around, Naomi took the paper she slipped into her jacket and read it to her heart,

　

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Falling petals

No one reaches their hand With a cold smile, like mixed with sadness Slowly falling

As the window blows Slowly falling

Where the fallen heart goes is at least warmer than here

Enduring the summer, Getting wet with light rain

Never thought I would want to fall for someone

I was living instantly but I met you, and I realized that everything has a reason

 I’m falling to you I want to see you right now

Someday you might be in my heart...

I am a flower I am a flower

I’ll bloom a beautiful flower

 I will always believe in you

Now I’m Fallin’ Fallin’ Fallin’ Fallin’ Fallin’ Fallin’

I am a flower I am a flower

Now I’m Fallin’ Fallin’ Fallin’ Fallin’ Fallin’ Fallin’

When you call me I’m Fallin’ to your warm arm

Obscure future becomes clear as I meet you Slowly falling

As the window blows Slowly falling

Where the fallen heart goes was the happiest in the world

Gazing the blue sky Blooming again

I want to be someone’s everything

I was living instantly but I met you, and I realized that everything has a reason...

While flower blooms and falls scars cure and buds shoot

 We are living our first and last moment

So I won’t take you for granted

Because you loved me as I am

*Seventeen - Falling Flower

　

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“Good morning, all. Please remove the package book of eighty-nine pages. We will discuss about novels and stories.” Said Bu Dewi, Indonesian teacher upon arrival in class

“Echa, please read up to page ninety-one. Others please be listened to. Please.” Said him again

Echa stood up while tidying her long hair tied back, then began to read according to the orders of the Goddess.

"TEXT STORY OR HISTORICAL NOVEL

1. Understanding the History Novel

A historical novel is a novel in which it is explained and

telling about the facts of past events that became the origin or

background of the occurrence of something that has historical value, can

is narrative or descriptive, and is presented with the imaginary power of knowledge

extensive from the author.

2. Structure Text Stories/History Novels

a. Introduction of the story situation (exposition, orientation)

In this section, the author introduces the background of the story both time, place and event. In addition, orientation can also be presented by introducing the characters, arranging scenes, and relationships between characters.

b. Disclosure of events

In this section is presented the initial events that cause various problems, conflicts, or difficulties for the characters.

c. Towards conflict (rising action)

There is an increase in attention to excitement, excitement, or involvement of various situations that cause increasing difficulty of the character

d. Peak conflict (turning point, complications)

This section is also called the climax. This is the biggest and most exciting part of the story. In this section also, the determination of the change in the fate of some of his figures. For example, whether he later managed to solve his problem or failed.

e. Settlement (Evaluation, resolution)

As the end of the story, in this section contains an explanation or assessment of the attitude or fate experienced by the character after experiencing the peak event. In this section it is often stated

the ultimate form of the condition or the ultimate fate experienced by the main character.

f. Tee

This section is in the form of a comment on the overall content of the story, which functions as a closing. Comments in question can be delivered directly by the author or by representing it to a character. It's just that not every novel has a code, even more modern novels give up

the final conclusion of the story is to the readers. They were left to second-guess their own story.

3. The Lahasaan History Novels

Some features of the historical novel are as follows

a. Using many past meaningful sentences

Example: The soldiers who had been ordered to clean the former dormitory building had completed their task.

b. Many use words that state the order of time (chronological, temporal conjunction), such as: from then on, after that, first, then.

Example: After the wrestling champion left, the Duke got up and walked quietly into the Duchy.

c. Many use verbs that describe an action (material verb).

EXEMPLAR:

1). In front of the standing Queen Bixuni Gayatri, Sri Gitarja sat down.

2). When the Queen Mother cried who infected anyone to cry, Dyah Wiyat shed no tears at all.

d. Many use verbs that indicate indirect sentences as a way of telling the speech of a character by the author. For example, saying that, telling about, according to disclosing, asking, stating, saying.

EXEMPLAR:

!). According to the Patih, Galeng had checked the entire room of Syahbandar and he had seen many bottles and objects that he did not know his name and use.

2). Riung Samudera stated that he was still confused by all

galih's saggy explanation of the problem.

e. Many use verbs that state something thought or felt by a character (mental verb). For example, feeling, wanting, expecting, craving, assuming.

Example:

1). Gajah Mada agrees with Senopati Gajah Enggon's Way of Mind.

2). Seeing that, no one refused because everyone thought that Patih Gajah Mada was indeed capable and worthy of being in place

f. Use a lot of dialogue. This is indicated by a double quotation mark (‘..”) and a verb indicating direct utterance.

Example:

“Where is the letter?”

“Ampun, Gusti Adipati, Patik is afraid then Patik bakar.”

g. Using adjectives (descriptive language) to describe a character, place, or atmosphere

Examples

some soldiers have to recognize the authority that Gajah Mada has far more

great from Jayanegara authority. Sri Jayanegara can still be invited to joke, but

not with Patih Gajah Mada, the owner of a very frozen face.

3. Creating a History Novel

The steps to compiling a historical novel are as follows.

a. Determine the historical events that will be the storytelling material

The first step in composing a person's or self's historical novel

itself is to determine the historical events (events that occur in time

it will be developed into a historical novel.

In the historical novel, the author recounts events that

experienced by the characters using the background of historical events. Writing a novel

history means to pack historical facts with the author's designs. Its form can

in the form of events related to the lives of many people or the lives of someone.”

　

 “Naomi, please give an example Using adjectives (descriptive language) to describe a figure, place, or atmosphere.” The order of the Goddess Mother suddenly to Naomi who was from earlier was very unfocused.

Echa who has not finished reading directly looked at his friend. The whole compact class looked towards Naomi. Naomi who had been daydreaming was shocked and clearly looked very confused.

“Emm. an example using adjectives..” Naomi was silent for a long while while occasionally glancing towards Echa

Echa who had sat back on her bench muttered softly but still did not sound clear.

“You didn't listen?” tanya Miss Dewi is short but sounds very scary

“Ma-sorry.. Ma'am.” replied Naomi was afraid

“Please stand outside the classroom until my lesson is over. Others, if anyone wants to follow please

out now. We continue next page.”

‘For thinking about the letter, I couldn't focus.’ Inner Naomi while out of class with face down.

Naomi who stood her back to her classroom while playing her legs was shocked half in panic, when a figure

the one he recognized walked closer.

“Jeez, that's Jeff's brother. What if he sees me like this?” naomi whispered that was confused because of Jeff

walk closer towards her with both hands put into her black hoodie.

Naomi then turned to face the wall, minimizing the possibility that Jeff would see her. Jeff passed by, Naomi knew from the shadow that was seen crossing the floor when Naomi lowered her head.

“Support only.” Naomi said softly as she turned her back to the wall again.

“It turns out to be you, what are you doing there?” jeff asked casually while leaning his body on the border

second floor

Naomi was shocked, it turns out Jeff has not gone from there, Jeff walked closer to Naomi and now instead

stop right in front of Naomi.

Naomi lowered her head silently, as if she had not heard that Jeff was talking to her. The increasingly curious Jeff asked once again in a rather loud voice.

“Hey, What are you doing here?”

“Ehemmm.. The ones outside please don't be noisy.” The Indonesian teacher said in a loud voice

so that Naomi reflexes lowered her head, while pulling Jeff's hand to come down.

“You punished?” ask Jeff again, holding back from laughing

Naomi just nodded slowly, her face pouting while hugging her knees

“I'm ashamed to see Jeff's brother in this state.” Naomi said half whispered

Jeff half-dead held back his laughter, so cute this girl, he thought.

“Why were you punished? You didn't sleep in class, did you?” ask Jeff again but this time it's slower

“No.. no. It's a long story, brother. Oh, aye. Where's Jeff going? Why is it in SMA building?”

Jeff patted his forehead slowly, “Gosh, I forgot. I need to see Daniel now. Her cell phone was switched

with mine in the car. I'm leaving first, Naomi.” Jeff said slowly while walking squat.

“Sister Jeff..” call Naomi slowly but can still be heard by Jeff

“Why? Sorry I'm in a hurry now. If there's anything to talk about, then after school.”

“I just want to say, no need to walk squat like that, you can walk as usual.” Yakap

Naomi laughed a little.

Jeff immediately stood up and was silent for a moment, then walked a bit quickly away from Naomi.

Naomi giggles in her place.

***

Vishnu approached Naomi who was at the second table from behind just after the math teacher came out

classs.

“Naomi, are you okay?” vishnu asked Naomi who was cleaning things on her desk

“Hmm? I'm it's okay. Why?” his answer to Vishnu, his hands are still busy tidying up the items and books scattered on the table and in the drawer.

“Yah.. only this time I saw you not focused, even to the point of being punished by Madam Dewi. You got a problem?”

ask her for attention

“Ehemmm. Excuse me, there are still people here, yes. If you want to flirting please excuse me, later if I'm gone, okay!” echa said sok ferak

From the beginning Echa did not like Vishnu too much, when asked by Naomi, Echa only replied, nothing

special reason, just not just like to see Vishnu around Naomi.

“Sorry, I'll be leaving soon. Naomi, I'm waiting in the dance room, yes.” Vishnu said to Naomi who was greeted with

nods and sweet smiles

“If you can, anyway. Don't get in touch with her.” Echa said to the point shortly after Vishnu disappeared

from behind the door

Naomi, who was confused by Echa's words, turned to face her best friend.

“Don't ask anything, please don't.” Connect Echa again

“I haven't asked anything.” Naomi said plain

“already, let's take you to the dance room. You have practice today, right? While you practice I'll be waiting for you

in canteen.”

Naomi nodded in agreement.

***

Several times Jeff saw her in and out of the dance room, but only this time he saw her with my own eyes, the girl who had always looked cute and cheerful, turned into a serious girl, cool and

it was amazing when she started dancing. With black tight trousers, a khaki-colored crop top that showed her thin waist, as well as white shoes and hair tied back, she turned into a different Naomi. Graceful, elegant, mysterious yet vibrant looking. The sound of music

pounding and energetic dance makes the dance classroom seem to freeze.

All eyes are there, of course not just Jeff and his friends who accidentally pass and stop because the sound of music that resonates from there is fixed on Naomi. His friends who

being in dance class was so silent when Naomi started dancing. His body seemed very light, difficult movements became very easy when he saw him perform the dance movements.

“Wow..she is truly amazing.” Jeff said softly but apparently heard by someone next to him

“She's my friend.” He whispered in Jeff's ear

Jeff who was shocked suddenly moved slightly away from the long-haired, pony girl who was tied back while folding both hands in front of the chest. He looked at Jeff with a smile.

“You didn't dance?” she whispers a little to the girl who turns out to be Echa, Naomi's best friend.

He crossed his arms, formed the letter X and shook his head with all his might until the hair tie he was wearing sagged.

“I'm not good at dancing, rather than face to face with gur Kim, I better retire early.” Answer Echa while whispering as well

Jeff just nodded slowly but his eyes were still fixed on Naomi whose body was winding following the music.

“You've fallen in love with Naomi?” ask Echa suddenly

Jeff's pupils widened, not daring to stare at the girl.

“Ke-why are you asking like that?” her word stammered

She shrugged indifferently, “Who knows. As you can see, almost all the men who are here, watching Naomi dance, they all like her.” His words pointed to the men who were crowding the dance hall with the brown sticks he had just removed from the pockets of his red plaid skirt.

Jeff breathed a sigh of relief, “I thought you knew.”

“Hmm? Brother Jeff talk something?”

“I? No.. don't talk anything.”

“What's up, what's up?” tanya Made who appears out of nowhere to the middle of Jeff and Echa

Echa pointed at Naomi who was still dancing in the middle of the dance room with her brown sticks that were already short, almost exhausted.

Made's mouth formed the letter O while glancing at Jeff. Made made a heartbeat gesture with his hands while playing his eyebrows. Jeff knew he would make fun of her when they were alone.

“Eh, Yohan where?” jeff asked Made, who was busy fighting over chocolate sticks with Echa

Made pointed towards the front, in the direction of where he stood with his chin.

“Yohan takes dance classes?” ask Jeff who had been completely ignored by Made and Echa.